From 09d1dbcd86b58597ac1194829bff6456759c38c7 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hmw3 Date: Thu, 19 Oct 2017 15:30:37 -0400 Subject: [PATCH] Fixing one-word snippets. --- act/02/08.md | 2 +- act/02/20.md | 2 +- act/03/17.md | 4 ++-- act/04/23.md | 2 +- act/06/01.md | 4 ++-- act/06/12.md | 4 ++-- act/14/08.md | 10 +++++----- act/16/19.md | 2 +- act/17/08.md | 4 ++-- act/17/13.md | 4 ---- act/19/35.md | 2 +- act/19/38.md | 2 +- act/21/07.md | 2 +- amo/02/09.md | 6 +++--- amo/06/03.md | 2 +- col/03/05.md | 4 ++-- dan/01/03.md | 2 +- dan/03/11.md | 2 +- dan/03/26.md | 4 ++-- dan/06/01.md | 4 ++-- dan/10/01.md | 2 +- dan/12/12.md | 4 ++-- deu/06/24.md | 2 +- deu/08/18.md | 2 +- deu/22/12.md | 2 +- deu/32/33.md | 2 +- deu/33/11.md | 2 +- 27 files changed, 40 insertions(+), 44 deletions(-) diff --git a/act/02/08.md b/act/02/08.md index a47a47ae27..d19e3ef3a0 100644 --- a/act/02/08.md +++ b/act/02/08.md @@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ This lists some of the many nations, regions, and cities from which they came. ( # proselytes -"converts to the Jewish religion" +converts to the Jewish religion # translationWords diff --git a/act/02/20.md b/act/02/20.md index e81fedbd01..1a57777d5c 100644 --- a/act/02/20.md +++ b/act/02/20.md @@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ The words "great" and "remarkable" share similar meanings and emphasize the inte # remarkable -"unusual" or "important" +great and beautiful # everyone who calls on the name of the Lord will be saved diff --git a/act/03/17.md b/act/03/17.md index 0fa3b42b62..d6749e0442 100644 --- a/act/03/17.md +++ b/act/03/17.md @@ -10,9 +10,9 @@ Possible meanings are 1) that the people did not know that Jesus was the Messiah When the prophets spoke, it was as though God himself was speaking because he told them what to say. AT: "God foretold by telling all of the prophets what to speak" -# foretold +# God foretold -"told ahead of time" or "told before it happened" +"God spoke about ahead of time" or "God told about before they happened" # the mouth of all the prophets diff --git a/act/04/23.md b/act/04/23.md index d1ff175d69..ba6945456d 100644 --- a/act/04/23.md +++ b/act/04/23.md @@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ These "useless things" consist of plans to oppose God. AT: "the peoples imagine # peoples -"people groups" or "tribes" +people groups # translationWords diff --git a/act/06/01.md b/act/06/01.md index f1e565d376..d20a09cad9 100644 --- a/act/06/01.md +++ b/act/06/01.md @@ -6,9 +6,9 @@ This is the beginning of a new part of the story. Luke gives important backgroun Consider how new parts of a story are introduced in your language. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/writing-newevent]]) -# multiplying +# was multiplying -"greatly increasing" +"was greatly increasing" # Grecian Jews diff --git a/act/06/12.md b/act/06/12.md index 5073c67a23..9cff7a8b46 100644 --- a/act/06/12.md +++ b/act/06/12.md @@ -10,9 +10,9 @@ Here the word "we" refers only to the false witness that they brought to testify "caused the people, the elders, and the scribes to be very angry at Stephen" -# seized +# seized him -"grabbed" +"grabbed him and held him so he could not get away" # does not stop speaking diff --git a/act/14/08.md b/act/14/08.md index 75f100b264..2bf0c1bdd3 100644 --- a/act/14/08.md +++ b/act/14/08.md @@ -14,13 +14,13 @@ This introduces a new person in the story. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/writ "unable to move his legs" or "unable to walk on his feet" -# cripple - -"lame" - # a cripple from his mother's womb -"a cripple from birth" +"having been born as a cripple" + +# cripple + +person who cannot walk # Paul fixed his eyes on him diff --git a/act/16/19.md b/act/16/19.md index 57b5439c82..8fde1c542c 100644 --- a/act/16/19.md +++ b/act/16/19.md @@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ It can be stated clearly why they no longer hoped to make money. AT: "When her m # magistrates -"rulers" or "judges" +rulers, judges # These men are stirring up our city diff --git a/act/17/08.md b/act/17/08.md index 689e913b1d..3bc51b6ac0 100644 --- a/act/17/08.md +++ b/act/17/08.md @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ -# disturbed +# were disturbed -"worried" or "anxious" +"were worried" # made Jason and the rest pay money as security diff --git a/act/17/13.md b/act/17/13.md index 8e76cc4f41..429c94783f 100644 --- a/act/17/13.md +++ b/act/17/13.md @@ -2,10 +2,6 @@ Athens is down the coast from Barea which is in Macedonia. Athens was one of the most important cities in Greece. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) -# learned - -"found out" or "heard" - # went there and stirred up This speaks about their agitating people as though it were a person stirring a liquid and causing the things at the bottom of the liquid to rise to the surface. AT: "went there and agitated" or "went there and disturbed" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]]) diff --git a/act/19/35.md b/act/19/35.md index bcc367e6d9..5eb8f6e6fb 100644 --- a/act/19/35.md +++ b/act/19/35.md @@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ Within the temple of Artemis was an image of the goddess. It had been fashioned # rash -"wild," "hasty," or "without careful thought" +without careful thought # these men diff --git a/act/19/38.md b/act/19/38.md index 5e8643f4cf..fd8945d0ae 100644 --- a/act/19/38.md +++ b/act/19/38.md @@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ The word "accusation" can be stated as the verb "accuse." AT: "want to accuse so # proconsuls -"representatives." This refers the Roman governor's representatives who made legal decisions in court. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-unknown]]) +the Roman governor's representatives who made legal decisions in court (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-unknown]]) # Let them accuse one another diff --git a/act/21/07.md b/act/21/07.md index 7499fa8e94..40b07da30c 100644 --- a/act/21/07.md +++ b/act/21/07.md @@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ The "seven" refers to the men chosen to distribute food and aid to the widows in # evangelist -"one who proclaims the good news" usually one who tells people the good news who had not heard the message of salvation +a person who tells people good news # Now diff --git a/amo/02/09.md b/amo/02/09.md index 68ce203262..c04b65451c 100644 --- a/amo/02/09.md +++ b/amo/02/09.md @@ -12,11 +12,11 @@ This is an exaggeration. It describes how tall and strong the Amorite people wer # cedars -"cedar trees" +cedar trees -# the oaks +# oaks -"the oak trees" +oak trees # Yet I destroyed his fruit above and his roots below diff --git a/amo/06/03.md b/amo/06/03.md index 027c2185a5..78b6577e6d 100644 --- a/amo/06/03.md +++ b/amo/06/03.md @@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ a white substance made from the teeth and horns of large animals (See: [[rc://en # lounge -"lie around like lazy people" +lie around like lazy people # couches diff --git a/col/03/05.md b/col/03/05.md index b207de52bb..97ebdd1792 100644 --- a/col/03/05.md +++ b/col/03/05.md @@ -4,11 +4,11 @@ Paul speaks of sinful desires as though they were the body parts people use to s # uncleanness -"impure behavior" +impure behavior # passion -"strong, lustful desire" +strong, lustful desire # greed, which is idolatry diff --git a/dan/01/03.md b/dan/01/03.md index 691044cb1e..fb335c93c5 100644 --- a/dan/01/03.md +++ b/dan/01/03.md @@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ This is the chief official. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) # nobility -This is the highest social class. +the highest social class. # without blemish diff --git a/dan/03/11.md b/dan/03/11.md index 4ecb746dad..c2670c7f83 100644 --- a/dan/03/11.md +++ b/dan/03/11.md @@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ This is a large room filled with a hot fire. See how you translated this in [Dan # affairs -"matters" or "business" +"matters" # Shadrach ... Meshach ... Abednego diff --git a/dan/03/26.md b/dan/03/26.md index 9f2976f287..e693a209f9 100644 --- a/dan/03/26.md +++ b/dan/03/26.md @@ -6,9 +6,9 @@ These are officials who have authority over different sizes of territory. See ho This can be stated in active form. AT: "the fire had not singed the hair on their heads" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]]) -# singed +# was not singed -"lightly burned" +"was not burned even a little" # their robes were not harmed diff --git a/dan/06/01.md b/dan/06/01.md index 08f291c1de..00ca09b6b9 100644 --- a/dan/06/01.md +++ b/dan/06/01.md @@ -26,9 +26,9 @@ The word "them" refers to the 120 provincial governors. Here "spirit" refers to Daniel. It means he had was unusually capable. AT: "he was and exceptional person" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-synecdoche]]) -# extraordinary +# extraordinary spirit -"impressive" or "excellent" +spirit that made him do better than the others # to put him over diff --git a/dan/10/01.md b/dan/10/01.md index 4ef64ab74a..bc831b59f1 100644 --- a/dan/10/01.md +++ b/dan/10/01.md @@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ This can also be expressed in active form. AT: "God revealed a message to Daniel # insight -"understanding" +the ability to understand more than what can be seen # translationWords diff --git a/dan/12/12.md b/dan/12/12.md index fca9091524..33a58a0db3 100644 --- a/dan/12/12.md +++ b/dan/12/12.md @@ -6,9 +6,9 @@ The angel clothed in linen continues speaking to Daniel. "Blessed is the person who waits" or "Blessed is anyone who waits" -# waits +# who waits -"endures" or "remains faithful" +"who remains faithful" # the 1,335 days diff --git a/deu/06/24.md b/deu/06/24.md index 3799348574..fd0d2aa5a6 100644 --- a/deu/06/24.md +++ b/deu/06/24.md @@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ Moses continues to tell the people of Israel Yahweh's words as if the Israelites # keep -"obey" +obey at all times and for a long time # this will be our righteousness diff --git a/deu/08/18.md b/deu/08/18.md index e0d7d84c11..44bb28b035 100644 --- a/deu/08/18.md +++ b/deu/08/18.md @@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ Possible meanings are 1) "in this way he establishes" or 2) "in this way he is f # establish -"fulfill" or "keep" +cause to stand or to remain # as it is today diff --git a/deu/22/12.md b/deu/22/12.md index f860241d8f..1f2771461c 100644 --- a/deu/22/12.md +++ b/deu/22/12.md @@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ Moses speaks to the Israelites as if they were one man, so the word "you" here i # fringes -"tassels." These are threads that are bound together and hang from the end of each corner of the cloak. +threads that are bound together and hang from the end of each corner of the cloak # the cloak diff --git a/deu/32/33.md b/deu/32/33.md index 6ae32e27d0..8a520c91f7 100644 --- a/deu/32/33.md +++ b/deu/32/33.md @@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ Moses continues comparing the enemies of the people of Israel to grapevines that # asps -"snakes" +poisonous snakes # Is not this plan secretly kept by me, sealed up among my treasures? diff --git a/deu/33/11.md b/deu/33/11.md index 95e690594e..939e3fe8c2 100644 --- a/deu/33/11.md +++ b/deu/33/11.md @@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ Moses continues to bless the tribes of Israel; the blessings are short poems. He # accept -"be pleased with" or "be pleased to accept" +be pleased with # the work of his hands