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 \v 9 When a wise person has an argument with a fool,
 \q he rages and laughs, and there will be no rest.
 \q
-\v 10 The bloodthirsty hate the one who is blameless
+\v 10 Men of bloodshed hate the one who is blameless
 \q and seek the life of the upright.
 
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-\v 11 A fool reveals all his anger,
-\q but a wise man holds it back and calms himself down.
+\v 11 A fool brings forth all his spirit,
+\q but a wise man soothes it back.
 \q
 \v 12 If a ruler pays attention to lies,
 \q all his officials will be wicked.
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 \v 4 Who has gone up to heaven and come down?
 \q Who has gathered up the wind in the hollow of his hands?
-\q Who has gathered up the waters in a cloak?
+\q Who has wrapped up the waters in a cloak?
 \q Who has established all the ends of the earth?
 \q What is his name, and what is the name of his son? Surely you know!
 
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-\v 7 Two things I ask of you,
+\v 7 Two things I ask of you;
 \q do not withhold them from me before I die:
 \q
 \v 8 Put vanity and lies far away from me.
 \q Give me neither poverty nor riches,
-\q just give me the food I need.
+\q just let me eat the food that is my portion.
 \q
 \v 9 For if I have too much, I might deny you and say, "Who is Yahweh?"
 \q Or if I become poor,
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 \q a fool when he is filled with food;
 \q
 \v 23 a hated woman when she marries;
-\q and a maid when she takes the place of her mistress.
+\q and a slave girl when she takes the place of her mistress.
 
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