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-# the word of Yahweh by the mouth of Jeremiah
+# the word of Yahweh by ... Jeremiah
 
-Here the noun "word" can be translated with the verb "spoke." The word "mouth" represents Jeremiah. Alternate translation: "what Yahweh spoke through Jeremiah" or "the word from Yahweh that Jeremiah spoke" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-synecdoche]])
+"what Yahweh spoke through Jeremiah" or "the word from Yahweh that Jeremiah spoke" 
 
-# until the land should have enjoyed its Sabbath rests
+# until the land should ... its Sabbath rests
 
-The people were supposed to obey the Sabbath law by not farming the land every seventh year. This phrase speaks about this as if the land were a person that would obey the Sabbath law and rest. Alternate translation: "until the land had rested according to the Sabbath law" or "until, as required by the Sabbath law, no one had farmed the land" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-personification]])
+"until the land had rested according to the Sabbath law". The people were supposed to obey the Sabbath law by not farming the land every seventh year.   
 
-# It observed its Sabbath for all the time of its desolation
+# It observed its Sabbath for all ... desolation
 
-The word "it" refers to the land. The land is spoken of as if it were a person who observed the Sabbath. Alternate translation: "The requirements of the Sabbath law were fulfilled as long as the land lay desolate" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-personification]])
+"The requirements of the Sabbath law were fulfilled as long as the land lay desolate" 
 
-# so that it might pass seventy years in this way
+# so that ... seventy years in this way
 
-"so that 70 years might pass while the land lay desolate" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/translate-numbers]])
+"so that 70 years might pass while the land lay desolate"