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 #### Structure and formatting
 
-Most of the text in this chapter is prose, but 4:23-24 is poetry. The translator should put these two verses into poetic form, or at least into elegant speech, different from the rest of the chapter.
+Most of the text in this chapter is prose, but 4:23-24 is poetry. It would be good if the translator could put these two verses into poetic form, or at least into elegant speech, so that they are different from the rest of the chapter.
 
 #### Special concepts in this chapter