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17 lines
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# came out—fiery red
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This can the stated as a second sentence. AT: "came out. It was red like fire" or "came out. It was bright red"
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# To its rider was given permission
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This can be stated with an active verb. AT: "God gave permission to its rider" or "Its rider received person" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]])
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# This rider was given a huge sword
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This can be stated with an active verb. AT: "This rider received a huge sword" or "God gave this rider a huge sword" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]])
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# a huge sword
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"a very large sword" or "a great sword"
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