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# General Information:
See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/writing-poetry]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-parallelism]]
# It came about
"It happened." This phrase is used here to mark the beginning of a new part of the story. If your language has a way for doing this, you could consider using it here.
"It happened." This phrase marks the beginning of a new part of the story.
# in the fourth year of Jehoiakim ... king of Judah
Jehoiakim had been king of Judah for more than three years. See how you translated this in [Jeremiah 25:1](../25/01.md). (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/translate-ordinal]])
Jehoiakim had been king of Judah for more than three years. See Jeremiah 25:1.
# that this word
The phrase "this word" refers to the message that follows.
This phrase refers to the message that follows.
# to Jeremiah
It is not clear why Jeremiah is referring to himself by name here. You may translate using first person, as the UDB does. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-123person]])
It is not clear why Jeremiah is referring to himself by name here.
# he said
"Yahweh said"
"Yahweh said"