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 # General Information:
 
-Verses 19-33 use the third person to describe the punishment of Nebuchadnezzar (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-123person]]).
-Many terms in this verse are almost the same as [Daniel 4:11](../04/11.md). See how you translated that verse.
+Verses 19-33 use the third person to describe the punishment of Nebuchadnezzar (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-123person]]). Many terms in this verse are almost the same as in [Daniel 4:11](../04/11.md). See how you translated that verse.
 
-# to the heavens ... to the ends of the earth
+# to the heavens ... to the ends of the whole earth
 
 These phrases are exaggerations to emphasize that everyone everywhere knew how great Nebuchadnezzar was. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-hyperbole]])
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