diff --git a/job/03/16.md b/job/03/16.md
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--- a/job/03/16.md
+++ b/job/03/16.md
@@ -1,10 +1,6 @@
-# Or I would have been lying ... that never see the light
+# General Information:
 
-This describes something that might have happened but did not happen. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-hypo]])
-
-# Or perhaps I would have been stillborn, like infants that never see the light
-
-Job uses parallelism to emphasize what he is saying. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-parallelism]])
+Job continues talking about what would have been true if he had never been born. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-hypo]])
 
 # I would have been stillborn
 
@@ -12,7 +8,7 @@ Job uses parallelism to emphasize what he is saying. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/tran
 
 # like infants that never see the light
 
-"like babies who had never been born"
+"like babies who have never been born"
 
 # infants