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Hanker10 4473c3f7ce Romans 6:19 change wording for clarity 
Romans 6:19 change wording for clarity
 2016-07-08 14:47:41 -04:00
Hanker10 a1f2687e5e Romans 6:16 change wording for clarity 
Romans 6:16 change wording for clarity
 2016-07-08 14:42:25 -04:00
Hanker10 8d09eab5c0 Romans 6:15 cut dialog and change wording 
Romans 6:15 cut dialog and change wording
 2016-07-08 14:35:17 -04:00
Hanker10 4b9a2c0ace Romans 6:13 change wording 
Romans 6:13 change wording
 2016-07-08 14:29:58 -04:00
pohlig 21df92835f Update 02.usfm 2016-07-08 14:19:05 -04:00
Hanker10 82ee15e3fb Romans 6:11 change word 
Romans 6:11 change word
 2016-07-08 14:18:40 -04:00
pohlig 76a3efb7ab Update 02.usfm 2016-07-08 14:18:03 -04:00
pohlig 2a73733fbc Update 02.usfm 2016-07-08 14:09:30 -04:00
pohlig 7e144972cf Update 02.usfm 2016-07-08 13:57:38 -04:00
Henry Whitney 12109f4bb8 comma 
The comma denotes that Paul can say that he gives thanks because of the
grace. No comma denotes that the grace is the reason he gives thanks.
 2016-07-08 13:55:07 -04:00
Henry Whitney 597f5392b3 stray line 2016-07-08 13:53:40 -04:00
pohlig afbec2c362 Update 02.usfm 2016-07-08 13:52:13 -04:00
Hanker10 a911e36b8d Romans 6:1-2 change wording 
Romans 6:1-2 change wording
 2016-07-08 13:49:58 -04:00
Hanker10 f2fce5e102 Update 05.usfm 2016-07-08 13:47:19 -04:00
Hanker10 2e411b65c1 Romans 5:18 change wording 
Romans 5:18 change wording to avoid limiting Christ's obedience to only his death.
 2016-07-08 13:44:17 -04:00
Henry Whitney 267526185c corrected misspelling 2016-07-08 13:43:38 -04:00
Hanker10 22c556723a Romans 5:13 change wording 
Romans 5:13 change wording
 2016-07-08 13:38:50 -04:00
Hanker10 9a1fbb55c9 Romans 5:12 cut narrative not in text 
Romans 5:12 cut narrative not in text
 2016-07-08 13:36:23 -04:00
pohlig 1f0dfd5f74 Update 04.usfm 2016-07-08 13:34:28 -04:00
Hanker10 98c3276857 Romans 5:10 change wording 
Romans 5:10 change wording
 2016-07-08 13:32:52 -04:00
Henry Whitney a7eb45cd10 specified both valences of "write" 2016-07-08 13:29:24 -04:00
Hanker10 9e2595734d Romans 5:9 simplify wording 
Romans 5:9 simplify wording and sentence structure
 2016-07-08 13:29:09 -04:00
Henry Whitney 856727f81b zapped extra empty lines 2016-07-08 13:27:32 -04:00
Hanker10 0d39e8372d Romans 4:25 change wording 
Romans 4:25 change wording
 2016-07-08 13:16:59 -04:00
Hanker10 fcc29bf063 Romans 4:21 change wording 
Romans 4:21 change wording
 2016-07-08 13:13:38 -04:00
Hanker10 5ceb5c03ac Romans 4:18 simplify wording & order 
Romans 4:18 simplify wording & order of ideas
 2016-07-08 13:11:38 -04:00
Hanker10 262e463f19 Romans 4:17 change separate paragraph 
Romans 4:17 change separate paragraph to become part of verse 17. Also simplified the wording.
 2016-07-08 13:05:47 -04:00
Hanker10 e138a20f3c Romans 4:16-17 simplify wording and sentences 
Romans 4:16-17 simplify wording and sentence structure
 2016-07-08 13:03:12 -04:00
Hanker10 e8b2c690d3 Update 04.usfm 2016-07-08 12:54:42 -04:00
Hanker10 86f7a27779 Update 04.usfm 2016-07-08 12:54:06 -04:00
Hanker10 725a53349e Romans 4:11 simplify wording 
Romans 4:11 simplify wording
 2016-07-08 12:52:54 -04:00
Hanker10 46b7fbc721 Romans 3:31 cut the imaginary dialog 
Romans 3:31 cut the imaginary dialog
 2016-07-08 12:34:38 -04:00
Hanker10 b29fd8a5de Romans 3:24 change wording 
Romans 3:24 change wording to reflect the action of Christ for us beyond only his death.
 2016-07-08 12:04:06 -04:00
pohlig a43192b7d7 Update 02.usfm 2016-07-08 12:02:24 -04:00
Hanker10 24b83c7565 Romans 3:21 change wording 
Romans 3:21 change wording for clarity
 2016-07-08 12:01:14 -04:00
pohlig d39345c796 Update 02.usfm 2016-07-08 11:59:52 -04:00
pohlig 7312b18186 Update 02.usfm 2016-07-08 11:57:00 -04:00
Hanker10 e3750f7dc7 Romans 3:19-20 change wording 
Romans 3:19-20 change wording and punctuation for clarity
 2016-07-08 11:54:56 -04:00
Hanker10 a79ddcc9c3 Romans 3:9 cut dialog 
Romans 3:9 cut dialog
 2016-07-08 11:35:58 -04:00
Hanker10 c8cc398737 Romans 3:5-8 clear up dialog 
Romans 3:5-8  clear up dialog
 2016-07-08 11:30:02 -04:00
Hanker10 5a597196f5 Romans 3:3-4 cut dialog 
Romans 3:3-4 cut imaginary dialog since this is not needed and not in the text
 2016-07-08 11:14:21 -04:00
Hanker10 8014f3ca37 Romans 3:1-2 change wording 
Romans 3:1-2  change wording from a direct quote (not in the text) and the imaginary dialog.
 2016-07-08 11:10:57 -04:00
Hanker10 8d89082596 Romans 2:25 correct verb number 
Romans 2:25 correct verb number
 2016-07-08 11:00:34 -04:00
Hanker10 3592323645 Romans 2:24 cut extra sentence 
Romans 2:24 cut extra sentence, "The non-Jews say God must be a hypocrite if he tolerates the behavior of people like you."
 2016-07-08 10:59:33 -04:00
Hanker10 6632df2e73 Romans 2:20 cut extra word 
Romans 2:20 cut extra word "in" and change "what" from "you have __ the law __ teaches you"
 2016-07-08 10:56:32 -04:00
Hanker10 7554a08bb2 Romans 2:16 change wording 
Romans 2:16 change wording to shorten and simplify the sentence structure. The idea of secret is central, not an added feature.
 2016-07-08 10:53:15 -04:00
Hanker10 cbcef77589 Romans 2:12 change wording 
Romans 2:12 change wording to shorten the text.
 2016-07-08 10:43:22 -04:00
Hanker10 195645294f Romans 2:1 cut added wording 
Romans 2:1 cut added wording that is too interpretive and not in the text at all.
 2016-07-08 10:21:44 -04:00
Hanker10 8d9b792854 Romans 1:27 change wording 
Romans 1:27 change wording from, "As a result, God has punished them by sicknesses in their bodies, which is what they deserve." to what you see. To ascribe the agency to God is true ultimately but is too much to read out of the text and is likely offensive to some. The more immediate agency is the physical effects of such behavior that have become obvious in our context as well.
 2016-07-08 10:14:32 -04:00
Hanker10 23c0c899f7 Rom 1:14 change wording 
Romans 1:14 change the loaded terms "educated and to those who are uneducated" to what you see. There are many MTTs and their readers who may not have much formal education, but still have good discretion and ability to learn. Besides, this does not convey  the idea of "wise" and "foolish" in the text.
 2016-07-08 09:52:45 -04:00