diff --git a/jer/09/10.md b/jer/09/10.md index 4748d53695..0cdd5fb1c7 100644 --- a/jer/09/10.md +++ b/jer/09/10.md @@ -4,11 +4,11 @@ Yahweh continues speaking about the people of Judah. In verse 12, Jeremiah makes # I will sing a song of mourning ... a dirge will be sung for the meadows -Yahweh is mourning for the land of Israel as if it were a person who died. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-parallelism]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-personification]]) +Yahweh is mourning for the land of Israel as if it were a person who died. # a dirge will be sung -This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "I will sing a dirge" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-activepassive]]) +"I will sing a dirge" # the meadows @@ -16,9 +16,8 @@ This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "I will sing a dirge" # For they have been made desolate -This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "Because someone has laid waste the meadows and pastures" or "Because someone has destroyed the meadows and pastures" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-activepassive]]) +"Because someone has destroyed the meadows and pastures" # the lowing of the cattle is not heard -This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "Nobody will hear the sound of cattle there" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-activepassive]]) - +"Nobody will hear the sound of cattle there" \ No newline at end of file