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1297 Commits

Author SHA1 Message Date
Hanker10 8f2de700d5 Lamentations 5:11 changed wording
Lamentations 5:11 changed "rape" to "violated" to follow discussion suggestion, Hebrew wording and guidelines.
2016-05-13 13:30:21 -04:00
Hanker10 0034c422f3 Joshua 6:8 put in sentence separation
Joshua 6:8 put in sentence separation between "ram's horns before Yahweh, as they advanced..."
2016-05-13 13:23:28 -04:00
Hanker10 c2144ec811 Jeremiah 13:22 change wording
Jeremiah 13:22 change wording from "your skirts are raised up and you have been raped." Change "raped" to "violated" following discussion suggestion and a variety of English translations and the meaning of the Hebrew is not specifically "rape" (there is no single word in Hebrew for "rape").
2016-05-13 13:03:11 -04:00
Hanker10 29b2bb2717 Jeremiah 41:4 change wording
Jeremiah 41:4 changed "Then it was the second day after killing Gedaliah" to as you see to follow suggestion in discussion.
2016-05-13 12:52:25 -04:00
Hanker10 93dd22c30b Isaiah 47:8 changed one word
Isaiah 47:8 changed "you voluptuous one who sits securely," to as you see now following the suggestion in the notes which I also changed for consistency.
2016-05-13 12:41:11 -04:00
pohlig 41e64dbe55 Update 03.usfm 2016-05-13 12:31:13 -04:00
hharrissWA 0f16181127 Update 04.usfm 2016-05-13 10:44:14 -05:00
Tom Warren e3a544a40f Quotations on OT quote vs 27 2016-05-13 11:27:40 -04:00
Tom Warren 46645beb07 Update 02.usfm 2016-05-13 11:26:05 -04:00
hharrissWA e8012bfa3d Update 03.usfm 2016-05-13 10:22:37 -05:00
Tom Warren 4d79c8a39f Update 02.usfm 2016-05-13 11:10:29 -04:00
Tom Warren 20c9798ad5 Update 02.usfm 2016-05-13 11:09:44 -04:00
Tom Warren e1fd377afc Update 02.usfm 2016-05-13 11:08:13 -04:00
Tom Warren 51b56f6f9b Space marker 2016-05-13 11:06:48 -04:00
hharrissWA fe9c89df08 Update 23.usfm 2016-05-13 10:06:23 -05:00
Tom Warren 126ec29f76 Vs 12 clarifying relation of Shealtiel to Zerub...
Shealtiel was the uncle of Zerubbabel (and so is called "ancestor") where "father" means ancestor
2016-05-13 11:02:42 -04:00
Tom Warren c9ed0be1dc Farther, not further vs 14 2016-05-13 10:43:02 -04:00
Tom Warren c877f1a305 Quotation added to verse 7 2016-05-13 10:28:02 -04:00
Tom Warren fb65952d36 17 refused
not "was not willing"
2016-05-13 10:16:31 -04:00
Tom Warren 31a2e61754 Vs 10
Belonged, not belong ....
2016-05-13 10:11:37 -04:00
hharrissWA 1f05c1f5f0 Update 02.usfm 2016-05-13 09:11:13 -05:00
hharrissWA 6825b06c8c Update 02.usfm 2016-05-13 09:09:43 -05:00
hharrissWA aac2c7e8f1 Update 02.usfm 2016-05-13 09:06:11 -05:00
hharrissWA ad258a8eb7 Update 02.usfm 2016-05-13 09:04:14 -05:00
Tom Warren 7fd3740cb0 Jos 13:15
USFM marker
2016-05-13 08:48:06 -04:00
Tom Warren 55fee9f63a Update 13.usfm 2016-05-13 08:44:30 -04:00
Tom Warren d43178240d Vs 29, removed "obscure language"
Reworked acc to Gk Txt.
2016-05-13 07:57:07 -04:00
Tom Warren e12d7ee034 Vs 30
Rewording for clarity and to be English.
2016-05-13 07:54:10 -04:00
Tom Warren fb817248e8 Update 08.usfm 2016-05-13 07:48:37 -04:00
Tom Warren bc6e747f72 Update 08.usfm 2016-05-13 07:47:55 -04:00
Tom Warren 1d9b950c8f Middle of the group
not "in their midst" archaic.
2016-05-13 07:47:08 -04:00
Tom Warren 5f343b410a Closed quote Jn 7:8 2016-05-13 07:41:32 -04:00
Tom Warren 79f0ad89cf 5:10, 15, and 16, Jewish leaders changed to Jews
Following Greek text. 
UDB has more on it.
2016-05-13 07:36:09 -04:00
Tom Warren 8168c6d837 Update 04.usfm 2016-05-13 07:33:18 -04:00
Tom Warren 79c0263389 Vs 14
removed Jewish leaders. It is clear who is in mind. UDB has it.
2016-05-13 07:32:47 -04:00
Tom Warren aad77d866b Jewish leader changed to Jews JN 6:41
Following the Greek.
Looking to review UDB.
2016-05-13 07:24:50 -04:00
Tom Warren 1b85a4972f Vs 27, quote mark added 2016-05-13 07:22:22 -04:00
Tom Warren df23d22f44 Update 05.usfm 2016-05-13 07:19:46 -04:00
Tom Warren 95a65ef970 Vs 25 made more clear
Following the Greek, taking out UDBishness.
2016-05-13 07:17:58 -04:00
Tom Warren 2c5a7eeeac Vs 3 perfect to blameless 2016-05-13 07:04:06 -04:00
Tom Warren df6a469202 Vs 4 perfect to blameless 2016-05-13 07:03:17 -04:00
Tom Warren 865b90cd47 Vss 21 22 perfect to blameless 2016-05-13 07:02:24 -04:00
Tom Warren 1dfc3b07d4 Vs 20 perfect to blameless 2016-05-13 07:01:11 -04:00
Tom Warren d03bf81e52 Update 02.usfm 2016-05-13 06:54:02 -04:00
Tom Warren 3da8c9f527 Vs 3 perfect to blameless
Perfect, here would be innocent or without blame. Not perfect in an ontological sense.
2016-05-13 06:53:44 -04:00
Tom Warren ccd5886e74 Poetic
Vs 3 had caps of poetry, which we do not use.
2016-05-13 06:47:02 -04:00
Tom Warren 850c7af91b Vs 18, reworked for clarity 2016-05-13 06:27:49 -04:00
Tom Warren 0f0216b7ad Testifying
Preserving the Gk, μαρτυρούσης and not simply saying, "she said." She bore witness, she was testifying...
2016-05-13 05:56:14 -04:00
Tom Warren fae8635994 oun (GK) in vs 5
The Gk oun, implies rationale for a decision, therefore, or so. The ULB had "then" which did not fit.
2016-05-13 05:48:42 -04:00
Henry Whitney 043aaa2b1b Suggestions from Carol Moyer Jhn 04 2016-05-13 07:59:32 +01:00