From 09d1dbcd86b58597ac1194829bff6456759c38c7 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: hmw3 <henry_whitney@wycliffeassociates.org>
Date: Thu, 19 Oct 2017 15:30:37 -0400
Subject: [PATCH] Fixing one-word snippets.

---
 act/02/08.md |  2 +-
 act/02/20.md |  2 +-
 act/03/17.md |  4 ++--
 act/04/23.md |  2 +-
 act/06/01.md |  4 ++--
 act/06/12.md |  4 ++--
 act/14/08.md | 10 +++++-----
 act/16/19.md |  2 +-
 act/17/08.md |  4 ++--
 act/17/13.md |  4 ----
 act/19/35.md |  2 +-
 act/19/38.md |  2 +-
 act/21/07.md |  2 +-
 amo/02/09.md |  6 +++---
 amo/06/03.md |  2 +-
 col/03/05.md |  4 ++--
 dan/01/03.md |  2 +-
 dan/03/11.md |  2 +-
 dan/03/26.md |  4 ++--
 dan/06/01.md |  4 ++--
 dan/10/01.md |  2 +-
 dan/12/12.md |  4 ++--
 deu/06/24.md |  2 +-
 deu/08/18.md |  2 +-
 deu/22/12.md |  2 +-
 deu/32/33.md |  2 +-
 deu/33/11.md |  2 +-
 27 files changed, 40 insertions(+), 44 deletions(-)

diff --git a/act/02/08.md b/act/02/08.md
index a47a47ae2..d19e3ef3a 100644
--- a/act/02/08.md
+++ b/act/02/08.md
@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ This lists some of the many nations, regions, and cities from which they came. (
 
 # proselytes
 
-"converts to the Jewish religion"
+converts to the Jewish religion
 
 # translationWords
 
diff --git a/act/02/20.md b/act/02/20.md
index e81fedbd0..1a57777d5 100644
--- a/act/02/20.md
+++ b/act/02/20.md
@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ The words "great" and "remarkable" share similar meanings and emphasize the inte
 
 # remarkable
 
-"unusual" or "important"
+great and beautiful
 
 # everyone who calls on the name of the Lord will be saved
 
diff --git a/act/03/17.md b/act/03/17.md
index 0fa3b42b6..d6749e044 100644
--- a/act/03/17.md
+++ b/act/03/17.md
@@ -10,9 +10,9 @@ Possible meanings are 1) that the people did not know that Jesus was the Messiah
 
 When the prophets spoke, it was as though God himself was speaking because he told them what to say. AT: "God foretold by telling all of the prophets what to speak"
 
-# foretold
+# God foretold
 
-"told ahead of time" or "told before it happened"
+"God spoke about ahead of time" or "God told about before they happened"
 
 # the mouth of all the prophets
 
diff --git a/act/04/23.md b/act/04/23.md
index d1ff175d6..ba6945456 100644
--- a/act/04/23.md
+++ b/act/04/23.md
@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ These "useless things" consist of plans to oppose God. AT: "the peoples imagine
 
 # peoples
 
-"people groups" or "tribes"
+people groups
 
 # translationWords
 
diff --git a/act/06/01.md b/act/06/01.md
index f1e565d37..d20a09cad 100644
--- a/act/06/01.md
+++ b/act/06/01.md
@@ -6,9 +6,9 @@ This is the beginning of a new part of the story. Luke gives important backgroun
 
 Consider how new parts of a story are introduced in your language. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/writing-newevent]])
 
-# multiplying
+# was multiplying
 
-"greatly increasing"
+"was greatly increasing"
 
 # Grecian Jews
 
diff --git a/act/06/12.md b/act/06/12.md
index 5073c67a2..9cff7a8b4 100644
--- a/act/06/12.md
+++ b/act/06/12.md
@@ -10,9 +10,9 @@ Here the word "we" refers only to the false witness that they brought to testify
 
 "caused the people, the elders, and the scribes to be very angry at Stephen"
 
-# seized
+# seized him
 
-"grabbed"
+"grabbed him and held him so he could not get away"
 
 # does not stop speaking
 
diff --git a/act/14/08.md b/act/14/08.md
index 75f100b26..2bf0c1bdd 100644
--- a/act/14/08.md
+++ b/act/14/08.md
@@ -14,13 +14,13 @@ This introduces a new person in the story. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/writ
 
 "unable to move his legs" or "unable to walk on his feet"
 
-# cripple
-
-"lame"
-
 # a cripple from his mother's womb
 
-"a cripple from birth"
+"having been born as a cripple"
+
+# cripple
+
+person who cannot walk
 
 # Paul fixed his eyes on him
 
diff --git a/act/16/19.md b/act/16/19.md
index 57b5439c8..8fde1c542 100644
--- a/act/16/19.md
+++ b/act/16/19.md
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ It can be stated clearly why they no longer hoped to make money. AT: "When her m
 
 # magistrates
 
-"rulers" or "judges"
+rulers, judges
 
 # These men are stirring up our city
 
diff --git a/act/17/08.md b/act/17/08.md
index 689e913b1..3bc51b6ac 100644
--- a/act/17/08.md
+++ b/act/17/08.md
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
-# disturbed
+# were disturbed
 
-"worried" or "anxious"
+"were worried"
 
 # made Jason and the rest pay money as security
 
diff --git a/act/17/13.md b/act/17/13.md
index 8e76cc4f4..429c94783 100644
--- a/act/17/13.md
+++ b/act/17/13.md
@@ -2,10 +2,6 @@
 
 Athens is down the coast from Barea which is in Macedonia. Athens was one of the most important cities in Greece. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]])
 
-# learned
-
-"found out" or "heard"
-
 # went there and stirred up
 
 This speaks about their agitating people as though it were a person stirring a liquid and causing the things at the bottom of the liquid to rise to the surface. AT: "went there and agitated" or "went there and disturbed" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]])
diff --git a/act/19/35.md b/act/19/35.md
index bcc367e6d..5eb8f6e6f 100644
--- a/act/19/35.md
+++ b/act/19/35.md
@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ Within the temple of Artemis was an image of the goddess. It had been fashioned
 
 # rash
 
-"wild," "hasty," or "without careful thought"
+without careful thought
 
 # these men
 
diff --git a/act/19/38.md b/act/19/38.md
index 5e8643f4c..fd8945d0a 100644
--- a/act/19/38.md
+++ b/act/19/38.md
@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ The word "accusation" can be stated as the verb "accuse." AT: "want to accuse so
 
 # proconsuls
 
-"representatives." This refers the Roman governor's representatives who made legal decisions in court. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-unknown]])
+the Roman governor's representatives who made legal decisions in court (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-unknown]])
 
 # Let them accuse one another
 
diff --git a/act/21/07.md b/act/21/07.md
index 7499fa8e9..40b07da30 100644
--- a/act/21/07.md
+++ b/act/21/07.md
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ The "seven" refers to the men chosen to distribute food and aid to the widows in
 
 # evangelist
 
-"one who proclaims the good news" usually one who tells people the good news who had not heard the message of salvation
+a person who tells people good news
 
 # Now
 
diff --git a/amo/02/09.md b/amo/02/09.md
index 68ce20326..c04b65451 100644
--- a/amo/02/09.md
+++ b/amo/02/09.md
@@ -12,11 +12,11 @@ This is an exaggeration. It describes how tall and strong the Amorite people wer
 
 # cedars
 
-"cedar trees"
+cedar trees
 
-# the oaks
+# oaks
 
-"the oak trees"
+oak trees
 
 # Yet I destroyed his fruit above and his roots below
 
diff --git a/amo/06/03.md b/amo/06/03.md
index 027c2185a..78b6577e6 100644
--- a/amo/06/03.md
+++ b/amo/06/03.md
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ a white substance made from the teeth and horns of large animals (See: [[rc://en
 
 # lounge
 
-"lie around like lazy people"
+lie around like lazy people
 
 # couches
 
diff --git a/col/03/05.md b/col/03/05.md
index b207de52b..97ebdd179 100644
--- a/col/03/05.md
+++ b/col/03/05.md
@@ -4,11 +4,11 @@ Paul speaks of sinful desires as though they were the body parts people use to s
 
 # uncleanness
 
-"impure behavior"
+impure behavior
 
 # passion
 
-"strong, lustful desire"
+strong, lustful desire
 
 # greed, which is idolatry
 
diff --git a/dan/01/03.md b/dan/01/03.md
index 691044cb1..fb335c93c 100644
--- a/dan/01/03.md
+++ b/dan/01/03.md
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ This is the chief official. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]])
 
 # nobility
 
-This is the highest social class.
+the highest social class.
 
 # without blemish
 
diff --git a/dan/03/11.md b/dan/03/11.md
index 4ecb746da..c2670c7f8 100644
--- a/dan/03/11.md
+++ b/dan/03/11.md
@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ This is a large room filled with a hot fire. See how you translated this in [Dan
 
 # affairs
 
-"matters" or "business"
+"matters"
 
 # Shadrach ... Meshach ... Abednego
 
diff --git a/dan/03/26.md b/dan/03/26.md
index 9f2976f28..e693a209f 100644
--- a/dan/03/26.md
+++ b/dan/03/26.md
@@ -6,9 +6,9 @@ These are officials who have authority over different sizes of territory. See ho
 
 This can be stated in active form. AT: "the fire had not singed the hair on their heads" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]])
 
-# singed
+# was not singed
 
-"lightly burned"
+"was not burned even a little"
 
 # their robes were not harmed
 
diff --git a/dan/06/01.md b/dan/06/01.md
index 08f291c1d..00ca09b6b 100644
--- a/dan/06/01.md
+++ b/dan/06/01.md
@@ -26,9 +26,9 @@ The word "them" refers to the 120 provincial governors.
 
 Here "spirit" refers to Daniel. It means he had was unusually capable. AT: "he was and exceptional person" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-synecdoche]])
 
-# extraordinary
+# extraordinary spirit
 
-"impressive" or "excellent"
+spirit that made him do better than the others
 
 # to put him over
 
diff --git a/dan/10/01.md b/dan/10/01.md
index 4ef64ab74..bc831b59f 100644
--- a/dan/10/01.md
+++ b/dan/10/01.md
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ This can also be expressed in active form. AT: "God revealed a message to Daniel
 
 # insight
 
-"understanding"
+the ability to understand more than what can be seen
 
 # translationWords
 
diff --git a/dan/12/12.md b/dan/12/12.md
index fca909152..33a58a0db 100644
--- a/dan/12/12.md
+++ b/dan/12/12.md
@@ -6,9 +6,9 @@ The angel clothed in linen continues speaking to Daniel.
 
 "Blessed is the person who waits" or "Blessed is anyone who waits"
 
-# waits
+# who waits
 
-"endures" or "remains faithful"
+"who remains faithful"
 
 # the 1,335 days
 
diff --git a/deu/06/24.md b/deu/06/24.md
index 379934857..fd0d2aa5a 100644
--- a/deu/06/24.md
+++ b/deu/06/24.md
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ Moses continues to tell the people of Israel Yahweh's words as if the Israelites
 
 # keep
 
-"obey"
+obey at all times and for a long time
 
 # this will be our righteousness
 
diff --git a/deu/08/18.md b/deu/08/18.md
index e0d7d84c1..44bb28b03 100644
--- a/deu/08/18.md
+++ b/deu/08/18.md
@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ Possible meanings are 1) "in this way he establishes" or 2) "in this way he is f
 
 # establish
 
-"fulfill" or "keep"
+cause to stand or to remain
 
 # as it is today
 
diff --git a/deu/22/12.md b/deu/22/12.md
index f860241d8..1f2771461 100644
--- a/deu/22/12.md
+++ b/deu/22/12.md
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ Moses speaks to the Israelites as if they were one man, so the word "you" here i
 
 # fringes
 
-"tassels." These are threads that are bound together and hang from the end of each corner of the cloak.
+threads that are bound together and hang from the end of each corner of the cloak
 
 # the cloak
 
diff --git a/deu/32/33.md b/deu/32/33.md
index 6ae32e27d..8a520c91f 100644
--- a/deu/32/33.md
+++ b/deu/32/33.md
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ Moses continues comparing the enemies of the people of Israel to grapevines that
 
 # asps
 
-"snakes"
+poisonous snakes
 
 # Is not this plan secretly kept by me, sealed up among my treasures?
 
diff --git a/deu/33/11.md b/deu/33/11.md
index 95e690594..939e3fe8c 100644
--- a/deu/33/11.md
+++ b/deu/33/11.md
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ Moses continues to bless the tribes of Israel; the blessings are short poems. He
 
 # accept
 
-"be pleased with" or "be pleased to accept"
+be pleased with
 
 # the work of his hands