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Hanker10 ef9c0d0967 1 Cor 12:22 change obscure word 
1 Cor 12:22 change obscure word "mundane" to "tedious"
 2016-07-14 12:33:21 -04:00
Hanker10 a590df3c5a 1 Cor 12:9 cut sentence at end of verse 
1 Cor 12:9 cut sentence at end of verse for the same reason as in verse 8. "The Spirit gives a variety of gifts, but he is still the same Spirit of God."
 2016-07-14 12:14:10 -04:00
Hanker10 fd8a163548 1 Cor 12:8 cut last sentence of verse 
1 Cor 12:8 cut last sentence of verse, "These different gifts come through the work of the same Spirit in each one who believes in Christ." because it is not in the text at all.
 2016-07-14 12:12:16 -04:00
Hanker10 890d66e693 1 Cor 11:30 change wording 
1 Cor 11:30 change wording for the same reason as in verse 29: from "the way you have treated the Lord's Supper" to what you see.
 2016-07-14 12:03:30 -04:00
Hanker10 c6e099f385 1 Cor 11:29 change wording 
1 Cor 11:29 change wording, "does not consider that he is handling the Lord's body" to what you see. This is to include the optional idea in interpreting this passage that the misuse of the Lord's Supper is offensive both to the elements (as this wording shows) AND to the fellowship (as the passage and even the whole letter is centering on).
 2016-07-14 12:01:35 -04:00
Hanker10 7bd405bbb2 1 Cor 11:27 change the wording 
1 Cor 11:27 change the wording: "will be guilty of a sin against." The idea of "sinning against" is not in the text or the ULB and tends to distance the offender from the death of Christ. Paul is making the point very strongly when he labels such offenders as guilty of the death of the Lord as much as those crucifying Jesus.
 2016-07-14 11:46:44 -04:00
Hanker10 6705e39aea 1 Cor 11:19 change wording 
1 Cor 11:19 change wording to reflect Paul's sarcasm or irony in posing the parties within the church as competing with each other. The competition will filter out the αιρεσεις (heresies) -- assumed to be under the guidance of the Spirit. Paul also uses sharp sarcasm in chapter 15 when proving the resurrection.
 2016-07-14 11:21:12 -04:00
Henry Whitney 2f7f38fb52 1co 8:7 fixed verb tenses 2016-07-14 10:49:19 -04:00
Hanker10 ce3560aef9 1 Cor 11:15 change wording 
1 Cor 11:15 change wording: "but they also teach" to begin the verse is confusing because of the uncertain referent.
 2016-07-14 10:46:53 -04:00
Hanker10 2361c7dfb5 1 Cor 11:10 change wording 
1 Cor 11:10 change wording to avoid the danger of misinterpretation with gender roles. The phrase "of the man over her" after "authority" is not in the original. A popular interpretation is that the head covering is a sign that she HAS authority to participate in worship and that the covering is the sign of God's authority over her. By dropping this phrase, the option is left to the reader.
Another difficulty here is "angels" that can mean both the spirits and the human messengers. The woman's covering would make her more appropriate and acceptable to visiting messengers from other churches. This might be worth a note , but note a change here in wording.
 2016-07-14 10:36:36 -04:00
Henry Whitney 60a9700043 1co 8:5 Couldn't match original sense with ULB 
I couldn’t find any commentary that went that direction. The material
between em dashes is from NIGTC.
 2016-07-14 10:32:10 -04:00
Henry Whitney 6fa74745e9 1co 8:6 
No version at http://biblehub.com/1_corinthians/8-6.htm tags this whole
quote as Scripture. (Original had no close quote!) Neither does NIGTC
nor UBS HB nor any commentary at
http://biblehub.com/commentaries/1_corinthians/8-6.htm. However, it
does seem to be a quotation, probably from a creed.
 2016-07-14 09:40:13 -04:00
Henry Whitney c3d87ed365 1co 8:4 punctuation 2016-07-14 09:23:02 -04:00
Hanker10 ce7015fceb Update 07.usfm 2016-07-13 21:40:15 -04:00
Hanker10 5c9c9d5ee9 1 Cor 11:8 add article for consistency 
1 Cor 11:8 add article for consistency
 2016-07-13 19:19:16 -04:00
Hanker10 2cc0adcb66 1 Cor 10:25 add phrase for clarity 
1 Cor 10:25 add phrase for clarity "and eat" after "you may buy..."
 2016-07-13 19:01:36 -04:00
Hanker10 bfedd9b0b6 1 Cor 10:22 add phrase for clarity 
1 Cor 10:22 add phrase for clarity, "become jealous about split loyalty"
 2016-07-13 18:56:33 -04:00
Hanker10 b978ffd083 1 Cor 10:19-20 change wording for clarity 
1 Cor 10:19-20 change wording for clarity of concept. A quote from Leon Morris: "To eat idol meat might be held to sanction idolatry; not to eat it might imply that the idol was real. Paul starts with vigorous questions that imply that the idol sacrifice and the idol are both shams."
 2016-07-13 18:55:11 -04:00
Hanker10 b1eaa77c76 1 Cor 10:13 change wording for clarity 
1 Cor 10:13 change wording for clarity and correspondence to original
 2016-07-13 18:44:04 -04:00
Hanker10 c8e285a139 1 Cor 10:4 change wording 
1 Cor 10:4 change wording - same as in previous verse
 2016-07-13 18:13:27 -04:00
Hanker10 29a404cb0b 1 Cor 10:3 change wording 
1 Cor 10:3 change wording by adding "supernatural" to "manna."
 2016-07-13 18:12:22 -04:00
Hanker10 d173bac757 1 Cor 9:22 change wording for clarity 
1 Cor 9:22 change wording for clarity
 2016-07-13 16:48:30 -04:00
Hanker10 361812bea1 1 Cor 9:19 change wording for clarity 
1 Cor 9:19 change wording for clarity
 2016-07-13 16:44:47 -04:00
Hanker10 ca45c969d5 1 Cor 9:16 change wording for clarity 
1 Cor 9:16 change wording for clarity
 2016-07-13 16:41:59 -04:00
Hanker10 d2ceca9836 1 Cor 9:15 change wording for clarity 
1 Cor 9:15 change wording "money" to "any of these things" because the rights Paul could have claimed go beyond the monetary and other changes for clarity
 2016-07-13 16:40:23 -04:00
Hanker10 83ddca4b73 1 Cor 9:10 cut extra wording 
1 Cor 9:10 cut extra wording at the end, ", just like an an apostle over his church" since this is not at all in the text. Besides, it gives the idea that apostles have churches like pastors, but apostles are sent out, pastors stay.
 2016-07-13 16:32:36 -04:00
Hanker10 4d1454350f 1 Cor 9:9 add missing word 
1 Cor 9:9 add missing word
 2016-07-13 16:30:08 -04:00
Hanker10 463f4fcf0a 1 Cor 9:5 change wording 
1 Cor 9:5 change wording to include missing ideas from the original
 2016-07-13 16:24:24 -04:00
Hanker10 58cd312c16 1 Cor 9:3 change wording 
1 Cor 9:3 change wording for clarity
 2016-07-13 16:23:00 -04:00
Hanker10 410f926034 1 Cor 8:2 improve wording 
1 Cor 8:2 improve wording
 2016-07-13 13:38:11 -04:00
Hanker10 d86ec39351 1 Cor 7:36 improve wording 
1 Cor 7:36 improve wording
 2016-07-13 13:32:22 -04:00
Hanker10 d93ff11a0b 1 Cor 7:35 improve wording 
1 Cor 7:35 improve wording
 2016-07-13 13:31:11 -04:00
Hanker10 412b480445 1 Cor 7:34 change wording 
1 Cor 7:34 change wording to keep the ideas closer to the original
 2016-07-13 13:28:47 -04:00
Hanker10 053c7eb3a8 1 Cor 7:34 change "girls" to "young ladies" 
1 Cor 7:34 change "girls" to "young ladies"
 2016-07-13 13:24:49 -04:00
Hanker10 44a4ca5dd5 1 Cor 7:33 change "day to day" to "ordinary" 
1 Cor 7:33 change "day to day" to "ordinary"
 2016-07-13 13:22:07 -04:00
Hanker10 7764530cfb 1 Cor 7:30 change "shed a tear" 
1 Cor 7:30 change "shed a tear" to what you see because it is an idiom that could be unfamiliar to many. Also, dropped "or in their hearts" after "joy on their faces" because this is added. Also, "they wanted" after "to buy something." These are all additions that qualify the ideas too far.
 2016-07-13 13:18:23 -04:00
Hanker10 9ce09929d4 1 Cor 7:21 change word "buy" to "gain" 
1 Cor 7:21 change word "buy" to "gain" since not all slaves had to purchase their freedom and this idea is not in the original
 2016-07-13 12:55:30 -04:00
Hanker10 107391498f 1 Cor 7:11 drop last sentence 
1 Cor 7:11 drop last sentence, "These are the commands of the Lord." since this is not in the original and is repeated from verse 10 unnecessarily.
 2016-07-13 12:43:08 -04:00
Hanker10 df0db16a31 1 Cor 7:6 change wording 
1 Cor 7:6 change wording to include the concept of concession (as in ULB)
 2016-07-13 12:39:21 -04:00
Hanker10 228ebbefa9 1 Cor 6:13 change wording 
1 Cor 6:13 change wording: "person" is too broad a term to represent "stomach."
 2016-07-13 10:32:16 -04:00
Hanker10 b81aff5ce9 1 Cor 6:12 correct faulty wording 
1 Cor 6:12 correct faulty wording
 2016-07-13 10:23:42 -04:00
Hanker10 e248c2a714 1 Cor 6:10 change wording about the kingdom 
1 Cor 6:10 change wording about the kingdom
 2016-07-13 10:20:58 -04:00
Hanker10 4ffcbb6348 1 Cor 6:9 change wording about the kingdom 
1 Cor 6:9 change wording about the kingdom
 2016-07-13 10:17:12 -04:00
Hanker10 0f17ab3cf8 1 Cor 6:5 change wording 
1 Cor 6:5 change wording to include the idea of shaming
 2016-07-13 10:08:42 -04:00
Hanker10 7d2631d626 1 Cor 6:1 change wording 
1 Cor 6:1 change wording to include the idea of "daring to" since their practice violated the sanctity of the body of believers
 2016-07-13 10:00:34 -04:00
Henry Whitney 1f33510e85 extra empty paras 2016-07-13 09:30:12 -04:00
Hanker10 fb678a8761 1 Cor 5:10 change words for clarity 
1 Cor 5:10 change words for clarity
 2016-07-12 21:33:58 -04:00
Hanker10 9b04192d61 1 Cor 5:9 change word for clarity 
1 Cor 5:9 change word for clarity: "be with" becomes "keep company with"
 2016-07-12 21:28:43 -04:00
Hanker10 3131be8755 1 Cor 5:7 change word for clarity 
1 Cor 5:7 change word for clarity: "affect" becomes "infect"
 2016-07-12 21:26:55 -04:00
Hanker10 0fe2f94a5c 1 Cor 5:5 add 2 phrases for clarity 
1 Cor 5:5 add 2 phrases for clarity
 2016-07-12 21:24:58 -04:00
Hanker10 0d7361ece1 1 Cor 4:21 change one word 
1 Cor 4:21 change one word: "rod" so that the meaning comes out better
 2016-07-12 17:22:42 -04:00
Hanker10 88001c8b9a 1 Cor 4:7 correct wrong noun number 
1 Cor 4:7 correct wrong noun number
 2016-07-12 17:17:17 -04:00
Hanker10 2a4b1db682 1 Cor 4:6 correct bad wording 
1 Cor 4:6 correct bad wording
 2016-07-12 17:15:33 -04:00
Hanker10 7be4104d54 1 Cor 4:3 change wording 
1 Cor 4:3 change wording. Paul does not say he is not able to judge himself. He does not bother judging himself.
 2016-07-12 17:12:05 -04:00
Hanker10 f160bd67ce 1 Cor 3:13 change wording 
1 Cor 3:13 change wording, "how hard we worked for him" to what you see.
 2016-07-12 16:54:07 -04:00
Hanker10 4b3ee1d0dd 1 Cor 3:10 change wording 
1 Cor 3:10 change wording to correct idea about Paul's giftedness.
 2016-07-12 16:50:44 -04:00
Henry Whitney 828a4fd1f2 typo 2016-07-12 16:43:35 -04:00
Henry Whitney ab1a8ca559 typo 2016-07-12 16:43:35 -04:00
Hanker10 b29e30e7dd 1 Cor 3:4 change wording 
1 Cor 3:4 change wording: "tearing the church into pieces" is an assumption here. This is probably true, but Paul is working up to this evaluation of the Corinthians. It is too early to let that cat out of the bag here.
 2016-07-12 15:57:30 -04:00
Hanker10 c1ceab7596 1 Cor 3:2 change "meat" to "solid food" 
1 Cor 3:2 change "meat" to "solid food"
 2016-07-12 15:53:39 -04:00
Hanker10 eccbb0a764 1 Cor 2:15 change one word 
1 Cor 2:15 change one word: "judgment" to "evaluate" since this will avoid the connotation (at least for English speakers) of patronizing dominance over others.
 2016-07-12 15:50:30 -04:00
Hanker10 45b66a3ef9 1 Cor 2:3 change wording 
1 Cor 2:3 change wording since there is no indication the weakness was physical. There is also no indication that Paul's trembling was because of enemies. Many say it was because of the awesome  responsibility he felt weighing on him and/or because he had just come from Athens where his presentation bombed.
 2016-07-12 15:12:16 -04:00
Henry Whitney 54279cf480 κοπιαω has element of difficulty absent in UDB 2016-07-12 14:17:49 -04:00
Henry Whitney 3f2d3b6613 resolved ambiguity of "look" 2016-07-12 14:16:37 -04:00
Hanker10 6c66e17fcb 1 Cor 1:25 change confusing wording 
1 Cor 1:25 change confusing wording. God is not foolish or weak but appears so to the worldly.
 2016-07-12 13:57:32 -04:00
Hanker10 aa98f27228 1 Cor 1:18 change "know" to "understand" 
1 Cor 1:18 change "know" to "understand"
 2016-07-12 13:51:33 -04:00
Hanker10 b24ab0ccef 1 Cor 1:17 confusing structure changed 
1 Cor 1:17 confusing structure changed
 2016-07-12 13:49:51 -04:00
Hanker10 8793409dce 1 Cor 1:10 change wording 
1 Cor 1:10 change wording. "this" to "your" since there is no prior reference to what the argument is.
 2016-07-12 13:36:54 -04:00
Hanker10 36ee701aa5 1 Cor 1:9 change wording 
1 Cor 1:9 change wording to avoid the connotation that God's keeping of the promise is only in the future. The original is a statement of fact.
 2016-07-12 13:32:29 -04:00
Hanker10 c781d3c30a 1 Cor 1:7 change wording 
1 Cor 1:7 change wording to avoid the connotation that
 2016-07-12 13:28:07 -04:00
Hanker10 c488916e01 1 Cor 1:6 change wording 
1 Cor 1:6 change wording to avoid the idea that the confirmation was done by the Corinthians
 2016-07-12 13:23:01 -04:00
Hanker10 f29116fbe7 1 Cor 1:5 change wording 
1 Cor 1:5 change wording at the end of the verse. "to speak his truth and to know God" is too restrictive. The speech and the knowledge are general, not just theological.
 2016-07-12 10:49:12 -04:00
Henry Whitney 2e2e55f7f6 corrected correction 2016-07-11 16:45:26 -04:00
Henry Whitney 75771b7f2c removed passive 2016-07-11 16:45:04 -04:00
Henry Whitney f6f427fa00 3:21-22 clarification 2016-07-11 16:20:54 -04:00
Henry Whitney 62b8179b53 3:18-19 cleanup 2016-07-11 15:26:40 -04:00
Henry Whitney ccb4d3a6b9 zapped bad commas 2016-07-11 15:22:29 -04:00
Henry Whitney 7a4171025d 3:15 made complete sentence 2016-07-11 15:19:26 -04:00
Henry Whitney bd9f6e6b98 3:14-15 explicating logic 2016-07-11 15:17:22 -04:00
Henry Whitney 5988458b9e building materials 2016-07-11 14:30:55 -04:00
Henry Whitney c2158424e7 the "building" is not a "dwelling" 2016-07-11 12:53:04 -04:00
Henry Whitney 6097f7a528 concretized "dwelling" 2016-07-11 12:49:52 -04:00
Henry Whitney bc950793f1 connectors 2016-07-11 12:35:53 -04:00
Henry Whitney 370db91ffc smoothed out clauses 2016-07-11 12:35:53 -04:00
Henry Whitney d4d6f599de more concrete vocabulary 2016-07-11 11:59:14 -04:00
Henry Whitney 0e1c52d7a8 "of glory" modifies "lord" rather than telling what people would do 2016-07-11 11:59:14 -04:00
Henry Whitney 5078809e1c Attempted de-figurativization 2016-07-11 10:24:00 -04:00
Henry Whitney a496fe9cc9 2:3 Restructured to remove awkwardness 2016-07-11 09:56:33 -04:00
Henry Whitney 017b4d00f2 removed comma splice 2016-07-08 16:47:51 -04:00
Henry Whitney 15d85fed92 spurious comma 2016-07-08 16:40:43 -04:00
Henry Whitney 060a05f383 spurious comma 2016-07-08 16:40:43 -04:00
Henry Whitney 29207ff4a2 1:27 smoothed out grammar 2016-07-08 16:15:34 -04:00
Henry Whitney 9e413fd5b3 1:24 restored TFT 
To say that "Christ is his power and the [his?] wisdom" is highly
abstract.
 2016-07-08 15:52:51 -04:00
Henry Whitney ebd6cd4888 1:20 clarification 2016-07-08 15:21:27 -04:00
Henry Whitney ae987df147 1:17 clarification 2016-07-08 15:01:28 -04:00
Henry Whitney 6eb86aa978 zapped double spaces 2016-07-08 14:57:38 -04:00
Henry Whitney 12109f4bb8 comma 
The comma denotes that Paul can say that he gives thanks because of the
grace. No comma denotes that the grace is the reason he gives thanks.
 2016-07-08 13:55:07 -04:00
Henry Whitney 597f5392b3 stray line 2016-07-08 13:53:40 -04:00
Henry Whitney 267526185c corrected misspelling 2016-07-08 13:43:38 -04:00
Henry Whitney a7eb45cd10 specified both valences of "write" 2016-07-08 13:29:24 -04:00