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 # Then a voice came out of the cloud
 
-The "voice" is a metonym for God. Also, the "voice" is described as "coming out of the cloud," meaning that they heard God speaking from the cloud. AT: "Then God spoke from the cloud" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-personification]])
+Here "a voice came out" is a metonym for for someone speaking. It can also be stated clearly who spoke. AT: "Then someone spoke from the cloud" or "Then God spoke from the cloud" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-explicit]])
 
 # This is my beloved Son. Listen to him