diff --git a/act/20/09.md b/act/20/09.md index 09b0efccb8..082550a7a3 100644 --- a/act/20/09.md +++ b/act/20/09.md @@ -4,15 +4,15 @@ This was an opening in the wall with a ledge that was wide enough on which a per # Eutychus -This is the name of a man. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/translate-names]]) +This is the name of a man. # who fell into a deep sleep -This speaks about sleep as if it were a deep hole into which a person could fall. Alternate translation: "who slept soundly" or "who became more and more tired until finally he was sleeping soundly" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metaphor]]) +"who slept soundly" or "who became more and more tired until finally he was sleeping soundly" # third story and was picked up dead -When they went down to check his condition, they saw he was dead. This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "third story; and when they went to pick him up, they found that he was dead" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-activepassive]]) +"third story; and when they went to pick him up, they found that he was dead" # third story