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2020-01-10 11:38:50 +08:00 · 2020-01-10 11:38:50 +08:00 · 1ae4133b32
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--- a/04/01.txt
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 [
 	{
-		"title": "概览",
+		"title": "概览：",
 		"body": "参: writing_poetry 和 figs_parallelism"
 	},
 	{
 		"title": "你甚美丽！你的眼在帕子内好像鸽子眼",
-		"body": "参照1:15的翻译"
+		"body": "见1:15节的注释翻译。"
 	},
 	{
 		"title": "你的头发如同山羊群卧在 基列山旁",
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 		"body": "参照4:9的翻译"
 	},
 	{
-		"title": "是关锁的园",
+		"title": "乃是关锁的园",
 		"body": "“是一个锁着的花园。”情人把女人比作上锁的花园，因为她只属于他，只有他才能享受她。他也可能会说，她仍然是一个处女，他还没有亲近。(参: figs_metaphor 和 figs_euphemism)"
 	},
 	{