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-\v 32 The one who commits adultery lacks heart;
+\v 32 The one who commits adultery lacks sense;
 \q the one who does it destroys himself.
 \q
 \v 33 Wounds and shame are what he deserves
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 \v 1 My son, keep my words
 \q and store up my commands within yourself.
 \q
-\v 2 Keep my commands and live
+\v 2 Keep my commands and live,
 \q and keep my instruction as the apple of your eye.
 \q
 \v 3 Tie them on your fingers;
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 \q and call understanding your kinsman,
 \q
 \v 5 in order to keep yourself from the adulterous woman,
-\q from the immoral woman with her smooth words.
+\q from the immoral woman who makes her words smooth.
 
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 \v 10 There a woman met him,
 \q dressed like a prostitute, with a false heart.
 \q
-\v 11 She was loud and wayward;
+\v 11 She was loud and rebellious;
 \q her feet did not stay at home.
 \q
 \v 12 Now in the streets, then in the marketplace,
@@ -757,9 +757,9 @@
 \q with a strong face she said to him,
 \q
 \v 14 "I made my peace offering today,
-\q I paid my vows,
+\q I fulfilled my vows,
 \q
-\v 15 so came I out to meet you,
+\v 15 so I came out to meet you,
 \q to eagerly seek your face, and I have found you.
 
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 \q he has gone on a long journey.
 \q
 \v 20 He took a bag of money with him;
-\q he will return on the day of the full moon."
+\q he will come home on the day of the full moon."
 \q
-\v 21 With much talk she turned him;
-\q with her smooth lips she misled him.
+\v 21 With her great persuasiveness she turned him;
+\q with her smooth lips she compelled him.
 
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 \v 26 She has caused many people to fall down pierced;
-\q her dead victims are very many.
+\q those she has slain are numerous.
 \q
 \v 27 Her house is on the paths to Sheol;
 \q they go down to the dark bedrooms of death.