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\v 3 Your breasts are as delicate as two young twin deer. \v 3 Your breasts are as delicate as two young twin deer.
\q1 \q1
\v 4 Your neck is like a tower made of ivory. \v 4 Your neck is like a tower made of ivory.
\q1 Your eyes sparkle the pools in the city of Heshbon, \q1 Your eyes sparkle like the pools in the city of Heshbon
\q2 near the Bath Rabbim Gate. \q2 near the Bath Rabbim Gate.
\q1 Your nose is long, like the tower in Lebanon \q1 Your nose is long, like the tower in Lebanon
\q2 that faces Damascus. \q2 that faces Damascus.
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\q2 and your breasts are like grape clusters. \q2 and your breasts are like grape clusters.
\q1 \q1
\v 8 I said to myself, "I will climb that palm tree \v 8 I said to myself, "I will climb that palm tree
\q2 and take hold of those clusters of dates." \q2 and take hold of those clusters."
\q1 I want your breasts to be also like clusters of grapes that I can feel; \q1 I want your breasts to be also like clusters of grapes that I can feel;
\q2 I want your breath to be like the sweet fragrance of apricots. \q2 I want your breath to be like the sweet fragrance of apricots.
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\v 10 I belong to the man who loves me, \v 10 I belong to the man who loves me,
\q2 and he desires me. \q2 and he desires me.
\q1 \q1
\v 11 You who love me, let us go to the countryside, \v 11 You who love me, let us go to the countryside
\q2 and sleep in a village somewhere. \q2 and sleep in a village somewhere.
\s5 \s5
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\s5 \s5
\q1 \q1
\v 6 Keep me close to you, \v 6 Keep me close to you,
\q2 like a seal on your heart, \q2 like a seal on your heart
\q1 or like a bracelet on your arm. \q1 or like a bracelet on your arm.
\q1 Our love for each other is as powerful as death; \q1 Our love for each other is as powerful as death;
\q2 it is as strong as the grave. \q2 it is as strong as the grave.
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\q2 she would refuse. \q2 she would refuse.
\s5 \s5
\s2 Brothers speaking among themselves \s2 The woman's brothers speaking among themselves
\q1 \q1
\v 8 We have a younger sister, \v 8 We have a younger sister,
\q2 and her breasts are not large yet. \q2 and her breasts are not large yet.
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\s5 \s5
\s2 The woman's lover speaking to her \s2 The woman's lover speaking to her
\q1 \q1
\v 13 You are staying in the gardens, \v 13 You are staying in the gardens;
\q2 my friends are listening to your voice; \q2 my friends are listening to your voice,
\q2 so allow me to hear it, too! \q2 so allow me to hear it also!
\s5 \s5
\s2 The woman speaking to her lover \s2 The woman speaking to her lover