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Author SHA1 Message Date
Hanker10 8d9b792854 Romans 1:27 change wording
Romans 1:27 change wording from, "As a result, God has punished them by sicknesses in their bodies, which is what they deserve." to what you see. To ascribe the agency to God is true ultimately but is too much to read out of the text and is likely offensive to some. The more immediate agency is the physical effects of such behavior that have become obvious in our context as well.
2016-07-08 10:14:32 -04:00
Hanker10 23c0c899f7 Rom 1:14 change wording
Romans 1:14 change the loaded terms "educated and to those who are uneducated" to what you see. There are many MTTs and their readers who may not have much formal education, but still have good discretion and ability to learn. Besides, this does not convey  the idea of "wise" and "foolish" in the text.
2016-07-08 09:52:45 -04:00
Hanker10 b9825095a1 Romans 1:5 change wording
Romans 1:5 change wording of "among the non-Jewish people groups" to what you see. The Greek says "all the people groups" and that includes the Jews, of course, and Paul certainly included them in his ministry.
2016-07-06 09:31:43 -04:00
Hanker10 7273f16096 Update 01.usfm 2016-06-17 11:23:20 -04:00
Hanker10 a4422f8cdb Romans 1:29-31 trimmed the necessary repetition
Romans 1:29-31 trimmed the necessary repetition of "They strongly desire to ..." and "Many ..."
2016-06-17 11:21:23 -04:00
Hanker10 1beeba382f Romans 1:18 change referent in clause
Romans 1:18 change "everyone in the "who" clause to "all" and the number of the verbs "show" and "do" to match. This also matches with the "them" in the next sentence.
2016-06-17 10:55:26 -04:00
Hanker10 062ee7b7f7 Romans 1:7 added "in Rome"
Romans 1:7 added "in Rome" since this is in the Greek, helps the idea along, and does not hinder the flow of style.
2016-06-17 10:30:35 -04:00
Hanker10 9c7ae84fdf Romans 1:1 correct verb number
Romans 1:1 correct the number (singular) of the the verb "serve(s)"
2016-06-16 19:57:10 -04:00
Richard Mahn 78b7b614f7 Initial commit from Etherpad 2016-04-01 21:07:40 +00:00