Most books have upper case book titles.

Quotations throughout: many (most?) quotations have an opening quote mark but not a closing mark.

Mark 1:2 - has a capitalized word at the end of the verse, end of sentence. Does it go with the verse or with the Bible reference that follow?

I noticed places in Revelation where the Reta text does not seem to correspond to either English or Indonesian.
  REV 10:1
  REV 6:8

I think the phrase "Binatang oli Meke Gomi Adu" at the end of REV 13:10 is a section heading, but it is not in ALL CAPS like all the other section headings. Might want to verify that.

GAL 4:9 has a word with a slash or backslash in it.

Delete "i" at end of HEB 12:5?