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@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ This is where the beast reigns from. It may refer to the capital city of his kin
 
 # darkness covered its kingdom
 
-"Darkness" here is a metaphor, in which ungodliness is like a blanket, obstructing everything from God's influence. AT: "ungodliness was over all its kingdom" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]])
+Here "darkness" is spoken of as if it were something like a blanket. AT: "it became dark in all his kingdom" or "all of his kingdom became dark" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]])
 
 # They chewed ... They blasphemed