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 #### Outline of Job ####
 
-1. Job is introduced: position in life, his family, and his situation (1–2:13)
+1. Job is introduced (1:1–2:13)
-    - Job's flawless life is presented (1:1–5, 20–22; 2:10)
+    - Job is blameless and wealthy (1:1–5)
-    - Satan seeks to test Job (1:6–12; 2:1–10)
+    - Yahweh allows Satan to test Job (1:6–2:10)
-1. The first set of speeches (3:1–14:22)
+1. Three friends speak to Job (3:1–14:22)
     - Eliphaz, Bildad, and Zophar 
     - Job replies to each 
-1. The second set of speeches (15:1–21:34)
+1. They speak to him again (15:1–21:34)
     - Eliphaz, Bildad, and Zophar
     - Job replies to each
-1. The third set of speeches (22:1–31:40)
+1. They speak a third time (22:1–31:40)
     - Eliphaz and Bildad
     - Job replies to each
 1. Elihu speaks to Job (32:1–37:24)
-    - He calls on Job to take responsibility for his actions (32:1–33:33)
+1. Yahweh answers Job out of the whirlwind (38:1–41:34)
-    - He summarizes Job's complaints (34:1–9)
+1. Job is humbled before Yahweh (42:1–6)
-    - He answers Job's first and second complaints (34:10–35:16)
+1. Yahweh rebukes Eliphaz, Bildad, and Zophar (42:7–9)
-    - Elihu describes God's glorious deeds (36:1–37:24)
+1. Yahweh prospers Job again (42:10–17)
-1. The Lord answers Job out of the whirlwind (38:1–41:34)
-1. Job is humbled before God (42:1–6)
-1. God rebukes Job's friends (except Elihu) (42:7–9)
-1. God brings back prosperity to Job (42:10–17)
 
 #### What is the Book of Job about? ####
 
-This book describes a situation where Job experiences disaster even though he was faithful to Yahweh. The book asks why God permits those who worship him to experience trials and losses. The book explains that when this happens, it is more important to trust God and to find peace in him than it is to understand the reason for the suffering.
+The Book of Job is about a man named Job who experienced disaster even though he was faithful to Yahweh. Job speaks with three friends and asks why Yahweh lets him experience trials and losses. The book teaches that we cannot understand all of Yahweh's ways, and when we suffer, it is more important to trust Yahweh than it is to understand the reason for the suffering.
 
 #### How should the title of this book be translated? ####
 
-The Book of Job is named for Job, the main character in the book. His name is not related to the English word "job." Translators might choose to make the title clearer, for example, "The Book About Job."
+The Book of Job is named for Job, the main character in the book. His name is not related to the English word "job." Translators might use the traditional title of "The Book of Job" or just "Job." Or they may choose to make the title clearer, such as "The Book About Job" or "The Book About a Man Named Job."
 
 #### Who wrote the Book of Job? ####
 
-The author of the Book of Job is not known. Many suggest that Moses composed or compiled the book, but this is uncertain.
+We do not know who wrote the Book of Job. Many people suggest that Moses composed or compiled the book, but it may have been written after the time of Moses.
 
 ## Part 2: Important Religious and Cultural Concepts ##
 
 #### Does sin cause suffering? ####
 
-When a person sins against God, it can cause the person to experience suffering. It was generally believed in the Ancient Near East that a person suffered because a person or his ancestors sinned against God. This is, in fact, what many religions teach. However, the Book of Job shows that a person may suffer even if he has not sinned. (See: [[rc://en/tw/dict/bible/kt/sin]])
+When a person sins against God, it can cause the person to experience suffering. People in the ancient Near East generally believed that a person suffered because they or their ancestors sinned against God. This is what many religions teach. However, the Book of Job shows that a person may suffer even if he has not sinned. (See: [[rc://en/tw/dict/bible/kt/sin]])
 
 #### Were Eliphaz, Bildad, and Zophar really Job's friends? ####
 
-Job 2:11 refers to Elipahz, Bildad, and Zophar as Job's friends. But they did not comfort Job. Instead, they tried to persuade Job to say something about God that he believed was false. So we might wonder if it is right to translate the word as "friends." The problem was not that they did not care about Job. They believed that they were his friends and they wanted to help him. However, what they said was not any help to Job because they did not understand the truth about God.
+Job 2:11 refers to Eliphaz, Bildad, and Zophar as the friends of Job. But they did not comfort Job. Instead, they tried to persuade Job to say something about God that Job believed was not true. So we might wonder if it is right to translate the word as "friends." They cared about Job and they wanted to help him. However, what they said did not help Job because they did not understand the truth about God.
 
-#### When did the events presented in the Book of Job take place? ####
+#### When did the events in the Book of Job take place? ####
 
-The story about Job is set in the time period of Abraham, Isaac, and Jacob in the Book of Genesis. Very little is known for certain about the religious or cultural situation of the author when he wrote the book of Job. 
+We do not know when the events in the Book of Job took place. It seems to be set around the time of Abraham and Isaac in the Book of Genesis. However, some verses are similar to ones in the Books of Proverbs and Isaiah, which are set much later. 
 
 ## Part 3: Important Translation Issues ##
 
 #### What style of writing is in the Book of Job? ####
 
-The introduction and the conclusion of the Book of Job are narrative for the most part. The other chapters were written as poetry. In the Ancient Near East, writers often used poetry to discuss matters of wisdom. 
+The writer starts and ends the Book of Job by telling what happened to Job in narrative form. He wrote the other parts in poetry form. In the ancient Near East, writers often used poetry to discuss matters of wisdom. 
 
 #### Is the Book of Job difficult to translate? ####
 
-Because Job is not connected with a specific historical situation, the translator may wish to translate this book before other Old Testament books. On the other hand, the book of Job has many unique words and phrases, which make parts difficult to understand. The translator should be aware that this causes the book to be hard to translate. For this reason, translators may decide not to attempt to translate this book until they have gained much experience translating other portions of the Bible.
+Because the writer did not connect Job with a specific time or place in history, the translator may wish to translate this book before other Old Testament books. However, the Book of Job has many uncommon words and phrases, making parts of it hard to understand and translate. For this reason, translators may decide to translate this book after they have translated other books of the Bible.