# You must not hold back offerings

This can be stated in a positive form. AT: "You must bring all of your offerings" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-doublenegatives]])

# give to me the firstborn of your sons

"dedicate your firstborn sons to me"

# do the same with

"dedicate to me the firstborn of"

# For seven days

This can be written as a numeral. AT: "For 7 days after they are born" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-numbers]])

# the eighth day

This can be written as a numeral. AT: "day number 8" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-numbers]])

# give them to me

"dedicate them to me"