diff --git a/dan/06/18.md b/dan/06/18.md index 6e7ef4c475..f43f94a533 100644 --- a/dan/06/18.md +++ b/dan/06/18.md @@ -1,12 +1,11 @@ # he went through the night fasting -This symbolic act showed that the king was worried about Daniel. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/translate-symaction]]) +This symbolic act showed that the king was worried about Daniel. # No entertainment was brought before him -This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "He did not have anyone entertain him" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-activepassive]]) +"He did not have anyone entertain him" # sleep fled from him -Sleep is spoken of as if it could run away from the king. Alternate translation: "he did not sleep at all that night" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-personification]]) - +"he did not sleep at all that night"