From 7992bf777759a4a93f549b0b5b7daecb80d32e1a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hmw3 Date: Thu, 13 Sep 2018 15:20:49 -0400 Subject: [PATCH] FD issues --- luk/11/21.md | 6 +++++- luk/11/22.md | 4 ++-- luk/11/31.md | 8 ++------ luk/11/36.md | 8 ++++++-- luk/14/01.md | 2 +- luk/14/23.md | 4 ---- luk/14/24.md | 4 ++++ luk/14/25.md | 2 +- luk/14/34.md | 4 ---- luk/14/35.md | 4 ++++ 10 files changed, 25 insertions(+), 21 deletions(-) diff --git a/luk/11/21.md b/luk/11/21.md index 88fa2d2850..64813dc0ee 100644 --- a/luk/11/21.md +++ b/luk/11/21.md @@ -1,6 +1,10 @@ +# Connecting Statement: + +Jesus begins a parable about a strong man who is defeated by a stronger man. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-parables]]) + # When a strong man ... are safe -This speaks about Jesus defeating Satan and his demons as if Jesus were a stronger man who takes what belongs to a strong man. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]]) +The "strong man" here is a metaphor for Satan. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]]) # his goods are safe diff --git a/luk/11/22.md b/luk/11/22.md index b457174ee2..574a8d8fe5 100644 --- a/luk/11/22.md +++ b/luk/11/22.md @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ -# when a stronger man ... man's possessions +# a stronger man -This speaks about Jesus defeating Satan and his demons as if Jesus were a stronger man who takes what belongs to a strong man. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]]) +The stronger man in the parable is a metaphor for Jesus, who is stronger than Satan. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-parables]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]]) # takes away the armor diff --git a/luk/11/31.md b/luk/11/31.md index 2780d1935d..9558e783d6 100644 --- a/luk/11/31.md +++ b/luk/11/31.md @@ -2,9 +2,9 @@ This refers to the Queen of Sheba. Sheba was a kingdom south of Israel. -# will rise up at the judgment with the men of this generation +# will rise up -"will stand up and judge the people of this time" +"will appear" # she came from the ends of the earth @@ -14,7 +14,3 @@ This idiom means that she came from very far away. Alternate translation: "she c Jesus is speaking about himself. Alternate translation: "I, who am greater than Solomon, am here" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-explicit]]) -# someone greater than Solomon - -Jesus is speaking about himself. Alternate translation: "I am greater than Solomon" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-explicit]]) - diff --git a/luk/11/36.md b/luk/11/36.md index 598e718acc..dcea6b05ba 100644 --- a/luk/11/36.md +++ b/luk/11/36.md @@ -1,8 +1,12 @@ # General Information: -Jesus ends his parable, in which he speaks of his teaching as light that he wants his disciples to obey and share with others. He speaks of people who do not know or accept his teaching as being in darkness. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]]) +Jesus ends his parable. + +# If then your whole body is full of light, with no part of it in darkness + +Jesus speaks of his teaching as light that he wants his disciples to obey and share with others. He speaks of people who do not know or accept his teaching as being in darkness. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]]) # then your whole body will be like when a lamp shines its brightness on you -Jesus states the same truth as a simile. He speaks of people who are full of truth as if they are a lamp that shines brightly. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-simile]]) +Jesus states the same truth he has just presented as a metaphor, but this time he uses a simile. He speaks of people who are full of truth as if they are a lamp that shines brightly. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-simile]]) diff --git a/luk/14/01.md b/luk/14/01.md index c6210da9ad..a9f67dbd10 100644 --- a/luk/14/01.md +++ b/luk/14/01.md @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ # General Information: -It is the Sabbath, and Jesus is at Pharisee's house. Verse 1 gives background information for the event that follows. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/writing-background]]) +It is the Sabbath, and Jesus is at a Pharisee's house. Verse 1 gives background information for the event that follows. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/writing-background]]) # It happened one Sabbath diff --git a/luk/14/23.md b/luk/14/23.md index 61da313446..e221a5b628 100644 --- a/luk/14/23.md +++ b/luk/14/23.md @@ -1,7 +1,3 @@ -# Connecting Statement: - -Jesus finishes his parable. - # the highways and hedges This refers to roads and paths outside of the city. Alternate translation: "the main roads and paths outside of the city" diff --git a/luk/14/24.md b/luk/14/24.md index 52d5596ecd..7fd717027c 100644 --- a/luk/14/24.md +++ b/luk/14/24.md @@ -1,3 +1,7 @@ +# Connecting Statement: + +Jesus finishes his parable. + # For I say to you The word "you" is plural, so it is unclear to whom it is addressed. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-you]]) diff --git a/luk/14/25.md b/luk/14/25.md index b985cd63e6..445ed50370 100644 --- a/luk/14/25.md +++ b/luk/14/25.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ # General Information: -Jesus begins to teach the crowd that was traveling with him. +Jesus begins to teach the crowds that were traveling with him. diff --git a/luk/14/34.md b/luk/14/34.md index c07b9edb23..2104eadd47 100644 --- a/luk/14/34.md +++ b/luk/14/34.md @@ -1,7 +1,3 @@ -# Connecting Statement: - -Jesus finishes teaching the crowd. - # Salt is good "Salt is useful." Jesus is teaching a lesson about those who want to be his disciple. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]]) diff --git a/luk/14/35.md b/luk/14/35.md index be487876de..48b1737b07 100644 --- a/luk/14/35.md +++ b/luk/14/35.md @@ -1,3 +1,7 @@ +# Connecting Statement: + +Jesus finishes teaching the crowd. + # manure pile People use manure to fertilize gardens and fields. Salt without taste is so useless it is not even worth mixing with manure. Alternate translation: "compost heap" or "fertilizer"