Ch 7-8 edits/corrections

22-SNG.usfm

@@ -592,7 +592,7 @@
 \v 3 Your breasts are as delicate as two young twin deer.
 \q1
 \v 4 Your neck is like a tower made of ivory.
-\q1 Your eyes sparkle the pools in the city of Heshbon,
+\q1 Your eyes sparkle like the pools in the city of Heshbon
 \q2 near the Bath Rabbim Gate.
 \q1 Your nose is long, like the tower in Lebanon
 \q2 that faces Damascus.
@@ -612,7 +612,7 @@
 \q2 and your breasts are like grape clusters.
 \q1
 \v 8 I said to myself, "I will climb that palm tree
-\q2 and take hold of those clusters of dates."
+\q2 and take hold of those clusters."
 \q1 I want your breasts to be also like clusters of grapes that I can feel;
 \q2 I want your breath to be like the sweet fragrance of apricots.
 
@@ -628,7 +628,7 @@
 \v 10 I belong to the man who loves me,
 \q2 and he desires me.
 \q1
-\v 11 You who love me, let us go to the countryside,
+\v 11 You who love me, let us go to the countryside
 \q2 and sleep in a village somewhere.
 
 \s5
@@ -686,7 +686,7 @@
 \s5
 \q1
 \v 6 Keep me close to you,
-\q2 like a seal on your heart,
+\q2 like a seal on your heart
 \q1 or like a bracelet on your arm.
 \q1 Our love for each other is as powerful as death;
 \q2 it is as strong as the grave.
@@ -701,7 +701,7 @@
 \q2 she would refuse.
 
 \s5
-\s2 Brothers speaking among themselves
+\s2 The woman's brothers speaking among themselves
 \q1
 \v 8 We have a younger sister,
 \q2 and her breasts are not large yet.
@@ -736,9 +736,9 @@
 \s5
 \s2 The woman's lover speaking to her
 \q1
-\v 13 You are staying in the gardens,
-\q2 my friends are listening to your voice;
-\q2 so allow me to hear it, too!
+\v 13 You are staying in the gardens;
+\q2 my friends are listening to your voice,
+\q2 so allow me to hear it also!
 
 \s5
 \s2 The woman speaking to her lover