From 545f6cdb04e6799f15a03b65401180d25015a45e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Obiwon Date: Thu, 10 Oct 2024 17:28:19 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] Update dan/10/08.md --- dan/10/08.md | 10 +++------- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-) diff --git a/dan/10/08.md b/dan/10/08.md index c029a995a7..e7e3440aa8 100644 --- a/dan/10/08.md +++ b/dan/10/08.md @@ -1,16 +1,12 @@ # So I was left alone and saw -This can be stated in active form. "No one was with me, and I saw" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-activepassive]]) - -# my bright appearance was turned into a ruined look - -This can be stated in active form. "my bright appearance turned into looking ruined" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-activepassive]]) +"No one was with me, and I saw" # my bright appearance -This describes the face of someone who is healthy. Alternate translation: "my healthy-looking face" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-idiom]]) +"my healthy-looking face" # a ruined look -Someone's unhealthy, pale face is spoken of as if it were a ruined building. Alternate translation: "pale" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metaphor]]) +"pale"