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 The words "blameless" and "pure" are very similar in meaning and are used together to strenghten the idea. Alternate translation: "completely innocent" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-doublet]])
 
-# so that you may shine as lights in the world
+# in the middle of a crooked and depraved generation
 
-Light represents goodness and truth. Shining as lights in the world represents living in a good and righteous way so that people in the world can see that God is good and true. Alternate translation:  "so that you will be like lights in the world" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]])
+The words "crooked" and "depraved" are used together to emphasize that the people are very sinful. Alternate translation: "among very sinful people" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-doublet]])
 
-# in the middle of a crooked and depraved generation, in which you shine as lights in the world
+# in which you shine as lights in the world
 
-Here the word "world" refers to the people of the world. The words "crooked" and "depraved" are used together to emphasize that the people are very sinful. Alternate translation: "in the world, among people who are very sinful" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-doublet]])
+Shining as lights in the world represents living in a good and righteous way so that people in the world can see that God is good and true. Alternate translation: "among whom your righteous lives are like lights in the world" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]])