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-# got up to run away from the presence of Yahweh
+# from the presence of Yahweh
 
-"ran away from Yahweh." "got up" is referring to Jonah leaving where he was. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-idiom]])
-
-# the presence of Yahweh
-
-Here Yahweh is represented by his presence. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metonymy]])
+"from Yahweh"
 
 # go to Tarshish
 
-"and went to Tarshish." Tarshish was in the opposite direction to Nineveh. This can be made explicit. Alternate translation: "went in the opposite direction, toward Tarshish" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-explicit]])
-
-# He went down to Joppa
-
-"Jonah went to Joppa"
+Tarshish was far away, in the opposite direction of Nineveh.
 
 # ship
 
-A "ship" is a very large type of boat that can travel on the sea and carry many passengers or heavy cargo.
+A "ship" is a large boat that can travel on the sea and carry many passengers or heavy cargo.
 
-# So he paid the fare
+# So he paid the fare and boarded the ship
 
-"There Jonah paid for the trip"
-
-# boarded the ship
-
-"got on the ship"
+"There Jonah paid for the trip and got on the ship"
 
 # with them
 
-The word "them" refers to the others who were going on the ship.
-
-# away from the presence of Yahweh
-
-Here Yahweh is represented by his presence. Alternate translation: "away from Yahweh" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metonymy]])
+The word "them" refers to the others on the ship.