diff --git a/mrk/03/09.md b/mrk/03/09.md
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--- a/mrk/03/09.md
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@@ -6,9 +6,12 @@ As the large crowd was pushing forward toward Jesus, he was in danger of being c
 
 "Jesus told his disciples"
 
-# For he healed many, so that
+# For he healed many, so that everyone ... to touch him
 
-The word "many" refers to the large number of people Jesus had already healed. AT: "Because Jesus had healed many people, everyone" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-ellipsis]])
+The result of Jesus healing many people was that everyone who needed healing crowded around him in order to touch him. AT: "For, because Jesus had healed many people, everyone ... to touch him" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/writing-connectingwords]])
+
+# For he healed many
+The word "many" refers to the large number of people Jesus had already healed. AT: "For he healed many people (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-ellipsis]])
 
 # everyone who had afflictions eagerly approached him in order to touch him