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@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ In Israel, water from the rain flows into deep and narrow valleys. This creates
 
 # If a man gave ... the offer would be utterly despised
 
-This is something that could possibly happen. Alternate translation: "Even if a man ... he would be utterly despised" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-hypo]])
+Love is so valuable that even all a man's possessions would not be enough to buy love. Some versions translate this as "Even if a man ... he would be utterly despised." 
 
 # gave
 
@@ -44,5 +44,5 @@ offered to give
 
 # the offer would be utterly despised
 
-This can be translated in active form. Alternate translation: "people would completely despise him" or "people would harshly ridicule him" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]])
+This can be translated in active form. Alternate translation: "people would completely despise it" or "people would harshly ridicule him" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]])