diff --git a/ezr/01/02.md b/ezr/01/02.md index e4ad0a4755..f0b2754dcb 100644 --- a/ezr/01/02.md +++ b/ezr/01/02.md @@ -1,8 +1,7 @@ # all the kingdoms of the earth -Here "all" is an exaggeration, as there were kingdoms over which Cyrus did not rule. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-hyperbole]]) +There were kingdoms over which Cyrus did not rule. # for him a house in ... Judah -You may need to make explicit that the house was for people to worship Yahweh. Alternate translation: "a house in ... Judah where people can worship him" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-explicit]]) - +"a house in ... Judah where people can worship him"