* **So it came about** - This phrase is used here to mark the beginning of a new part of the story. If your language has a way for doing this, you could consider using it here.
* **the hand of the Lord Yahweh again fell on me** - The word "hand" is often used to refer to power or actions. AT: "the power of Yahweh began to control me." (See: [[en:ta:vol2:translate:figs_metonymy]])