From 4971ad624965bd2e412cff5988168daa4d5bc560 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hmw3 Date: Thu, 17 May 2018 16:39:01 -0400 Subject: [PATCH] Comments from Forrest Deal --- jhn/13/23.md | 2 +- jhn/13/34.md | 2 +- jhn/14/21.md | 2 +- jhn/14/23.md | 2 +- jhn/17/01.md | 2 +- jhn/17/03.md | 2 +- jhn/17/05.md | 4 ++-- jhn/17/06.md | 2 +- jhn/17/12.md | 2 +- jhn/17/14.md | 2 +- jhn/17/19.md | 2 +- jhn/17/20.md | 2 +- jhn/17/23.md | 2 +- jhn/17/26.md | 6 +++--- jhn/21/15.md | 2 +- jhn/21/16.md | 2 +- rom/12/09.md | 2 +- rom/13/08.md | 2 +- 18 files changed, 21 insertions(+), 21 deletions(-) diff --git a/jhn/13/23.md b/jhn/13/23.md index 7c7d0d1aee..06459698b4 100644 --- a/jhn/13/23.md +++ b/jhn/13/23.md @@ -12,5 +12,5 @@ Lying with one's head against the side of another diner in the Greek style was c # loved -This kind of love comes from God and focuses on the good of others, even when it does not benefit oneself. This kind of love cares for others, no matter what they do. +The kind of love that comes from God is focused on having good things happen to others even when those good things do not happen to the one who loves. diff --git a/jhn/13/34.md b/jhn/13/34.md index f3387cdba2..db46b98ba7 100644 --- a/jhn/13/34.md +++ b/jhn/13/34.md @@ -4,5 +4,5 @@ Jesus continues speaking to his disciples. # love -This is the kind of love that comes from God and focuses on the good of others, even when it does not benefit oneself. This kind of love cares for others, no matter what they do. +The kind of love that comes from God is focused on having good things happen to others even when those good things do not happen to the one who loves. This kind of love cares for others, no matter what they do. diff --git a/jhn/14/21.md b/jhn/14/21.md index a133a818bc..549f7074f3 100644 --- a/jhn/14/21.md +++ b/jhn/14/21.md @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ # loves -This kind of love comes from God and focuses on the good of others, even when it does not benefit oneself. This kind of love cares for others, no matter what they do. +The kind of love that comes from God is focused on having good things happen to others even when those good things do not happen to the one who loves. This kind of love cares for others, no matter what they do. # he who loves me will be loved by my Father diff --git a/jhn/14/23.md b/jhn/14/23.md index 41df4df5f8..ddcd97ccc7 100644 --- a/jhn/14/23.md +++ b/jhn/14/23.md @@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ Jesus responds to Judas (not Iscariot). # loves -This kind of love comes from God and focuses on the good of others, even when it does not benefit oneself. This kind of love cares for others, no matter what they do. +The kind of love that comes from God is focused on having good things happen to others even when those good things do not happen to the one who loves. This kind of love cares for others, no matter what they do. # My Father diff --git a/jhn/17/01.md b/jhn/17/01.md index 2185b53c61..1b0269cc78 100644 --- a/jhn/17/01.md +++ b/jhn/17/01.md @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ # Connecting Statement: -The part of the story from the previous chapter continues. Jesus had been speaking to his disciples, but now he begins to pray to God. +The story that began in the previous chapter continues. Jesus had been speaking to his disciples, but now he begins to pray to God. # he lifted up his eyes to the heavens diff --git a/jhn/17/03.md b/jhn/17/03.md index f85ddc8187..4f236d3091 100644 --- a/jhn/17/03.md +++ b/jhn/17/03.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ # This is eternal life ... know you, the only true God, and ... Jesus Christ -Eternal life is to know the only true God, God the Father and God the Son. +Eternal life is to know the only true God, God the Father, and also God the Son. diff --git a/jhn/17/05.md b/jhn/17/05.md index 0e7623531f..f54d226880 100644 --- a/jhn/17/05.md +++ b/jhn/17/05.md @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ -# Father, glorify me ... with the glory that I had with you before the world was made +# Father, glorify me along with yourself with the glory that I had with you before the world was made -Jesus had glory with God the Father "before the world was made" because Jesus is God the Son. Alternate translation: "Father, give me honor by bringing me into your presence as we were before we made the world" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-explicit]]) +Jesus had glory with God the Father "before the world was made" because Jesus is God the Son. Alternate translation: "Father, give me honor by bringing me into your presence as as I was before we made the world" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-explicit]]) # Father diff --git a/jhn/17/06.md b/jhn/17/06.md index 96f38afc31..cae04fa4ef 100644 --- a/jhn/17/06.md +++ b/jhn/17/06.md @@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ Jesus begins to pray for his disciples. # I revealed your name -Here "name" is a metonym that refers to the person of God. Alternate translation: "I taught them who you really are and what you are like" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]]) +Here "name" is a metonym that refers to the person of God. Alternate translation: "I taught who you really are and what you are like" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]]) # from the world diff --git a/jhn/17/12.md b/jhn/17/12.md index 1270658264..dd30572a1b 100644 --- a/jhn/17/12.md +++ b/jhn/17/12.md @@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ Here "name" is a metonym that refers to the power and protection of God. Alterna # not one of them was destroyed, except for the son of destruction -"the only one among them who was destroyed is the son of destruction" +"the only one among them who was destroyed was the son of destruction" # the son of destruction diff --git a/jhn/17/14.md b/jhn/17/14.md index 5505b5de49..b90b73da8e 100644 --- a/jhn/17/14.md +++ b/jhn/17/14.md @@ -4,5 +4,5 @@ # the world ... because they are not of the world ... I am not of the world -Here "the "world" is a metonym that refers to the people who oppose God. Alternate translation: "The people who oppose you have hated my followers because they do not belong to those who do not believe, just as I do not belong to them" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]]) +Here "the "world" is a metonym that refers to the people who oppose God. Alternate translation: "the people who oppose you ... because they do not belong to those who do not believe ... I do not belong to them" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]]) diff --git a/jhn/17/19.md b/jhn/17/19.md index 3226d55291..7150a2171b 100644 --- a/jhn/17/19.md +++ b/jhn/17/19.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ # so that they themselves may also be set apart in truth -You can translate this in an active form. Alternate translation: "so that they may also set apart themselves truly to you" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]]) +You can translate this in an active form. Alternate translation: "so that they may also truly set themselves apart to you" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]]) diff --git a/jhn/17/20.md b/jhn/17/20.md index 9b40645c10..49524cdf28 100644 --- a/jhn/17/20.md +++ b/jhn/17/20.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ # those who will believe in me through their word -"those who will believe in me because they teach about me" +"those who will believe in me because these teach about me" diff --git a/jhn/17/23.md b/jhn/17/23.md index 9a7489b232..c3fd1edc52 100644 --- a/jhn/17/23.md +++ b/jhn/17/23.md @@ -8,5 +8,5 @@ Here "the world" is a metonym that refers to the people who do not know God. Alt # loved -This kind of love comes from God and focuses on the good of others, even when it does not benefit oneself. This kind of love cares for others, no matter what they do. +The kind of love that comes from God is focused on having good things happen to others even when those good things do not happen to the one who loves. diff --git a/jhn/17/26.md b/jhn/17/26.md index 3e2d0e1cc8..9a0d15a6fe 100644 --- a/jhn/17/26.md +++ b/jhn/17/26.md @@ -1,8 +1,8 @@ -# I made your name known to them +# I made your name known to them, and I will make it known -The word "name" refers to God. Alternate translation: "I have revealed to them what you are like" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]]) +The word "name" refers to God. Alternate translation: "I revealed to them what you are like, and I will continue to do that" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]]) # love ... loved -This kind of love comes from God and focuses on the good of others, even when it does not benefit oneself. This kind of love cares for others, no matter what they do. +The kind of love that comes from God is focused on having good things happen to others even when those good things do not happen to the one who loves. diff --git a/jhn/21/15.md b/jhn/21/15.md index f5bfa438ff..66f6460562 100644 --- a/jhn/21/15.md +++ b/jhn/21/15.md @@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ Jesus begins to have a conversation with Simon Peter. # do you love me -Here "love" refers the type of love that comes from God, which focuses on the good of others, even when it does not benefit oneself. +The kind of love that comes from God is focused on having good things happen to others even when those good things do not happen to the one who loves. # you know that I love you diff --git a/jhn/21/16.md b/jhn/21/16.md index a5eee92414..9d8953bae2 100644 --- a/jhn/21/16.md +++ b/jhn/21/16.md @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ # do you love me -Here "love" refers the type of love that comes from God, which focuses on the good of others, even when it does not benefit oneself. +The kind of love that comes from God is focused on having good things happen to others even when those good things do not happen to the one who loves. # Take care of my sheep diff --git a/rom/12/09.md b/rom/12/09.md index 7bad59d05d..7796ab88a2 100644 --- a/rom/12/09.md +++ b/rom/12/09.md @@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ You can translate this in an active form. Alternate translation: "You must love # love -The word Paul uses here refers to the kind of love that comes from God and focuses on the good of others, even when it does not benefit oneself. +The kind of love that comes from God is focused on having good things happen to others even when those good things do not happen to the one who loves. # love diff --git a/rom/13/08.md b/rom/13/08.md index c74c6e25ab..2c20885828 100644 --- a/rom/13/08.md +++ b/rom/13/08.md @@ -16,5 +16,5 @@ This is the one debt that can remain as shown in the note above. # love -This refers to the kind of love that comes from God and focuses on the good of others, even when it does not benefit oneself. +The kind of love that comes from God is focused on having good things happen to others even when those good things do not happen to the one who loves.