From 3b51d12ade2861f7cc196656e6b2ec4373252fe9 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: SusanQuigley Date: Thu, 2 Sep 2021 20:58:43 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] Update 'jit/figs-exmetaphor/01.md' Deleted paraphrastic suggestion and corrected problem with not working. --- jit/figs-exmetaphor/01.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/jit/figs-exmetaphor/01.md b/jit/figs-exmetaphor/01.md index c52aa81..5f8af1c 100644 --- a/jit/figs-exmetaphor/01.md +++ b/jit/figs-exmetaphor/01.md @@ -68,6 +68,6 @@ Consider using the same extended metaphor if your readers will understand it in * **Yahweh is my shepherd; I will lack nothing.** (Psalm 23:1 ULB) * Yahweh cares for me like a shepherd who cares for his sheep, so I will lack nothing. * **For the vineyard of Yahweh of hosts is the house of Israel, and the man of Judah his pleasant planting; he waited for justice, but instead, there was killing; for righteousness, but, instead, a shout for help.** (Isaiah 5:7 ULB) - * For the vineyard of Yahweh of hosts represents the house of Israel, and the men of Judah are like his pleasant planting; he waited for justice, but instead, there was killing; for righteousness, but, instead, there was a cry for help. So as a farmer stops caring for a vineyard that produces bad fruit, Yahweh will stop protecting Israel and Judah. + * For the vineyard of Yahweh of hosts represents the house of Israel, and the men of Judah are like his pleasant planting; he waited for justice, but instead, there was killing; for righteousness, but, instead, there was a cry for help.