From 5b9d5b0c3a3319ee3e45ab34cf35a6c274e60066 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: PaulDeYoung Date: Fri, 16 Aug 2024 16:28:07 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] Update ecc/10/20.md --- ecc/10/20.md | 7 +++---- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/ecc/10/20.md b/ecc/10/20.md index 0e55f9fb55..952972e2b4 100644 --- a/ecc/10/20.md +++ b/ecc/10/20.md @@ -1,12 +1,11 @@ # not even in your mind -A person's thoughts are represented by the person's "mind." Alternate translation: "not even in your thoughts" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metonymy]]) +"not even in your thoughts" # rich people in your bedroom -"rich people when you are in your bedroom." This means that you should not curse rich people even when you are in a private place where no one else will hear. +"rich people when you are in your bedroom." You should not curse them, even in a place where no one else will hear. # For a bird of the sky ... can spread the matter -These two lines mean basically the same thing and are combined for emphasis. This speaks of people finding out what you have said as if a small bird would hear what you say and tell other people. Alternate translation: "For a bird may hear what you say and tell the matter to other people" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-parallelism]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metaphor]]) - +"For a bird may hear what you say and tell the matter to other people" \ No newline at end of file