diff --git a/07/09.txt b/07/09.txt index c1d2f97..a354054 100644 --- a/07/09.txt +++ b/07/09.txt @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ [ { - "title": "概览", - "body": "情人继续描述他想和他所爱的人做什么。" + "title": "概览:", + "body": "爱人继续描述他想和他所爱的人做什么。" }, { "title": "你的口如上好的酒", @@ -9,10 +9,10 @@ }, { "title": "为我的良人下咽舒畅", - "body": "“对于我爱的人来说,一切都很流畅。”情人喜欢女人温柔的吻。" + "body": "“对于我爱的人来说,一切都很流畅。”爱人喜欢女子温柔的吻。" }, { "title": "流入睡觉人的嘴中。", - "body": "“流过我的嘴唇和牙齿”或者“滑过我们的嘴唇和牙齿”。" + "body": "“流过我的嘴唇和牙齿” 或“滑过我们的嘴唇和牙齿”。" } ] \ No newline at end of file diff --git a/07/10.txt b/07/10.txt index 2392790..e8e6e1c 100644 --- a/07/10.txt +++ b/07/10.txt @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ [ { "title": "我属我的良人", - "body": "参照6:2的翻译" + "body": "见6:2节的注释翻译。" }, { "title": "他也恋慕我", diff --git a/07/12.txt b/07/12.txt index a838224..a55ca72 100644 --- a/07/12.txt +++ b/07/12.txt @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ [ { - "title": "概览", - "body": "女人继续和她的爱人说话。" + "title": "概览:", + "body": "女子继续和她的爱人说话。" }, { "title": "早晨起来", diff --git a/07/13.txt b/07/13.txt index 13bed24..db34bc4 100644 --- a/07/13.txt +++ b/07/13.txt @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ [ { - "title": "概览", - "body": "女人继续和她的爱人说话。" + "title": "概览:", + "body": "女子继续和她的爱人说话。" }, { "title": "风茄",