diff --git a/tit/02/02.md b/tit/02/02.md index c1c24c361d..a13783939d 100644 --- a/tit/02/02.md +++ b/tit/02/02.md @@ -2,11 +2,11 @@ "to be sober-minded" or "to be self-controlled" -# temperate, dignified, sensible, healthy +# temperate, dignified, sensible -"temperate and dignified, to control their desires, and to be healthy" +"temperate and dignified, to control their desires -# healthy in faith, in love, and in perseverance +# and sound in faith, in love, and in perseverance -The word "healthy" here is a dead metaphor that means to be firm and unwavering. The abstract nouns "faith," "love," and "perseverance" can be stated as verbs. Alternate translation: "and they must firmly believe the true teachings about God, truly love others, and continually serve God even when things are difficult" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metaphor]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-abstractnouns]]) +The word "sound" means to be firm and unwavering. The abstract nouns "faith," "love," and "perseverance" can be stated as verbs. Alternate translation: "and they must firmly believe the true teachings about God, truly love others, and continually serve God even when things are difficult" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-abstractnouns]])