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 #### Outline of 2 Kings ####
 
-1. The deeds of the prophets Elijah and Elisha in the two kingdoms of Judah and Israel
+1. The prophets Elijah and Elisha (1:1-8:15)
      - Elijah brings Yahweh's judgment onto King Ahaziah (1:1–18)
-     - Elijah goes to heaven, and Elisha replaces him as the main prophet (2:1–25)
+     - Elijah goes to heaven and Elisha replaces him (2:1–25)
      - Elisha defends the northern kingdom against Moab (3:1–27)
      - Elisha performs various miracles (4:1–44)
-     - Elisha heal Naaman, the Syrian (5:1–27)
+     - Elisha heals Naaman the Syrian (5:1–27)
      - Elisha acts in time of war against Syria (6:1–7:20)
      - Elisha's reputation and prophecy about Hazael (8:1–15)
-1. The history of Judah and Israel from the time of Kings Jehoram and Joram to the fall of Israel (8:16–17:41)
+1. The history of Judah and Israel from Kings Jehoram and Joram to the fall of Israel (8:16–17:41)
-1. The history of Judah from the time of King Hezekiah to its fall (18–25)
+1. The history of Judah from King Hezekiah to the fall of Judah (18:1–25:30)
  
 #### What are the Books of 1 and 2 Kings about? ####
 
-These books are about the history of the people of Israel from the time of King Solomon to the time of the destruction of both the northern and southern kingdoms. These books describe how Israel split into two kingdoms after Solomon dies. It also tells about the various kings that ruled over each kingdom. 
+These books are about what happened to the people of Israel, from the time of King Solomon to the time both the northern and southern kingdoms were destroyed. These books describe how Israel split into two kingdoms after Solomon died. It also tells about all the kings that ruled over each kingdom after Solomon died.
 
-There were some good kings in the southern kingdom that pleased God. One such king was Josiah. He repaired the temple and reformed the worship of Yahweh. His actions were in response to the rediscovery of a copy of the Law of Yahweh in Jerusalem (See: [2 Kings 22–23](../../2ki/22/01.md)). However, all of the kings of the northern kingdom were wicked.
+In the southern kingdom, some kings did what Yahweh judged to be right. One such King Josiah repaired the temple and reformed the worship of Yahweh. He responded to the high priest finding a copy of the Law of Yahweh in Jerusalem (See: [2 Kings 22–23](../../2ki/22/01.md)). However, all of the kings of the northern kingdom were wicked.
 
-The northern kingdom was destroyed by the Assyrians in 722 BC. The southern kingdom was destroyed by the Babylonians in 586 BC. 
+The Assyrians destroyed the northern kingdom in 722 B.C. The Babylonians destroyed the southern kingdom in 586 B.C. 
 
 #### How should the title of this book be translated? ####
  
-The Books of 1 and 2 Kings were originally one book in Hebrew but were separated into two books when they were translated in Greek. Translators might choose to create a more meaningful title such as "The First Book about the Kings" and "The Second Book about the Kings."
+The Books of 1 and 2 Kings were originally one book in Hebrew. They were separated into two books when translated into Greek. Translators might choose more meaningful titles such as "The First Book about the Kings" and "The Second Book about the Kings."
 
 ## Part 2: Important Religious and Cultural Concepts ##
 
-#### What is the religious purpose of 1 and 2 Kings? ####
+#### What is the purpose of 1 and 2 Kings? ####
 
-These books were probably written during the exile, after the temple had been destroyed by the Babylonians. The writer may have wanted to explain why the Jews were in exile and how they could continue to worship Yahweh without performing temple sacrifices.
+These books were probably finished during the exile, after the Babylonians had destroyed the temple. They show how being faithful to Yahweh results in his blessing and prospering his people. Worshipping idols and not being faithful result in their being punished and destroyed.
 
 ## Part 3: Important Translation Issues ##
 
 #### Why do the Books of 1 and 2 Kings refer to someone being addressed indirectly? ####
 
-In the Bible, people often referred to themselves as "your servant" when speaking to anyone in a superior position to themselves. For example, David frequently called himself "your servant" when he spoke to King Saul. He also called Saul "my master." This type of indirect reference was intended to show honor to the one addressed. English sometimes uses the address "sir" in this way. But a translator should use whatever expressions that are natural in the project language in order to honor someone in a superior position.
+In the Bible, people often referred to themselves as "your servant" when speaking to anyone in a superior position to themselves. Indirectly addressing people in this way was intended to honor the one addressed. English sometimes uses the address "sir" in this way. But a translator should use whatever expressions that are natural in the project language in order to honor someone in a superior position.
 
 #### What does the king "did what was right (or) evil in the eyes of Yahweh" mean? ####
 
-This kind of expression is repeated throughout the Books of 1 and 2 Kings. Here "in the eyes of Yahweh" represents what Yahweh thinks about someone. If a king was faithful and obeyed the covenant, he did what was right according to Yahweh. If he was not faithful and disobeyed the covenant, he did what was evil according to Yahweh.
+The writer repeats this kind of expression throughout the Books of 1 and 2 Kings. Here "in the eyes of Yahweh" represents what Yahweh thinks about someone. If a king was faithful and obeyed the covenant, he did what was right according to Yahweh. If he was not faithful and disobeyed the covenant, he did what was evil according to Yahweh.
 
 #### What is the meaning of the term "Israel"? ####
 
-The name "Israel" is used in many different ways in the Bible. There was a man named Jacob. God changed his name to Israel. The descendants of Jacob became a nation also called Israel. Eventually, the nation of Israel split into two kingdoms. The northern kingdom was named Israel. The southern kingdom was named Judah. (See: [[rc://en/tw/dict/bible/kt/israel]])
+The name "Israel" is used in many different ways in the Bible. Jacob was the son of Isaac. God changed Jacob's name to Israel. The descendants of Jacob became a nation also called Israel. Eventually, the nation of Israel split into two kingdoms. The northern kingdom was named Israel. The southern kingdom was named Judah. (See: [[rc://en/tw/dict/bible/kt/israel]])
 
 #### What does the phrase "to this day" mean? ####
 
-This phrase was used by the narrator to refer to the time when he was writing. The translator should be aware that "to this day" refers to a time which has already passed. The translator might decide to say, "to this day, at the time when this is being written," or, "to this day, at the time of writing." This Hebrew phrase occurs in 2 Kings 2:22; 8:22; 10:27; 14:7; 16:6; 17:23, 34, 41.
+This phrase was used by the narrator to refer to the time when he was writing. The translator should be aware that "to this day" refers to a time already passed. The translator might decide to say, "to this day, at the time when this is being written," or, "to this day, at the time of writing." This Hebrew phrase occurs in 2 Kings 2:22; 8:22; 10:27; 14:7; 16:6; 17:23, 34, 41.
 
 #### Can I translate 2 Kings before 1 Kings? ####
 
-It is not recommended that one translate 2 Kings before 1 Kings.
+The Book of 1 Kings should be translated before 2 Kings, since 2 Kings continues from when 1 Kings ends.