Ch 1-3 and speaker identifiers edits/corrections

22-SNG.usfm

@@ -36,11 +36,11 @@
 \q1
 \v 5 You women of Jerusalem,
 \q2 I am dark but beautiful;
-\q1 my dark skin is like the tents in Kedar,
+\q1 my dark skin is like the tents in Kedar
 \q2 or like the beautiful curtains in Solomon's palace.
 \q1
 \v 6 But do not stare at me because the sun has made my skin dark.
-\q1 my brothers were angry with me,
+\q1 My brothers were angry with me,
 \q1 so they forced me to work out in the sunshine in the vineyards,
 \q2 so I was not able to take good care of my body.
 
@@ -104,7 +104,7 @@
 \q1
 \v 1 I am like an insignificant flower in the plains,
 \q2 like an insignificant lily growing in a valley.
-\s2 The man speaking to her
+\s2 Her lover speaking to her
 \q1
 \v 2 Among all the other young women,
 \q2 you, the one whom I love, are like a lily growing among thorns!
@@ -123,7 +123,7 @@
 \s2 The woman speaking to her lover
 \q1
 \v 5 Refresh me and strengthen me with your lovemaking.
-\q2 It is like eating raisins and other fruit,
+\q2 It is like eating raisins and other fruit
 \q2 because I want you to love me even more.
 \s2 The woman speaking to herself
 \q1
@@ -147,7 +147,7 @@
 \q1
 \v 9 like a deer or a gazelle.
 \q2 Now he is standing outside the wall of our house,
-\q1 looking in the window,
+\q1 looking in the window
 \q2 and peering through the lattice.
 
 \s5
@@ -166,8 +166,8 @@
 \q1 we hear the pigeons cooing.
 \q1
 \v 13 There are young figs on the fig trees,
-\q2 and there are blossoms on the grapevines
-\q1 and their fragrance fills the air.
+\q2 and there are blossoms on the grapevines;
+\q1 their fragrance fills the air.
 \q2 You whom I love, get up;
 \q2 my beautiful one, come with me!
 
@@ -176,11 +176,11 @@
 \v 14 You are like a dove hiding in the rocky cliff.
 \q1 Show me your face,
 \q2 and allow me to hear your voice,
-\q2 because your voice is sounds sweet,
+\q2 because your voice sounds sweet,
 \q1 and your face is lovely."
 
 \s5
-\s2 The woman speaking to the man
+\s2 The woman speaking to her lover
 \q1
 \v 15 There are other men who ruin women as wild dogs ruin vineyards;
 \q2 do not allow those men to attack me.
@@ -233,10 +233,10 @@
 \q2 until we are ready to stop.
 
 \s5
-\s2 The young woman speaking to herself
+\s2 The woman speaking to herself
 \q1
 \v 6 What is that I see coming from the wilderness,
-\q2 something that is stirring up dust like a column of smoke
+\q2 something that is stirring up dust like a column of smoke—
 \q1 like smoke from burning myrrh and incense
 \q2 made from spices imported by merchants?
 \q1
@@ -264,7 +264,7 @@
 \v 11 You women of Jerusalem,
 \q2 come and look at King Solomon
 \q1 wearing the headdress that his mother put on his head
-\q2 on the day when he was married,
+\q2 on the day when he was married—
 \q1 the happiest day of his life.
 
 \s5
@@ -383,7 +383,7 @@
 \q2 fully enjoy all that you do with each other.
 
 \s5
-\s2 The young woman speaking to herself
+\s2 The woman speaking to herself
 \q1
 \v 2 I was asleep, and I had a dream.
 \q2 In it I heard my lover knocking at the door.
@@ -426,7 +426,7 @@
 \q2 those men who were guarding the city walls took my robe.
 
 \s5
-\s2 The young woman speaking to the women of the city
+\s2 The woman speaking to the women of the city
 \q1
 \v 8 You young women of Jerusalem,
 \q2 I want you to take an oath
@@ -434,7 +434,7 @@
 \q2 you will tell him that I want him so much that I feel sick.
 
 \s5
-\s2 The women of the city speaking to the young woman
+\s2 The women of the city speaking to the woman
 \q1
 \v 9 You who are the fairest among women,
 \q2 why do you think that the one who loves you is better than other men?
@@ -442,7 +442,7 @@
 \q2 Why do you want us to swear that we will tell him that?
 
 \s5
-\s2 The young woman speaking to the women of the city
+\s2 The woman speaking to the women of the city
 \q1
 \v 10 It is because the man who loves me is handsome and healthy,
 \q2 outstanding among other men.
@@ -496,7 +496,7 @@
 \q2 we will go with you to search for him.
 
 \s5
-\s2 The young woman speaking to herself
+\s2 The woman speaking to herself
 \q1
 \v 2 The one who loves me has come to me, I, who am like his garden,
 \q2 He has come to enjoy my charms,
@@ -567,7 +567,7 @@
 \q1
 \v 13 You who are the perfect one,
 \q2 come back to us, in order that I may see you!
-\s2 The young woman speaking to her lover
+\s2 The woman speaking to her lover
 \q1 Why do you want to look at me, the one who is perfect,
 \q2 dancing between two rows of dancers?
 
@@ -623,7 +623,7 @@
 \q2 I want it to be as if it was wine flowing over our mouths and teeth.
 
 \s5
-\s2 The young woman speaking to her lover
+\s2 The woman speaking to her lover
 \q1
 \v 10 I belong to the man who loves me,
 \q2 and he desires me.
@@ -648,7 +648,7 @@
 
 \s5
 \c 8
-\s2 The young woman speaking to her lover
+\s2 The woman speaking to her lover
 \q1
 \v 1 I wish that everyone knew that we love each other, just as they all know that I have a brother,
 \q1 my own brother, who nursed at my mother's breasts.
@@ -661,7 +661,7 @@
 \q2 to where our mother, who taught me so many things, lives.
 \q1 I would like to take you to our mother's house so I could make love to you there.
 \q1 That would be as delightful as juice squeezed from pomegranates, as wine mixed with spices.
-\s2 The young woman speaking to herself
+\s2 The woman speaking to herself
 \q1
 \v 3 Oh yes! He will put his left arm under my head,
 \q2 and he will hold me close with his right arm.
@@ -678,7 +678,7 @@
 \q1
 \v 5 Who is that woman who is coming up from the wilderness,
 \q2 the woman who is leaning on the man who loves her?
-\s2 The young woman speaking to her lover
+\s2 The woman speaking to her lover
 \q1 I woke you up when you were under the apricot tree
 \q2 at the place where your mother conceived you,
 \q2 the place where she gave birth to you.
@@ -701,7 +701,7 @@
 \q2 she would refuse.
 
 \s5
-\s2 The young woman's brothers speaking among themselves
+\s2 Brothers speaking among themselves
 \q1
 \v 8 We have a younger sister,
 \q2 and her breasts are not large yet.
@@ -715,14 +715,14 @@
 \q2 we will decorate her with bits of cedar wood.
 
 \s5
-\s2 The young woman speaking to herself
+\s2 The woman speaking to herself
 \q1
 \v 10 My chest was previously flat like a wall,
 \q2 but now my breasts are big like towers.
 \q1 So I am delightful to my beloved.
 
 \s5
-\s2 The young woman speaking to himself
+\s2 The woman speaking to herself
 \q1
 \v 11 King Solomon had a vineyard at Baal Hamon,
 \q1 and he rented it to people for them to farm it.
@@ -741,7 +741,7 @@
 \q2 so allow me to hear it, too!
 
 \s5
-\s2 The young woman speaking to her lover
+\s2 The woman speaking to her lover
 \q1
 \v 14 You who love me, come to me quickly;
 \q2 run to me like a gazelle or young deer,