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-Teams who produce audio and video recordings of the scripture will need to make decisions that are similar to the kinds of decisions that other teams need to make. They will also need to make these decisions known to all who make the recordings.
+Translations teams who produce audio and video recordings will have decisions to make in addition to the standard decisions of every translation team. Once these decisions have been made they will need to be clearly communicated to those doing the recordings.
 
 #### Pronunciation of names and borrowed words
   * The team will need to decide how each name is to be pronounced, so that the names can be pronounced the same way every time.