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 These are names of men. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]])
 
-# Now Saul's son had two men ... this very time
+# Now Saul's son had two men
 
-This introduces the men Baanah and Rechab in the story. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/writing-participants]])
+This introduces the men Baanah and Rechab into the story. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/writing-participants]])
 
 # for Beeroth is also considered part of Benjamin