From 60a10bd5e69cbfcd0667d52e87ba963910712301 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 19:16:18 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 01/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- jos/08/15.md | 10 +++------- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-) diff --git a/jos/08/15.md b/jos/08/15.md index 11323011a6..ad9b82c20f 100644 --- a/jos/08/15.md +++ b/jos/08/15.md @@ -1,16 +1,12 @@ # let themselves be defeated before them -"let themselves be defeated before the people of Ai." The phrase "before them" represents what the people of Ai would see and think. Alternate translation: "let the people of Ai think that the Israelites were defeated" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]]) - -# let themselves be defeated before them - -The phrase "be defeated" can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "let the people of Ai think that they had defeated the Israelites" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]]) +"let themselves be defeated before the people of Ai." The phrase "before them" represents what the people of Ai would see and think. The phrase "be defeated" can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "let the people of Ai think that the Israelites were defeated" or "let the people of Ai think that they had defeated the Israelites" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]]) # before them the army of Ai -# they fled ... go after them +# they fled -The words "they" and "them" here refer to the army of Isreal. +The army of Israel fled. From fcf73fa4807277feb3a7c7068e7ba59a940ee314 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 19:17:04 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 02/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- jos/12/04.md | 10 +++++----- 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-) diff --git a/jos/12/04.md b/jos/12/04.md index 76e6ec458c..8268a3e9f1 100644 --- a/jos/12/04.md +++ b/jos/12/04.md @@ -1,12 +1,12 @@ -# Ashtaroth ... Edrei ... Salekah - -These are the names of places. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) - # Og, king of Bashan See how you translated this man's name in [Joshua 9:10](../09/10.md). -# the Rephaim ... Maacathites +# the Rephaim These are the names of people groups. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) +# Ashtaroth ... Edrei + +These are the names of places. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) + From 8ddb8b9ad7e761eddc588925205253b25020f464 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 19:18:02 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 03/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- jos/15/10.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/jos/15/10.md b/jos/15/10.md index a3a2d80d28..4f782de9b0 100644 --- a/jos/15/10.md +++ b/jos/15/10.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -# Baalah ... Kiriath Jearim ... Mount Seir ... Mount Jearim ... Kesalon ... Beth Shemesh ... Timnah +# Baalah ... Mount Seir ... Mount Jearim ... Kesalon ... Beth Shemesh ... Timnah These are the names of places. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) From b8e2efb57fd5c68da59cd83ad6baf0adc6ee7fe4 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 19:21:06 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 04/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- jos/18/13.md | 6 +----- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 5 deletions(-) diff --git a/jos/18/13.md b/jos/18/13.md index f494192a9e..3d49d07a94 100644 --- a/jos/18/13.md +++ b/jos/18/13.md @@ -1,8 +1,4 @@ -# the border ... The boundary - -These refer to the same thing. - -# Luz ... Ataroth Addar ... Beth Horon ... Kiriath Baal ... Kiriath Jearim +# Luz ... Ataroth Addar ... Beth Horon These are the names of places. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) From 6f82df86229640318a9aed99b21020c7a8260d46 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 19:21:57 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 05/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- jos/18/14.md | 6 +++--- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/jos/18/14.md b/jos/18/14.md index f494192a9e..466ccb5ad9 100644 --- a/jos/18/14.md +++ b/jos/18/14.md @@ -1,8 +1,8 @@ -# the border ... The boundary +# The boundary -These refer to the same thing. +This refers to the same thing as "the border" in verse 13. -# Luz ... Ataroth Addar ... Beth Horon ... Kiriath Baal ... Kiriath Jearim +# Kiriath Baal ... Kiriath Jearim These are the names of places. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) From d220d67f71310cc6ec1ab568733ec3e852e92edb Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 19:22:44 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 06/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- jos/18/15.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/jos/18/15.md b/jos/18/15.md index a153549242..d5c701c73b 100644 --- a/jos/18/15.md +++ b/jos/18/15.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -# Kiriath Jearim ... Ephron ... Nephtoah ... Ben Hinnom ... Rephaim ... Hinnom ... En Rogel +# Kiriath Jearim ... Ephron ... Nephtoah These are the names of places. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) From 591ab296bc2c30a3de6939b6dd45e58b30d9115b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 19:23:07 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 07/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- jos/18/16.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/jos/18/16.md b/jos/18/16.md index a153549242..0494c74fb6 100644 --- a/jos/18/16.md +++ b/jos/18/16.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -# Kiriath Jearim ... Ephron ... Nephtoah ... Ben Hinnom ... Rephaim ... Hinnom ... En Rogel +# Ben Hinnom ... Rephaim ... Hinnom ... En Rogel These are the names of places. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) From 3f089b16f98ff69ae7040165b13780a8a612be38 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 19:23:31 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 08/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- jos/18/17.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/jos/18/17.md b/jos/18/17.md index 0211410b93..343ba6f611 100644 --- a/jos/18/17.md +++ b/jos/18/17.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -# En Shemesh ... Geliloth ... Adummim ... Beth Arabah +# En Shemesh ... Geliloth ... Adummim These are the names of places. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) From 6ac5095ec53a61f0a53dbaf19caa126e5420a9fc Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 19:24:10 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 09/99] Update 'jos/18/18.md' --- jos/18/18.md | 8 ++++---- 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/jos/18/18.md b/jos/18/18.md index c289d6e8f3..410896ee93 100644 --- a/jos/18/18.md +++ b/jos/18/18.md @@ -1,8 +1,8 @@ -# En Shemesh ... Geliloth ... Adummim ... Beth Arabah - -These are the names of places. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) - # the shoulder of Beth Arabah Land that is in the form of a slope or ridge is spoken of as if it were a shoulder. Alternate translation: "the slope of Beth Arabah" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]]) +# Beth Arabah + +This is the name of a city. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) + From 3da9a127126e8bf973c8bcc97c910973a3c8b33b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 19:24:35 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 10/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- jos/19/10.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/jos/19/10.md b/jos/19/10.md index f295085fc3..be37d49df3 100644 --- a/jos/19/10.md +++ b/jos/19/10.md @@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ See how you translated this phrase in [Joshua 19:1](../19/01.md). number three in a list (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-ordinal]]) -# Sarid ... Maralah ... Dabbesheth ... Jokneam +# Sarid These are the names of places. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) From c1cfa1a2506a0f5d269a1908882d9db328ce674b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 19:24:54 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 11/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- jos/19/11.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/jos/19/11.md b/jos/19/11.md index 28edb696a8..fbd21da7aa 100644 --- a/jos/19/11.md +++ b/jos/19/11.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -# Sarid ... Maralah ... Dabbesheth ... Jokneam +# Maralah ... Dabbesheth ... Jokneam These are the names of places. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) From a37c5e0c57f2412431b2deec909fdbd108cceacc Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 19:25:40 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 12/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- jos/19/10.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/jos/19/10.md b/jos/19/10.md index be37d49df3..3fdb5769a4 100644 --- a/jos/19/10.md +++ b/jos/19/10.md @@ -8,5 +8,5 @@ number three in a list (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-ordinal]]) # Sarid -These are the names of places. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) +This is the name of a city. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) From c1abdb4d767193f1dfb5395bcad47b6e0858b4b5 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 19:26:07 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 13/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- jos/19/12.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/jos/19/12.md b/jos/19/12.md index e7f06d21aa..35b6e2b59c 100644 --- a/jos/19/12.md +++ b/jos/19/12.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -# Sarid ... Kisloth Tabor ... Daberath ... Japhia ... Gath Hepher ... Eth Kazin ... Rimmon ... Neah +# Sarid ... Kisloth Tabor ... Daberath ... Japhia These are the names of cities. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) From 58e3a10e5ff3865f23d14e292f7bc25a86ce11e9 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 19:26:32 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 14/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- jos/19/13.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/jos/19/13.md b/jos/19/13.md index e7f06d21aa..1aaa7e2fad 100644 --- a/jos/19/13.md +++ b/jos/19/13.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -# Sarid ... Kisloth Tabor ... Daberath ... Japhia ... Gath Hepher ... Eth Kazin ... Rimmon ... Neah +# Gath Hepher ... Eth Kazin ... Rimmon ... Neah These are the names of cities. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) From 5b3e934052ecde5fc81027f72acb80c403557e0c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 19:26:58 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 15/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- jos/19/14.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/jos/19/14.md b/jos/19/14.md index cc881bbda9..e274d0bc23 100644 --- a/jos/19/14.md +++ b/jos/19/14.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -# Hannathon ... Iphtah El ... Kattath ... Nahalal ... Shimron ... Idalah ... Bethlehem +# Hannathon ... Iphtah El These are names of places. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) From eca5721f9df33bb6ee9aef836c997324f75fc2f5 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 19:27:24 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 16/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- jos/19/15.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/jos/19/15.md b/jos/19/15.md index c6e1e56d04..2934bdadd0 100644 --- a/jos/19/15.md +++ b/jos/19/15.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -# Hannathon ... Iphtah El ... Kattath ... Nahalal ... Shimron ... Idalah ... Bethlehem +# Kattath ... Nahalal ... Shimron ... Idalah ... Bethlehem These are names of places. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) From bafd94a53a5ad1c6fb4b194dd61a2cae62735bf3 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 19:27:53 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 17/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- jos/19/18.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/jos/19/18.md b/jos/19/18.md index 7a982323ba..0b74fa60b5 100644 --- a/jos/19/18.md +++ b/jos/19/18.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -# Chesulloth ... Shunem ... Hapharaim ... Shion ... Anaharath +# Chesulloth ... Shunem These are names of cities. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) From 24d1480614358a7f6f1751123ba948d235321ad5 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 19:28:09 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 18/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- jos/19/19.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/jos/19/19.md b/jos/19/19.md index 7a982323ba..84a56e1e8b 100644 --- a/jos/19/19.md +++ b/jos/19/19.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -# Chesulloth ... Shunem ... Hapharaim ... Shion ... Anaharath +# Hapharaim ... Shion ... Anaharath These are names of cities. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) From 5cb00c80e35fc1e6ec6538b07e9e01a875ffc1c7 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 19:28:32 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 19/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- jos/19/20.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/jos/19/20.md b/jos/19/20.md index 708343952d..3f30750520 100644 --- a/jos/19/20.md +++ b/jos/19/20.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -# Rabbith ... Kishion ... Ebez ... Remeth ... En Gannim ... En Haddah ... Beth Pazzez ... Shahazumah +# Rabbith ... Kishion ... Ebez These are names of cities. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) From a6e346f64c5eb8dd63afca0449d1bb66bc9090ce Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 19:29:34 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 20/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- jos/19/21.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/jos/19/21.md b/jos/19/21.md index 708343952d..adca9db889 100644 --- a/jos/19/21.md +++ b/jos/19/21.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -# Rabbith ... Kishion ... Ebez ... Remeth ... En Gannim ... En Haddah ... Beth Pazzez ... Shahazumah +# Remeth ... En Gannim ... En Haddah ... Beth Pazzez These are names of cities. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) From 65aabf130c060fab953eb42a1715e961de94a789 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 19:30:37 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 21/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- jos/19/22.md | 7 +++---- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/jos/19/22.md b/jos/19/22.md index 12f152ac70..2bd37d8bd7 100644 --- a/jos/19/22.md +++ b/jos/19/22.md @@ -1,8 +1,7 @@ -# Rabbith ... Kishion ... Ebez ... Remeth ... En Gannim ... En Haddah ... Beth Pazzez ... Shahazumah - -These are names of cities. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) - # Tabor This is the name of a mountain. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) +# Shahazumah + +This is the name of a city. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) From 5e978c2556b67a24477bc6f2ec5ed4a2a1a9a7a0 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 19:31:00 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 22/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- jos/19/25.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/jos/19/25.md b/jos/19/25.md index 37cccedac4..08b5f0de19 100644 --- a/jos/19/25.md +++ b/jos/19/25.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -# Helkath, Hali, Beten, Akshaph, Allammelek, Amad, and Mishall ... Shihor Libnath +# Helkath, Hali, Beten, Akshaph These are the names of cities. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) From ff1e41397b67843b423f56cd4615d1a70c400f99 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 19:31:38 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 23/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- jos/19/26.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/jos/19/26.md b/jos/19/26.md index 37cccedac4..ed5a939074 100644 --- a/jos/19/26.md +++ b/jos/19/26.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -# Helkath, Hali, Beten, Akshaph, Allammelek, Amad, and Mishall ... Shihor Libnath +# Allammelek, Amad, and Mishall ... Shihor Libnath These are the names of cities. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) From 5d01356610e44ddee7d38914046a1084ee218428 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 19:33:50 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 24/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- jos/19/27.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/jos/19/27.md b/jos/19/27.md index 6507ab6f73..e9f990c342 100644 --- a/jos/19/27.md +++ b/jos/19/27.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -# Beth Dagon ... Valley of Iphtah El ... Beth Emek ... Neiel ... Kabul ... Abdon ... Rehob ... Hammon ... Kanah +# Beth Dagon ... Valley of Iphtah El ... Beth Emek ... Neiel ... Kabul These are the names of places. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) From a2e8673470b2fd7863c855f867b0bc4fec730be9 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 19:34:19 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 25/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- jos/19/28.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/jos/19/28.md b/jos/19/28.md index 6507ab6f73..aaa0ff3660 100644 --- a/jos/19/28.md +++ b/jos/19/28.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -# Beth Dagon ... Valley of Iphtah El ... Beth Emek ... Neiel ... Kabul ... Abdon ... Rehob ... Hammon ... Kanah +# Abdon ... Rehob ... Hammon ... Kanah These are the names of places. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) From 8d0a41eb3f264130fbf3907875d36e41de4f1a75 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 19:34:34 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 26/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- jos/19/29.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/jos/19/29.md b/jos/19/29.md index 0054ca4c0d..969aa823ad 100644 --- a/jos/19/29.md +++ b/jos/19/29.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -# Hosah ... Akzib ... Ummah ... Aphek ... Rehob +# Hosah ... Akzib These are the names of places. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) From bf3fa81ae7a323527ffffca4c1abb21ea5f2d2a7 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 19:34:50 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 27/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- jos/19/30.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/jos/19/30.md b/jos/19/30.md index 0054ca4c0d..61ad296eea 100644 --- a/jos/19/30.md +++ b/jos/19/30.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -# Hosah ... Akzib ... Ummah ... Aphek ... Rehob +# Ummah ... Aphek ... Rehob These are the names of places. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) From 12f693d82b1001b606e5696cf6b764129d7c0d16 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 19:35:10 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 28/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- jos/19/33.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/jos/19/33.md b/jos/19/33.md index 1499f8211f..5f1d3a43fa 100644 --- a/jos/19/33.md +++ b/jos/19/33.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -# Heleph ... Zaanannim ... Adami Nekeb ... Jabneel ... Lakkum ... Aznoth Tabor ... Hukkok +# Heleph ... Zaanannim ... Adami Nekeb ... Jabneel ... Lakkum These are the names of cities. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) From d3b1b317907c249720de334e8a0b038c3656c1c2 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 19:35:37 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 29/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- jos/19/34.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/jos/19/34.md b/jos/19/34.md index 1499f8211f..d96f5a4f8f 100644 --- a/jos/19/34.md +++ b/jos/19/34.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -# Heleph ... Zaanannim ... Adami Nekeb ... Jabneel ... Lakkum ... Aznoth Tabor ... Hukkok +# Aznoth Tabor ... Hukkok These are the names of cities. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) From ac4f96d2d73f239996a83759983b6c2049093cae Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 19:36:07 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 30/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- jos/19/35.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/jos/19/35.md b/jos/19/35.md index 6977377630..7894c1c022 100644 --- a/jos/19/35.md +++ b/jos/19/35.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -# Ziddim ... Zer ... Hammath ... Rakkath ... Kinnereth ... Adamah ... Ramah ... Hazor ... Edrei ... En Hazor +# Ziddim ... Zer ... Hammath ... Rakkath ... Kinnereth These are the names of cities. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) From 4eaa3ed05bbbde7b9f8ea1e9b88fdd7cc113cd57 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 19:36:36 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 31/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- jos/19/36.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/jos/19/36.md b/jos/19/36.md index 5fdc89fb2a..3a0f8d4820 100644 --- a/jos/19/36.md +++ b/jos/19/36.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -# Ziddim ... Zer ... Hammath ... Rakkath ... Kinnereth ... Adamah ... Ramah ... Hazor ... Edrei ... En Hazor +# Adamah ... Ramah ... Hazor These are the names of cities. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) From 6a2e14721d53a5cab1309bae80039e4cde8415e0 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 19:37:12 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 32/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- jos/19/37.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/jos/19/37.md b/jos/19/37.md index 5fdc89fb2a..cbb9dd367a 100644 --- a/jos/19/37.md +++ b/jos/19/37.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -# Ziddim ... Zer ... Hammath ... Rakkath ... Kinnereth ... Adamah ... Ramah ... Hazor ... Edrei ... En Hazor +# Kedesh ... Edrei ... En Hazor These are the names of cities. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) From 1ba891ebd1a13d6bc95091558e958a4935c3ed02 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 19:37:29 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 33/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- jos/19/41.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/jos/19/41.md b/jos/19/41.md index d727b8e151..e63df905db 100644 --- a/jos/19/41.md +++ b/jos/19/41.md @@ -2,7 +2,7 @@ The land that the tribe of Dan received is spoken of as if it was an inheritance that they received as a permanent possession. Alternate translation: "The territory of land that the tribe of Dan received as an inheritance" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]]) -# Zorah, Eshtaol, Ir Shemesh, Shaalabbin, Aijalon, and Ithlah +# Zorah, Eshtaol, Ir Shemesh These are the names of places. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) From 53fa058cd9cb39084cc2b23d46c4063bdfcc9293 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 19:37:56 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 34/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- jos/19/42.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/jos/19/42.md b/jos/19/42.md index a096e80b39..bcbfd0d63f 100644 --- a/jos/19/42.md +++ b/jos/19/42.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -# Zorah, Eshtaol, Ir Shemesh, Shaalabbin, Aijalon, and Ithlah +# Shaalabbin, Aijalon, and Ithlah These are the names of places. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) From c1a5191d1b2ef31b4b232d693fe78e4d2835184d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 19:38:14 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 35/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- jos/19/43.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/jos/19/43.md b/jos/19/43.md index 481e3e7b87..80258b8cd3 100644 --- a/jos/19/43.md +++ b/jos/19/43.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -# Elon, Timnah, Ekron, Eltekeh, Gibbethon, Baalath, Jehud, Bene Berak, Gath Rimmon, Me Jarkon, and Rakkon +# Elon, Timnah, Ekron These are the names of cities. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) From c2413fae66beec3858c12cc6bcf69cd07dcbd2b5 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 19:38:42 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 36/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- jos/19/44.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/jos/19/44.md b/jos/19/44.md index 481e3e7b87..15b6a8a539 100644 --- a/jos/19/44.md +++ b/jos/19/44.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -# Elon, Timnah, Ekron, Eltekeh, Gibbethon, Baalath, Jehud, Bene Berak, Gath Rimmon, Me Jarkon, and Rakkon +# Eltekeh, Gibbethon, Baalath These are the names of cities. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) From 2ca08b6623a7cad8ea7fbee71863c2a7a4b86227 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 19:39:04 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 37/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- jos/19/45.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/jos/19/45.md b/jos/19/45.md index 481e3e7b87..8b6ef31473 100644 --- a/jos/19/45.md +++ b/jos/19/45.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -# Elon, Timnah, Ekron, Eltekeh, Gibbethon, Baalath, Jehud, Bene Berak, Gath Rimmon, Me Jarkon, and Rakkon +# Jehud, Bene Berak, Gath Rimmon These are the names of cities. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) From b797bd7b599f1980476d8a69c7bb8e59aa98d987 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 19:39:27 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 38/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- jos/19/46.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/jos/19/46.md b/jos/19/46.md index 2537011ff4..60c64cdde7 100644 --- a/jos/19/46.md +++ b/jos/19/46.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -# Elon, Timnah, Ekron, Eltekeh, Gibbethon, Baalath, Jehud, Bene Berak, Gath Rimmon, Me Jarkon, and Rakkon +# Me Jarkon ... Rakkon These are the names of cities. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) From 925209e6e9f3f42c894ee05b8fb7df7ef880d1cd Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 19:41:55 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 39/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- jos/20/05.md | 5 ++--- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/jos/20/05.md b/jos/20/05.md index 177c352983..429bdd005f 100644 --- a/jos/20/05.md +++ b/jos/20/05.md @@ -2,7 +2,6 @@ Here the shed blood of a person represents their death. This can be stated in active form. See how you translated this in [Joshua 20:3](../20/03.md). Alternate translation: "avenge a person's death" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]]) -# killed his neighbor unintentionally ... accidentally killed the person - -These phrases mean the same thing. +# killed his neighbor unintentionally +accidentally killed his neighbor From e1d2be72ad94890f1dd62381b381b1c5f0b4355c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 19:42:19 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 40/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- jos/20/06.md | 4 ---- 1 file changed, 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/jos/20/06.md b/jos/20/06.md index ccbf20b403..9777e5ae0c 100644 --- a/jos/20/06.md +++ b/jos/20/06.md @@ -1,7 +1,3 @@ -# killed his neighbor unintentionally ... accidentally killed the person - -These phrases mean the same thing. - # stood before the assembly This is a phrase that describes standing to seek justice from a court of the assembly of his fellow citizens. From 1bbabe81db6fac84e2c9cf3c562be269299fa14e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 19:43:30 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 41/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- jos/21/04.md | 5 ----- 1 file changed, 5 deletions(-) diff --git a/jos/21/04.md b/jos/21/04.md index 0cf34eef48..c7735d369b 100644 --- a/jos/21/04.md +++ b/jos/21/04.md @@ -5,8 +5,3 @@ A random method of choosing to remove the choice from the leader's will, often d # Kohathites This priests in this group were descendants of Levi's son Kohath. A portion of them were also descendants of Aaron, Kohath's grandson. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) - -# thirteen cities ... ten cities - -numbers of cities (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-numbers]]) - From 54ff7a5ba366b7c66d7716154fcf8ff0c19576a7 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 19:43:51 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 42/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- jos/21/05.md | 4 ---- 1 file changed, 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/jos/21/05.md b/jos/21/05.md index cb363bdd64..0145d0ebd2 100644 --- a/jos/21/05.md +++ b/jos/21/05.md @@ -1,7 +1,3 @@ -# thirteen cities ... ten cities - -numbers of cities (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-numbers]]) - # half tribe Half the tribe because the other half received their inheritance before crossing the Jordan River. From 541f7ab42c470d38e5221a6adac26f79e82c5708 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 19:44:30 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 43/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- jos/21/13.md | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/jos/21/13.md b/jos/21/13.md index 836b47050f..da73c4df65 100644 --- a/jos/21/13.md +++ b/jos/21/13.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -# Libnah ... Jattir ... Eshtemoa ... Holon ... Debir ... Ain ... Juttah +# Libnah -These are all names of cities. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) +This is the name of a city. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) From 53cd9684a8edb2a83e3b94e2533e1ac49bf965e5 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 19:44:56 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 44/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- jos/21/14.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/jos/21/14.md b/jos/21/14.md index 836b47050f..94bc5d1aba 100644 --- a/jos/21/14.md +++ b/jos/21/14.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -# Libnah ... Jattir ... Eshtemoa ... Holon ... Debir ... Ain ... Juttah +# Jattir ... Eshtemoa These are all names of cities. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) From a0f476b7520139035a4a8887fc54b50c4d04db30 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 19:45:22 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 45/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- jos/21/15.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/jos/21/15.md b/jos/21/15.md index 836b47050f..ae21e5b69e 100644 --- a/jos/21/15.md +++ b/jos/21/15.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -# Libnah ... Jattir ... Eshtemoa ... Holon ... Debir ... Ain ... Juttah +# Holon ... Debir These are all names of cities. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) From 5e62aa4343e8851146139a8a9164c6091368c29c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 19:46:03 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 46/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- jos/21/16.md | 7 +------ 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 6 deletions(-) diff --git a/jos/21/16.md b/jos/21/16.md index 0f8122a4d3..e4b90a58f5 100644 --- a/jos/21/16.md +++ b/jos/21/16.md @@ -1,8 +1,3 @@ -# Libnah ... Jattir ... Eshtemoa ... Holon ... Debir ... Ain ... Juttah +# Ain ... Juttah These are all names of cities. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) - -# nine cities ... two tribes - -The number of cities and tribes in the passage. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-numbers]]) - From b930e820481db401a5687feb31469c6c4e75499d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 19:46:57 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 47/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- jos/21/17.md | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/jos/21/17.md b/jos/21/17.md index f897a7e897..d6ab64eef3 100644 --- a/jos/21/17.md +++ b/jos/21/17.md @@ -2,7 +2,7 @@ This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "The tribe of Benjamin gave Gibeon" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]]) -# Geba ... Anathoth ... Almon +# Geba -These are names of cities. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) +This is the name of a city. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) From b0b5c1d4993027bcdda2e000c6396d2f58d2ad8a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 19:47:15 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 48/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- jos/21/18.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/jos/21/18.md b/jos/21/18.md index fb8a0f7569..331341886f 100644 --- a/jos/21/18.md +++ b/jos/21/18.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -# Geba ... Anathoth ... Almon +# Anathoth ... Almon These are names of cities. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) From 0b57bbd024868f88abdc506cc40507978b1883bf Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 19:47:52 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 49/99] This note needs to be deleted. --- jos/21/21.md | 5 +---- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/jos/21/21.md b/jos/21/21.md index 406843a05f..10edbe3698 100644 --- a/jos/21/21.md +++ b/jos/21/21.md @@ -1,4 +1 @@ -# Gezer ... Kibzaim ... Beth Horon - -names of cities (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) - +# Delete \ No newline at end of file From 161d8874b89d392254d16b2b6b853792ca88d410 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 19:49:04 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 50/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- jos/21/21.md | 3 ++- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/jos/21/21.md b/jos/21/21.md index 10edbe3698..31654f5434 100644 --- a/jos/21/21.md +++ b/jos/21/21.md @@ -1 +1,2 @@ -# Delete \ No newline at end of file +# Gezer +This is the name of a city. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) \ No newline at end of file From e45637ef5c05668c0d6c393416b0855204b22b2c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 19:49:21 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 51/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- jos/21/22.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/jos/21/22.md b/jos/21/22.md index 1d88bc0ed5..e814960220 100644 --- a/jos/21/22.md +++ b/jos/21/22.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -# Gezer ... Kibzaim ... Beth Horon +# Kibzaim ... Beth Horon names of cities (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) From fb8076707a5f8a967e6c128527a5b055b6910212 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 19:49:54 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 52/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- jos/21/23.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/jos/21/23.md b/jos/21/23.md index 3731df3172..9613e5a43a 100644 --- a/jos/21/23.md +++ b/jos/21/23.md @@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "The tribe of Dan gave The priests in this group were descendants of Levi's son Kohath. A portion of them were also descendants of Aaron, Kohath's grandson. See how you translated a similar phrase in [Joshua 21:20](../21/20.md). (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) -# Eltekeh ... Gibbethon ... Aijalon ... Gath Rimmon +# Eltekeh ... Gibbethon These are names of cities. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) From 3b2f5976b797dd66a75fd934e66cc8aa9ebf6c47 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 19:50:24 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 53/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- jos/21/24.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/jos/21/24.md b/jos/21/24.md index dc72eb7e2e..3fb4fac601 100644 --- a/jos/21/24.md +++ b/jos/21/24.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -# Eltekeh ... Gibbethon ... Aijalon ... Gath Rimmon +# Aijalon ... Gath Rimmon These are names of cities. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) From 6ace86b018b5f9c7c3a72294a7ec7f50b98329fe Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 19:52:20 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 54/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- jos/21/25.md | 8 ++------ 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-) diff --git a/jos/21/25.md b/jos/21/25.md index 4ce563adea..1acd60a99f 100644 --- a/jos/21/25.md +++ b/jos/21/25.md @@ -6,11 +6,7 @@ This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "The half tribe of Man These are names of cities. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) -# two cities ... ten cities in all +# clan of Kohath -numbers of cities listed (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-numbers]]) - -# clan of Kohath ... clans of the Kohathites - -The priests in this group were descendants of Levi's son Kohath. A portion of them were also descendants of Aaron, Kohath's grandson. See how you translated this in [Joshua 21:2](../21/02.md). (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) +The priests in this group were descendants of Levi's son Kohath. A portion of them were also descendants of Aaron, Kohath's grandson. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) From b24123a41e8262459a94cf8335b5782c2c495940 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 19:54:16 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 55/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- jos/21/26.md | 8 ++------ 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-) diff --git a/jos/21/26.md b/jos/21/26.md index 0d0f3120be..7b04b5338b 100644 --- a/jos/21/26.md +++ b/jos/21/26.md @@ -1,8 +1,4 @@ -# two cities ... ten cities in all +# clans of the Kohathites -numbers of cities listed (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-numbers]]) - -# clan of Kohath ... clans of the Kohathites - -The priests in this group were descendants of Levi's son Kohath. A portion of them were also descendants of Aaron, Kohath's grandson. See how you translated this in [Joshua 21:2](../21/02.md). (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) +The priests in this group were descendants of Levi's son Kohath. A portion of them were also descendants of Aaron, Kohath's grandson. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) From 6f50a75c38fab762baddcd2720e28faf2a437921 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 19:55:50 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 56/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- jos/21/28.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/jos/21/28.md b/jos/21/28.md index bdf0a6975f..9d5e240eb4 100644 --- a/jos/21/28.md +++ b/jos/21/28.md @@ -2,7 +2,7 @@ This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "The clans of Gershon also received Kishion" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]]) -# Kishion ... Daberath ... Jarmuth ... En Gannim ... Mishal ... Abdon ... Helkath ... Rehob +# Kishion ... Daberath names of cities (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) From f19f4eed0b1eff09b0139dc9b44c1838220f2ed0 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 19:56:19 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 57/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- jos/21/29.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/jos/21/29.md b/jos/21/29.md index 13293b81be..8dffc46b36 100644 --- a/jos/21/29.md +++ b/jos/21/29.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -# Kishion ... Daberath ... Jarmuth ... En Gannim ... Mishal ... Abdon ... Helkath ... Rehob +# Jarmuth ... En Gannim names of cities (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) From 15a777a2fce4548d8a8a95142941d2fa60d565e9 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 19:57:03 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 58/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- jos/21/30.md | 7 +++---- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/jos/21/30.md b/jos/21/30.md index 67bc12b0f2..3f2a1568b2 100644 --- a/jos/21/30.md +++ b/jos/21/30.md @@ -1,8 +1,7 @@ -# Kishion ... Daberath ... Jarmuth ... En Gannim ... Mishal ... Abdon ... Helkath ... Rehob - -names of cities (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) - # From the tribe of Asher, they gave Mishal This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "They received from the tribe of Asher Mishal" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]]) +# Mishal ... Abdon + +names of cities (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) From 4b96bf81c9c809cf787cefe80ec62d36162ca513 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 19:57:53 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 59/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- jos/21/31.md | 7 +------ 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 6 deletions(-) diff --git a/jos/21/31.md b/jos/21/31.md index bbd4aa5abc..d97273006c 100644 --- a/jos/21/31.md +++ b/jos/21/31.md @@ -1,8 +1,3 @@ -# Kishion ... Daberath ... Jarmuth ... En Gannim ... Mishal ... Abdon ... Helkath ... Rehob +# Helkath ... Rehob names of cities (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) - -# four cities in all - -This refers to the number of cities listed. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-numbers]]) - From 50afb4f801accc782eaebbf37eb24e7346ad19f4 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 19:59:51 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 60/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- jos/21/34.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/jos/21/34.md b/jos/21/34.md index c96829e9d3..8c0903370b 100644 --- a/jos/21/34.md +++ b/jos/21/34.md @@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: The rest of the Levite name of a person (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) -# Jokneam ... Kartah ... Dimnah ... Nahalal +# Jokneam ... Kartah names of cities (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) From ea6babb99212644b690ae6f447155112639e14c7 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 20:00:21 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 61/99] Update 'jos/21/34.md' --- jos/21/34.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/jos/21/34.md b/jos/21/34.md index 8c0903370b..4167af8fb8 100644 --- a/jos/21/34.md +++ b/jos/21/34.md @@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: The rest of the Levite # Merari -name of a person (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) +name of a man (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) # Jokneam ... Kartah From 04c9bac0fd20313e1f7899244bc3c25c9cd8c3bf Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 20:00:45 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 62/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- jos/21/35.md | 7 +------ 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 6 deletions(-) diff --git a/jos/21/35.md b/jos/21/35.md index 3d96294da7..d5d1e571ac 100644 --- a/jos/21/35.md +++ b/jos/21/35.md @@ -1,8 +1,3 @@ -# Jokneam ... Kartah ... Dimnah ... Nahalal +# imnah ... Nahalal names of cities (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) - -# four cities in all - -The cities are referred to in total as a number. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-numbers]]) - From 80ba4408873e819740190c154e1646ae6fac871f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 20:01:09 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 63/99] Update 'jos/21/35.md' --- jos/21/35.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/jos/21/35.md b/jos/21/35.md index d5d1e571ac..0c79d5d24c 100644 --- a/jos/21/35.md +++ b/jos/21/35.md @@ -1,3 +1,3 @@ -# imnah ... Nahalal +# Dimnah ... Nahalal names of cities (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) From e9ea90c1e5e8e73873f97cf050ae644f6c86f7d3 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 20:01:53 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 64/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- jos/21/36.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/jos/21/36.md b/jos/21/36.md index 143a5f6528..8b397bb847 100644 --- a/jos/21/36.md +++ b/jos/21/36.md @@ -2,7 +2,7 @@ This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "The clans of Merari received from the tribe of Reuben Bezer" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]]) -# Bezer ... Jahaz ... Kedemoth ... Mephaath ... Ramoth +# Bezer ... Jahaz names of cities (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) From 3197dc2d5b595bcb35eb274146bfe04f2c6ba5bb Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 20:02:29 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 65/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- jos/21/37.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/jos/21/37.md b/jos/21/37.md index c6e567fb01..0bd0ca71d3 100644 --- a/jos/21/37.md +++ b/jos/21/37.md @@ -2,7 +2,7 @@ This refers to the total number of cities. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-numbers]]) -# Bezer ... Jahaz ... Kedemoth ... Mephaath ... Ramoth +# Kedemoth ... Mephaath names of cities (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) From 3e50effdea58e9ba75561685b89d0746981f0ec6 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 20:03:57 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 66/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- jos/21/38.md | 8 ++------ 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-) diff --git a/jos/21/38.md b/jos/21/38.md index d4989a65fc..560b99b89f 100644 --- a/jos/21/38.md +++ b/jos/21/38.md @@ -1,12 +1,8 @@ -# Bezer ... Jahaz ... Kedemoth ... Mephaath ... Ramoth - -names of cities (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) - # Out of the tribe of Gad they were given Ramoth This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "They received from the tribe of Gad Ramoth" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]]) -# Mahanaim +# Ramoth ... Mahanaim -This is the name of a city. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) +These are the names of cities. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) From 2cba78e10db32256169355ae9626994c38ac895b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 20:07:38 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 67/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- jos/22/22.md | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/jos/22/22.md b/jos/22/22.md index 0276eb567e..90f58282f0 100644 --- a/jos/22/22.md +++ b/jos/22/22.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -# If it was in rebellion ... let Yahweh make us pay for it +# If it was in rebellion ... on this day -The three tribes are making two hypothetical statements that they insist are not true. They did not build the altar to worship another god. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-hypo]]) +The three tribes are making a hypothetical statement that they insist are not true. They did not build the altar in rebellion or breach of faith. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-hypo]]) From b1a18a3338ce223bfe014cedd8277a35fada231a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 20:08:32 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 68/99] Update 'jos/22/22.md' --- jos/22/22.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/jos/22/22.md b/jos/22/22.md index 90f58282f0..5a4dffc634 100644 --- a/jos/22/22.md +++ b/jos/22/22.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ # If it was in rebellion ... on this day -The three tribes are making a hypothetical statement that they insist are not true. They did not build the altar in rebellion or breach of faith. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-hypo]]) +The three tribes are making a hypothetical statement that they insist is not true. They did not build the altar in rebellion or breach of faith. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-hypo]]) From 3d3209ba182ea94be6db9a4a974fb5f661813f92 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 20:08:59 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 69/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- jos/22/23.md | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/jos/22/23.md b/jos/22/23.md index 0276eb567e..6973f1c68d 100644 --- a/jos/22/23.md +++ b/jos/22/23.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -# If it was in rebellion ... let Yahweh make us pay for it +# If we built ... let Yahweh make us pay for it -The three tribes are making two hypothetical statements that they insist are not true. They did not build the altar to worship another god. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-hypo]]) +The three tribes are making a hypothetical statement that they insist is not true. They did not build the altar to worship another god. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-hypo]]) From 09ccc60685056e607ca8a9a42854f002f3ec1b0d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 20:11:23 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 70/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- jos/23/02.md | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/jos/23/02.md b/jos/23/02.md index 917eeb2cbc..d7251bfdcb 100644 --- a/jos/23/02.md +++ b/jos/23/02.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -# very old +# old and well advanced in years -lived for many years +This doublet can be translated as "very old." (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-doublet]]) From 563aeacfdbba482842e5617ad32d8199a4bb4549 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 20:12:35 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 71/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- jos/24/05.md | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/jos/24/05.md b/jos/24/05.md index 48c71932b3..4335d20d04 100644 --- a/jos/24/05.md +++ b/jos/24/05.md @@ -2,7 +2,7 @@ Joshua continues quoting what Yahweh said about his dealings with his people. -# brought you out ... brought your ancestors out +# brought you out -Yahweh continually alternates between these two phrases, which both refer to all the Israelites, past and present. The word "you" is plural throughout this speech and refers to the entire nation of Israel. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-you]]) +The word "you" is plural and refers to the entire nation of Israel. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-you]]) From 868dd1675ac54b9857d4d90322c6c63ea413a531 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 20:12:57 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 72/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- jos/24/06.md | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/jos/24/06.md b/jos/24/06.md index 6fae31e9a6..fa2a5c3981 100644 --- a/jos/24/06.md +++ b/jos/24/06.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -# brought you out ... brought your ancestors out +# brought your ancestors out -Yahweh continually alternates between these two phrases, which both refer to all the Israelites, past and present. The word "you" is plural throughout this speech and refers to the entire nation of Israel. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-you]]) +The word "your" is plural throughout this speech and refers to the entire nation of Israel. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-you]]) From 84ac496290d570d033d59a3c1ef7dd9aca5cae45 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 20:15:14 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 73/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- jol/01/06.md | 6 +++--- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/jol/01/06.md b/jol/01/06.md index cbf88b8cc0..447330b030 100644 --- a/jol/01/06.md +++ b/jol/01/06.md @@ -2,7 +2,7 @@ The locust swarm is like an invading army. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]]) -# His teeth ... he has the teeth ... He has made ... He has stripped +# His teeth ... he has the teeth The locusts are like a nation which is like one person. You can refer to the nation as "it," or to the locusts as "they," or to the invader as one person. @@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ The locusts are like a nation which is like one person. You can refer to the nat These two lines share similar meanings. The reference to the locusts' teeth being as sharp as lions' teeth emphasize how fierce they are as they eat all of the crops of the land. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-parallelism]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]]) -# my land ... my vineyard ... my fig tree +# my land -Yahweh's land, vineyard, and fig tree +Yahweh's land From bf2a751e8f8510131d2b62ba9a387c90693f1080 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 20:15:51 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 74/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- jol/01/07.md | 6 +++--- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/jol/01/07.md b/jol/01/07.md index f437350c4f..8bea2128c3 100644 --- a/jol/01/07.md +++ b/jol/01/07.md @@ -1,10 +1,10 @@ -# His teeth ... he has the teeth ... He has made ... He has stripped +# He has made ... He has stripped The locusts are like a nation which is like one person. You can refer to the nation as "it," or to the locusts as "they," or to the invader as one person. -# my land ... my vineyard ... my fig tree +# my vineyard ... my fig tree -Yahweh's land, vineyard, and fig tree +Yahweh's vineyard and fig tree # desolate From 005fe89da82ed70ba6bb858b76be69deff5d8e19 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 20:17:38 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 75/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- job/01/04.md | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/job/01/04.md b/job/01/04.md index beced8525d..636654f232 100644 --- a/job/01/04.md +++ b/job/01/04.md @@ -2,9 +2,9 @@ The word "day" perhaps refers to the day when they celebrated the son's birth. But it at least refers to the idea that the sons each took a turn in holding a feast. Alternate translation: "On each son's birthday, the son would give" or "Each son in turn would give" -# he would give ... They would send and call for ... Job would send ... he would consecrate ... He would rise early in the morning and offer ... he would say +# he would give ... They would send and call for -"he habitually gave ... They habitually sent and called for ... Job habitually sent ... he habitually consecrated ... He habitually rose early in the morning and offered ... he habitually said" +"he habitually gave ... They habitually sent and called for " # with them From 585fe5bd2e1b1dd801f083b8e243df851cbbe79b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 20:18:13 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 76/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- job/01/05.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/job/01/05.md b/job/01/05.md index 71d6df9584..3339f2b1b4 100644 --- a/job/01/05.md +++ b/job/01/05.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -# he would give ... They would send and call for ... Job would send ... he would consecrate ... He would rise early in the morning and offer ... he would say +# Job would send ... he would consecrate ... He would rise early in the morning and offer ... he would say "he habitually gave ... They habitually sent and called for ... Job habitually sent ... he habitually consecrated ... He habitually rose early in the morning and offered ... he habitually said" From 97e2ea7157086def6e828561c29a767655d0bb6f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 20:21:31 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 77/99] Update 'job/03/13.md' --- job/03/13.md | 3 +++ 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+) diff --git a/job/03/13.md b/job/03/13.md index e8e79c9ca0..ab79f73207 100644 --- a/job/03/13.md +++ b/job/03/13.md @@ -1,3 +1,6 @@ +# Connecting Statement: + +Job begins talking about what would have been true if he had never been born. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-hypo]]) # For now I would have been lying down quietly. I would have slept and been at rest Job uses two sentences to think about what it would be like if he had never been born or had died at birth. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-parallelism]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-euphemism]]) From 1d610825381bd1b84ccdfbd6121dad4531371d7f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 20:22:02 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 78/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- job/03/15.md | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/job/03/15.md b/job/03/15.md index d84e5c5456..af78545762 100644 --- a/job/03/15.md +++ b/job/03/15.md @@ -1,8 +1,8 @@ # General Information: -Job continues his thoughts about dying before he was born. +Job continues talking about what would have been true if he had never been born. -# Or I would have been lying ... that never see the light +# Or I would have been lying This describes something that might have happened but did not happen. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-hypo]]) From c4452bd6b7c3cae52971a9c2ed5e8df2fbbebe62 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 20:23:42 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 79/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- job/03/16.md | 10 +++------- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-) diff --git a/job/03/16.md b/job/03/16.md index 0cde9fd591..ba180b26d4 100644 --- a/job/03/16.md +++ b/job/03/16.md @@ -1,10 +1,6 @@ -# Or I would have been lying ... that never see the light +# General Information: -This describes something that might have happened but did not happen. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-hypo]]) - -# Or perhaps I would have been stillborn, like infants that never see the light - -Job uses parallelism to emphasize what he is saying. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-parallelism]]) +Job continues talking about what would have been true if he had never been born. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-hypo]]) # I would have been stillborn @@ -12,7 +8,7 @@ Job uses parallelism to emphasize what he is saying. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/tran # like infants that never see the light -"like babies who had never been born" +"like babies who have never been born" # infants From a07d12e296e2b6205224ba9834bab6a61a965952 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 20:48:50 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 80/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- job/03/20.md | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/job/03/20.md b/job/03/20.md index afe36664bf..8ac581983e 100644 --- a/job/03/20.md +++ b/job/03/20.md @@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ Here Job is wondering why people must stay alive and suffer. Alternate translati Here light represents life. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]]) -# Why is life given to the one who is bitter in soul ... hidden treasure? +# Why is life given to the one who is bitter in soul -"why does God give life to a miserable person?" Alternate translation: "I do not understand why God gives life to a person who is very unhappy ... hidden treasure" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-rquestion]]) +"why does God give life to a miserable person?" Alternate translation: "I do not understand why God gives life to a person who is very unhappy" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-rquestion]]) From 12ae68697db2727b4d087c190c25f49f7ec500d5 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 20:52:43 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 81/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- job/03/21.md | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/job/03/21.md b/job/03/21.md index 8a3f68d36b..da6af3afa3 100644 --- a/job/03/21.md +++ b/job/03/21.md @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ -# Why is life given to the one who is bitter in soul ... hidden treasure? +# to one who longs ... for hidden treasure -"why does God give life to a miserable person?" Alternate translation: "I do not understand why God gives life to a person who is very unhappy ... hidden treasure" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-rquestion]]) +This is the end of the question that Job begins asking with the words "Why is life given ... bitter in soul" (verse 20). # to one who longs for death without it coming From 8847f465da102eae9be9d7b036156759b7456a26 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 20:53:42 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 82/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- job/05/02.md | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/job/05/02.md b/job/05/02.md index 627acc874c..689fa12e07 100644 --- a/job/05/02.md +++ b/job/05/02.md @@ -2,7 +2,7 @@ "jealousy kills anyone who acts ignorantly and impulsively" -# the silly one ... a foolish person +# the silly one -This refers to any silly person and any foolish person. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-genericnoun]]) +any silly person (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-genericnoun]]) From 3ca7225a376a8c3ca4809b289d74a2d75d4260ed Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 20:54:07 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 83/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- job/05/03.md | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/job/05/03.md b/job/05/03.md index 57c478e7c5..f36caa6635 100644 --- a/job/05/03.md +++ b/job/05/03.md @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ -# the silly one ... a foolish person +# a foolish person -This refers to any silly person and any foolish person. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-genericnoun]]) +any foolish person (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-genericnoun]]) # a foolish person taking root From b3a6833dbf7b1922cb5775c234dfca785b72b673 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 21:03:12 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 84/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- job/07/02.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/job/07/02.md b/job/07/02.md index 964fac36d7..f7ea2067c0 100644 --- a/job/07/02.md +++ b/job/07/02.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -# Like a slave ... like a hired man ... so I have been ... given trouble-filled nights +# Like a slave ... like a hired man Job compares his misery and trouble to that of the slave and hired man. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-simile]]) From 86e6e396376366c83050d93d12650314cb77f81e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 21:10:32 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 85/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- job/07/03.md | 8 ++------ 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-) diff --git a/job/07/03.md b/job/07/03.md index 1e09b4955b..e0fe3a75cd 100644 --- a/job/07/03.md +++ b/job/07/03.md @@ -1,12 +1,8 @@ -# Like a slave ... like a hired man ... so I have been ... given trouble-filled nights - -Job compares his misery and trouble to that of the slave and hired man. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-simile]]) - -# so I have been made to endure months of misery; I have been given trouble-filled nights +misery; I have been given trouble-filled nights This can be translated in active form. Alternate translation: "so I endure months of misery; I get trouble-filled nights" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]]) # months of misery -The abstract noun "misery" can be translated as the adjective "miserable." Alternate translation: "miserable months" or "empty months" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-explicit]]) +The abstract noun "misery" can be translated as the adjective "miserable." Alternate translation: "months when I am miserable" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-explicit]]) From 485d2e862cc5b25fb8a29447374199fab49a4c24 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 21:11:35 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 86/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- job/07/03.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/job/07/03.md b/job/07/03.md index e0fe3a75cd..c49b404e99 100644 --- a/job/07/03.md +++ b/job/07/03.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -misery; I have been given trouble-filled nights +# I have been made to endure months of misery; I have been given trouble-filled nights This can be translated in active form. Alternate translation: "so I endure months of misery; I get trouble-filled nights" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]]) From 281a5d2072883cbc3e89ba6a06639fd673bc7e38 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 21:16:05 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 87/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- job/07/17.md | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/job/07/17.md b/job/07/17.md index d10d1e2650..987321cd8d 100644 --- a/job/07/17.md +++ b/job/07/17.md @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ -# What is man that ... every moment? +# Connecting Statement: -Job asks this question to emphasize that he wonders why God pays attention to people. It can be translated as a statement. Alternate translation: "Tell me what man is that ... every moment." (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-rquestion]]) +Job asks a rhetorical question to say that he does not understand why God should pay attention to people. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-rquestion]]) # set your mind on him From 5399e3249bf80b6f95fb2098019b5a5c617233b7 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 21:19:13 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 88/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- job/07/18.md | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/job/07/18.md b/job/07/18.md index 80dcb370be..bd7fd608d5 100644 --- a/job/07/18.md +++ b/job/07/18.md @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ -# What is man that ... every moment? +# that you should observe ... every moment? -Job asks this question to emphasize that he wonders why God pays attention to people. It can be translated as a statement. Alternate translation: "Tell me what man is that ... every moment." (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-rquestion]]) +This is the end of the rhetorical question that Job begins asking with the words "What is man that" in verse 17. The question can be translated as a statement. "Tell me what man is that ... mind on him, that you should observe ... every moment." or "I do not understand what man is that ... mind on him, that you should observe ... every moment." (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-rquestion]]) # observe him From f055cd26575dde57ff0784582da4fe5b056f2798 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 21:21:17 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 89/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- job/10/05.md | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/job/10/05.md b/job/10/05.md index d42b8ea18c..df1b38047a 100644 --- a/job/10/05.md +++ b/job/10/05.md @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ -# Are your days like the days of mankind or your years like the years of people ... and there is no one who can rescue me from your hand? +# Connecting Statement: -This question expects a negative answer to emphasize that God is eternal and man's days are limited. It can be expressed as a statement. Alternate translation: "Your days are not like the days of mankind and your years are not like the years of people ... and there is no one who can rescue me from your hand." (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-rquestion]]) +Job begins to ask a rhetorical question. He is saying that God lives forever but people live only for a short time, so God should not worry about Job's sins. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-rquestion]]) # your days like the days of mankind ... your years like the years of people From 1cd6eb30e8c7b7c3ca3b5f6d8601e542360aece5 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 21:26:57 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 90/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- job/10/06.md | 12 ++++-------- 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-) diff --git a/job/10/06.md b/job/10/06.md index 523f975a6b..7eab632f07 100644 --- a/job/10/06.md +++ b/job/10/06.md @@ -1,12 +1,8 @@ -# Are your days like the days of mankind or your years like the years of people ... and there is no one who can rescue me from your hand? +# Connecting Statement: -This question expects a negative answer to emphasize that God is eternal and man's days are limited. It can be expressed as a statement. Alternate translation: "Your days are not like the days of mankind and your years are not like the years of people ... and there is no one who can rescue me from your hand." (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-rquestion]]) +Job continues the rhetorical question he began in verse 5. (See: rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-rquestion) -# inquire after my iniquity ... search after my sin +# inquire after my iniquity -These two phrases have nearly the same meaning. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-parallelism]]) - -# inquire after - -"seek after" +"look to see if I have committed iniquity" From ede30d3a8309fb6ab88001d678f5d3f99dd2fd2d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 21:30:08 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 91/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- job/10/07.md | 8 ++++++-- 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/job/10/07.md b/job/10/07.md index ef81fcc895..e431cbb2b2 100644 --- a/job/10/07.md +++ b/job/10/07.md @@ -1,6 +1,10 @@ -# Are your days like the days of mankind or your years like the years of people ... and there is no one who can rescue me from your hand? +# Connecting Statement: -This question expects a negative answer to emphasize that God is eternal and man's days are limited. It can be expressed as a statement. Alternate translation: "Your days are not like the days of mankind and your years are not like the years of people ... and there is no one who can rescue me from your hand." (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-rquestion]]) +This is the end of the rhetorical question that begins with the words "Are your days" in verse 5. + +# although you know ... from your hand? + +This is the end of the rhetorical question that begins with the words "Are your days" in verse 5. The whole question can be translated as a statement. "Your days are not like the days of mankind, and your years are not like the years of people, so you should not inquire after my iniquity and search after my sin, because you know I am not guilty and there is no one who can rescue me from your hand." (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-rquestion]]) # from your hand From 62c638c41ec0cd181df2fbf06a681fed881134a7 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 21:34:39 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 92/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- job/12/07.md | 6 +++--- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/job/12/07.md b/job/12/07.md index 6547184692..cebc320170 100644 --- a/job/12/07.md +++ b/job/12/07.md @@ -1,10 +1,10 @@ -# But now ask ... will declare to you +# But now ask the beasts ... the birds ... they will tell you -These 4 statements all express the idea that the beasts, the birds, the earth, and the fish understand God better than Job's friends do. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-parallelism]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-irony]]) +Job is saying that the beasts and the birds understand God better than Job's friends do. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-irony]]) # you -This is plural in verses 7 and 8. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-you]]) +All occurrences of "you" are plural. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-you]]) # But now ask the beasts, and they will teach you From 7caffc78c233744ae79786fd3bbb9407d6f4a43f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 21:38:04 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 93/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- job/12/08.md | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/job/12/08.md b/job/12/08.md index ee26200da3..33339a94db 100644 --- a/job/12/08.md +++ b/job/12/08.md @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ -# But now ask ... will declare to you +# speak to the earth ... will declare to you -These 4 statements all express the idea that the beasts, the birds, the earth, and the fish understand God better than Job's friends do. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-parallelism]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-irony]]) +Job is saying that the beasts, the birds, the earth, and the fish understand God better than Job's friends do. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-irony]]) # Or speak to the earth, and it will teach you From 3a245001f01e251ed9d4fcfe1e9599359b6ae2b6 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 21:49:33 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 94/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- job/14/11.md | 9 ++++----- 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-) diff --git a/job/14/11.md b/job/14/11.md index b74cabed83..c6530ca3da 100644 --- a/job/14/11.md +++ b/job/14/11.md @@ -1,8 +1,7 @@ -# As water disappears from a lake ... and do not rise again +# Connecting Statement: -The fact that death cannot be reversed is compared to water that dried up and cannot return. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-simile]]) +Job begins to use word pictures to describe how it is that "man dies; he becomes weak" (verse 10). -# As water disappears ... as a river loses - -These two phrases are describing the same thought and are repeated to emphasize the fact that death is final. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-parallelism]]) +# As water disappears from a lake ... dries up +Water that has dried up from a lake or a river cannot return, and once a person dies or grows old, he cannot become young again. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-simile]]) From bd58839416126ef431280c842a27403fc6f71855 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 21:52:13 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 95/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- job/14/12.md | 9 ++------- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-) diff --git a/job/14/12.md b/job/14/12.md index 19bb4eb100..ee7183304b 100644 --- a/job/14/12.md +++ b/job/14/12.md @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ -# As water disappears from a lake ... and do not rise again +# Connecting Statement: -The fact that death cannot be reversed is compared to water that dried up and cannot return. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-simile]]) +Job finishes comparing growing old and dying with water drying up (verse 11). # so people lie down @@ -9,8 +9,3 @@ Lying down represents dying. Alternate translation: "so people die" (See: [[rc:/ # do not rise again Rising again represents living again. Alternate translation: "do not live again" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]]) - -# they will not awake nor be roused out of their sleep - -These two phrases mean the same thing and are used together to emphasize that death is final. Sleeping represents dying and awaking represents living again. Alternate translation: "people who die will not live again and be raised from death" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-parallelism]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]]) - From ebe16a899adf4fee0cbb7e6ffb0aa50f9bd90c18 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 21:56:07 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 96/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- job/14/15.md | 7 +------ 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 6 deletions(-) diff --git a/job/14/15.md b/job/14/15.md index 1f0ee25992..2a94b42bf3 100644 --- a/job/14/15.md +++ b/job/14/15.md @@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ Job continues speaking to God. # I would answer -"I would respond" +"I would do what you wanted me to do" # You would have a desire for @@ -13,8 +13,3 @@ The noun "desire" can be expressed with the verbs "desire" or "want." Alternate # for the work of your hands Here God's hands represent him making things. Job refers to himself as the work of God's hands. Alternate translation: "for me, whom you have made" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-123person]]) - -# you would not keep ... My transgression would be ... you would cover up - -These three lines express the same thought and are used together to emphasize his confidence that God would forgive him. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-parallelism]]) - From 48fbad6d770d462389f151ea83cc1344244a15b5 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 21:57:07 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 97/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- job/14/16.md | 5 ----- 1 file changed, 5 deletions(-) diff --git a/job/14/16.md b/job/14/16.md index a2110b3109..a870117753 100644 --- a/job/14/16.md +++ b/job/14/16.md @@ -6,11 +6,6 @@ These two verbs together express a single action. Alternate translation: "attent Footsteps represent his life or what he does. Alternate translation: "my life" or "the things I do" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]]) -# you would not keep ... My transgression would be ... you would cover up - -These three lines express the same thought and are used together to emphasize his confidence that God would forgive him. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-parallelism]]) - # you would not keep track of my sin Keeping track of Job's sin represents thinking about his sin. Alternate translation: "you would not look at my sin" or "you would not think about my sin" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]]) - From d10a066b47a841d6415dce9262c0198207086d32 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 21:57:32 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 98/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- job/14/17.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/job/14/17.md b/job/14/17.md index 26765447a6..e0a341f3b4 100644 --- a/job/14/17.md +++ b/job/14/17.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -# you would not keep ... My transgression would be ... you would cover up +# My transgression would be ... you would cover up These three lines express the same thought and are used together to emphasize his confidence that God would forgive him. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-parallelism]]) From 8b185010dbaa35196b330d4b8d4145210e1e1c65 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2018 21:59:47 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 99/99] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- job/17/13.md | 9 ++------- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-) diff --git a/job/17/13.md b/job/17/13.md index 5eaed9487e..3420c56313 100644 --- a/job/17/13.md +++ b/job/17/13.md @@ -2,9 +2,9 @@ Job continues to speak. -# If the only home ... and if I have spread ... and if I have said +# If the only home ... and if I have spread -All instances of "if" here have the meaning of "since"; Job is speaking as if all these things were true. "Since the only home ... and since I have spread ... and since I have said" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-hypo]]) +The instances of "if" here have the meaning of "since"; Job is speaking as if all these things were true. "Since the only home ... and since I have spread" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-hypo]]) # have spread my couch in the darkness @@ -13,8 +13,3 @@ Here Job speaks of being prepared to die as having laid his bed in the darkness. # have spread my couch "have made my bed" - -# I have said to the pit ... and to the worm - -These two lines are a variation to each other and are used together to emphasize how desperate Job is. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-parallelism]]) -