From 44b146fd0da26201551f8ccff23a25f117c91227 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: John Hutchins Date: Tue, 9 Oct 2018 20:58:42 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] Updated verses to match ULB; fixed spacing --- translate/translate-names/01.md | 63 ++++++++++++++------------------- 1 file changed, 27 insertions(+), 36 deletions(-) diff --git a/translate/translate-names/01.md b/translate/translate-names/01.md index 5c4fbfa..0c5c437 100644 --- a/translate/translate-names/01.md +++ b/translate/translate-names/01.md @@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ Most names in the Bible have meaning. Most of the time, names in the Bible are u Here the writer uses the name "Melchizedek" primarily to refer to a man who had that name, and the title "king of Salem" tells us that he ruled over a certain city. ->His name "Melchizedek" means "king of righteousness," and also "king of Salem," that is, "king of peace." (Hebrews 7:2 ULB) +>First, the translation of his name means, "king of righteousness"; then he is also "king of Salem," that is, "king of peace." (Hebrews 7:2 ULB) Here the writer explains the meanings of Melchizedek's name and title, because those things tell us more about the person. Other times, the writer does not explain the meaning of a name because he expects the reader to already know the meaning. If the meaning of the name is important to understand the passage, you can include the meaning in the text or in a footnote. @@ -24,22 +24,22 @@ Here the writer explains the meanings of Melchizedek's name and title, because t ### Examples from the Bible ->You went over the Jordan and came to Jericho. The leaders of Jericho fought against you, along with the Amorites (Joshua 24:11 ULB) +>You went over the Jordan and came to Jericho. The leaders of Jericho fought against you, along with the Amorites ... (Joshua 24:11 ULB) Readers might not know that "Jordan" is the name of a river, "Jericho" is the name of a city, and "Amorites" is the name of a group of people. ->she said, "Do I really continue to see, even after he has seen me?" Therefore the well was called Beerlahairoi; (Genesis 16:13-14 ULB) +>... she said, "Do I really continue to see, even after he has seen me?" Therefore the well was called Beer Lahai Roi; (Genesis 16:13-14 ULB) -Readers may not understand the second sentence if they do not know that "Beerlahairoi" means "Well of the Living One who sees me." +Readers may not understand the second sentence if they do not know that "Beer Lahai Roi" means "Well of the Living One who sees me." ->She named him Moses and said, "Because I drew him from the water." (Exodus 2:11 ULB) +>She named him Moses and said, "Because I drew him from the water." (Exodus 2:10 ULB) Readers may not understand why she said this if they do not know that the name Moses sounds like the Hebrew words "pull out." ->Saul was in agreement with his death (Acts 8:1 ULB)
+>Saul was in agreement with his death. (Acts 8:1 ULB)
->It came about in Iconium that Paul and Barnabas entered together into the synagogue (Acts 14:1 ULB) +>It came about in Iconium that Paul and Barnabas entered together into the synagogue ... (Acts 14:1 ULB) Readers may not know that the names Saul and Paul refer to the same person. @@ -54,45 +54,36 @@ Readers may not know that the names Saul and Paul refer to the same person. ### Examples of Translation Strategies Applied 1. If readers cannot easily understand from the context what kind of a thing a name refers to, you can add a word to clarify it. - - * **You went over the Jordan and came to Jericho. The leaders of Jericho fought against you, along with the Amorites** (Joshua 24:11 ULB) - * You went over the Jordan River and came to the city of Jericho. The leaders of Jericho fought against you, along with the tribe of the Amorites - + * **You went over the Jordan and came to Jericho. The leaders of Jericho fought against you, along with the Amorites ...** (Joshua 24:11 ULB) + * You went over the Jordan River and came to the city of Jericho. The leaders of Jericho fought against you, along with the tribe of the Amorites ... * **Shortly after, some Pharisees came and said to him, "Go and leave here because Herod wants to kill you."** (Luke 13:31 ULB) - * Shortly after, some Pharisees came and said to him, "Go and leave here because King Herod wants to kill you. - + * Shortly after, some Pharisees came and said to him, "Go and leave here because King Herod wants to kill you. + 1. If readers need to understand the meaning of a name in order to understand what is said about it, copy the name and tell about its meaning either in the text or in a footnote. - * **She named him Moses and said, "Because I drew him from the water."** (Exodus 2:11 ULB) - * She named him Moses, which sounds like 'drawn out,' and said, "Because I drew him from the water." - + * She named him Moses, which sounds like 'drawn out,' and said, "Because I drew him from the water." + 1. Or if readers need to understand the meaning of a name in order to understand what is said about it, and that name is used only once, translate the meaning of the name instead of copying the name. - - * **... she said, "Do I really continue to see, even after he has seen me?" Therefore the well was called Beerlahairoi;** (Genesis 16:13-14 ULB) - * ... she said, "Do I really continue to see, even after he has seen me?" Therefore the well was called Well of the Living One who sees me; - + * **... she said, "Do I really continue to see, even after he has seen me?" Therefore the well was called Beer Lahai Roi;** (Genesis 16:13-14 ULB) + * ... she said, "Do I really continue to see, even after he has seen me?" Therefore the well was called Well of the Living One who sees me; + 1. If a person or place has two different names, use one name most of the time and the other name only when the text tells about the person or place having more than one name or when it says something about why the person or place was given that name. Write a footnote when the source text uses the name that is used less frequently. For example, Paul is called "Saul" before Acts 13 and "Paul" after Acts 13. You could translate his name as "Paul" all of the time, except in Acts 13:9 where it talks about him having both names. - - * **... a young man named Saul** (Acts 7:58 ULB) - * ... a young man named Paul1 + * **... a young man named Saul.** (Acts 7:58 ULB) + * ... a young man named Paul.1 * The footnote would look like: * [1]Most versions say Saul here, but most of the time in the Bible he is called Paul. - - * **But Saul, who is also called Paul, was filled with the Holy Spirit;** (Acts 13:9) - * But Saul, who is also called Paul, was filled with the Holy Spirit; - + * **But Saul, who is also called Paul ...** (Acts 13:9) + * But Saul, who is also called Paul ... + 1. Or if a person or place has two names, use whatever name is given in the source text, and add a footnote that gives the other name. For example, you could write "Saul" where the source text has "Saul" and "Paul" where the source text has "Paul." - - * **a young man named Saul** (Acts 7:58 ULB) - * a young man named Saul + * **... a young man named Saul.** (Acts 7:58 ULB) + * ... a young man named Saul. [1] * The footnote would look like: * [1]This is the same man who is called Paul beginning in Acts 13. - * **But Saul, who is also called Paul, was filled with the Holy Spirit;** (Acts 13:9) * But Saul, who is also called Paul, was filled with the Holy Spirit; - - * **It came about in Iconium that Paul and Barnabas entered together into the synagogue** (Acts 14:1 ULB) - * It came about in Iconium that Paul1and Barnabas entered together into the synagogue + * **It came about in Iconium that Paul and Barnabas entered together into the synagogue ...** (Acts 14:1 ULB) + * It came about in Iconium that Paul1 and Barnabas entered together into the synagogue ... * The footnote would look like: - * [1]This is the man that was called Saul before Acts 13. - + * [1]This is the man that was called Saul before Acts 13. +