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-# according to the flesh
+# the one who was born according to the flesh
 
-This refers to Abraham's becoming Ishmael's father by taking Hagar as a wife. Alternate translation: "by means of human action" or "because of what people did" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metaphor]])
+"the one who was born by means of human action" or "the one who was born because of what people did" 
 
-# according to the Spirit
+# the one born according to the Spirit
 
-"because of something the Spirit did"
+"the one who was born because of what the Spirit did"