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-# General Information:
+# Connecting Statement:
 
-This continues the list begun in [1 Chronicles 25:9](../25/09.md).
+This continues the list begun in [1 Chronicles 25:9](../25/09.md) of 24 lots that were cast to choose the order in which families would serve.
 
-# the tenth ... the thirteenth
+# the tenth
 
-"lot number 10 ... lot number 11 ... lot number 12 ... lot number 13." This shows the order in which the families were chosen. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-ordinal]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-numbers]])
+This refers to the tenth lot. The word "lot" may be supplied here. Alternate translation: "the tenth lot" or "lot number 10" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-ordinal]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-ellipsis]])
 
-# Shimei ... Hashabiah
+# Shimei
 
-See how you translated the names of these men in [1 Chronicles 25:3](../25/03.md). (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]])
+See how you translated the name of this man in [1 Chronicles 25:3](../25/03.md). (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]])
 
-# twelve persons
+# twelve persons in number
 
 "12 people" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-numbers]])