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-# five thousand men
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-"5,000 men" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/translate-numbers]])
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 # There were five thousand men who ate the loaves
 
-The number of women and children was not counted. If it would not be understood that women and children were present, it can be made explicit. Alternate translation: "And there were five thousand men who ate the loaves. They did not even count the women and children" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-explicit]])
+Telling the number of men in the crowd hints at how large the crowd was. The women and children also ate.  Alternate translation: "So many people ate the loaves of bread; the number of just the men was five thousand" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-explicit]])
 
+# five thousand men
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+"5,000 men" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/translate-numbers]])
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