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-\v 5 Jesus replied to them, "Beware that no one deceive you concerning what will happen!
+\v 5 Jesus replied to them, "Beware that no one deceives you concerning what will happen!
 \v 6 Many people will come and say that I sent them. They will say, 'I am the Christ that God promised!' By falsely claiming to be the Christ, they will deceive many people.
 
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 \v 28 But after God makes me alive again, I will go ahead of you to the district of Galilee and meet you there."
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-\v 29 Then Peter said to him, "Perhaps all the other disciples will leave you, but I will not! I will not leave you!"
+\v 29 Then Peter said to him, "Perhaps all the other disciples will leave you, but I will not leave you!"
 
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-\v 30 Then Jesus said to him, "The truth is that this very night, before the rooster crows two times, you will say about me three times, that you do not know me.
+\v 30 Then Jesus said to him, "The truth is that this very night, before the rooster crows two times, you will say about me three times that you do not know me.
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 \v 31 But Peter replied strongly, "Even if they kill me, I will not say that I do not know you." And all the other disciples said the same thing.
 
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 \v 43 While he was still speaking, Judas arrived. Even though he was one of Jesus' twelve disciples, he came to enable Jesus' enemies to capture him. A crowd who carried swords and clubs was with him. The leaders of the Jewish council had sent them.
-\v 44 Judas, who was betraying Jesus, had previously told this crowd, "The man whom I kiss is the one whom you want. When I kiss him, seize him and lead him away."
+\v 44 Judas, who was betraying Jesus, had previously told this crowd, "The man whom I kiss is the one you want. When I kiss him, seize him and lead him away."
 \v 45 So when Judas arrived, he immediately went to Jesus and said, "My teacher!" Then he kissed Jesus.
 \v 46 Then the crowd seized Jesus.
 
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-\v 53 The men who had seized Jesus led him away to the high priest's house. All of the Jewish council were gathering there.
+\v 53 The men who had seized Jesus led him away to the high priest's house. All of the Jewish council members were gathering there.
 \v 54 Peter followed Jesus at a distance. He went into the courtyard of the house where the high priest lived, and he sat there with the men who guarded the house of the high priest. He was warming himself beside a fire.
 
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-\v 1 Very early in the morning the chief priests met together with the rest of the Jewish council in order to decide how to accuse Jesus before the Roman governor. Their guards tied Jesus' hands again. They took him to the residence of Pilate, the governor.
+\v 1 Very early in the morning, the chief priests met together with the rest of the Jewish council to decide how to accuse Jesus before the Roman governor. Their guards tied Jesus' hands again. They took him to the residence of Pilate the governor.
 \v 2 Pilate asked Jesus, "Do you say that you are the king of the Jews?" Jesus answered him, "You yourself have said so."
 \v 3 Then the chief priests claimed that Jesus had done many bad things.
 
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 \v 6 Now it was the governor's custom each year during the Passover Celebration to release one person who was in prison. He usually released any prisoner the people requested.
-\v 7 At that time there was a man called Barabbas who was in prison with some other men. They had committed murder when they rebelled against the Roman government.
+\v 7 At that time there was a man named Barabbas who was in prison with some other men. They had committed murder when they rebelled against the Roman government.
 \v 8 A crowd approached Pilate and asked him to release someone, just as in the past.
 
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-\v 16 The soldiers took Jesus into the courtyard of the barracks. Then they summoned the whole cohort who were on duty there.
+\v 16 The soldiers took Jesus into the courtyard of the barracks. Then they summoned the whole cohort that was on duty there.
 \v 17 After the soldiers gathered together, they put a purple robe on Jesus. Then they placed on his head a crown that they had woven from thornbush branches.
 \v 18 Then they greeted him like they would greet a king, in order to ridicule him; they said, "Greetings, King of the Jews!"
 
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 \v 5 They entered the tomb and saw an angel who looked like a young man. He was sitting at the right side of the cave. He was wearing a white robe. As a result, they were astonished.
 \v 6 The young man said to them, "Do not be astonished! I know that you are looking for Jesus, the man from Nazareth, who was nailed to a cross and crucified. But he has become alive again! He is not here! Look! Here is the place where they placed his body.
-\v 7 Go and tell his disciples. Particularly be sure that you tell Peter. Tell them, 'Jesus is going ahead of you to Galilee, and you will see him there, just like he told you previously'!"
+\v 7 Go and tell his disciples. Particularly be sure that you tell Peter. Tell them, 'Jesus is going ahead of you to Galilee, and you will see him there, just as he told you previously'!"
 
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 \v 8 The women went outside and ran from the tomb. They were trembling because they were afraid, and they were astonished. But they did not say anything to anyone about this because they were afraid.