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 # a noise like that of chariots ... like the sound of fiery flames ... like a mighty army ready for battle
 
-These sounds would have been very frightening to Joel's readers. If your readers will not understand what these sound like, you might be able to use a more general phrase: "a noise that frightens everyone" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-simile]])
+"a noise that frightens everyone"