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Hanker10 5d61b6805a Mt 24:28 clarify wording
Mt 24:28 clarify wording
2016-07-01 13:37:13 -04:00
Hanker10 9605f31de0 Mt 24:23-24 reworded to restore verse numbering
Mt 24:23-24 reworded to restore verse numbering. Changed ""At that time people will appear who will say that they are me, the Christ, or that they are true prophets from God. They will perform many kinds of miracles and amazing things, in order to deceive people. They will even try to deceive you people whom God has chosen. So at that time, if someone says to you, 'Look, here is the Christ!' or if someone says, 'There is the Christ!' do not believe it!" to what you see.
2016-07-01 13:33:28 -04:00
Hanker10 d640debb34 Mt 24:14 changed wording about the kingdom
Mt 24:14 changed wording about the kingdom from: "about how God is starting to rule over people in every part of the world" to what you see to avoid the idea that God's rule is limited to just starting (not implied in the text) or that it only extends to humans.
2016-07-01 13:25:49 -04:00
Hanker10 b48027902b Mt 23:25 typo cut extra "on" and more
Mt 23:25 typo cut extra "on." Also, cut ", food and drink " in the last clause since it is redundant. Also, cut the word "more" before "food and drink" since this is assumed and the concomitant "than you will ever need."
2016-07-01 13:02:59 -04:00
Hanker10 a879786222 Mt. 23:19 cut "to use"
Mt. 23:19 cut "to use" at end of verse for same reason as in verse 17.
2016-07-01 12:33:32 -04:00
Hanker10 075f1961f0 Mt 23:17 cut "to use"
Mt 23:17 cut "to use" since "dedication" does not imply use except as suggesting glory and honor. To say "to use" implies God will somehow manipulate it.
2016-07-01 12:11:34 -04:00
Hanker10 91c6ffe0c1 Mt 23:13 cut redundant wording
Mt 23:13 cut redundant wording in the last two sentences. This did read: "You are like men who close a gate so that others cannot enter God's city. You yourselves do not want to go in, and you keep others from entering, too." I cut both sentences because this added a simile not in the original and the redundancy could confuse the MTTs.
2016-07-01 12:06:18 -04:00
Hanker10 ffbf6452d0 Mt 23:13 changed wording about kingdom
Mt 23:13 changed wording about kingdom from: "because you keep people from accepting him to rule over them." to what you see. I restored the word "heaven" since this is an important concept in Matthew that should not be lost. The rule of heaven includes Jesus, the Christ, as ruler and as God which is part of Matthew's distinct message compared to the other gospels.
2016-07-01 12:00:33 -04:00
Hanker10 9ff9929533 Mt 23:13 cut narrative introduction
Mt 23:13 cut narrative introduction since this is explained in the notes and could lead MTTs to consider this as scripture
2016-07-01 11:42:12 -04:00
Hanker10 2ef2c129fa Mt 23:10 cut personal reference
Mt 23:10 cut personal reference for Jesus as the Christ since Jesus does not refer to himself this way until after the resurrection except by allusion.
2016-07-01 11:33:06 -04:00
pohlig b6931bf7c9 Update 11.usfm 2016-06-30 11:26:35 -04:00
pohlig a3902fab73 Update 08.usfm 2016-06-30 10:59:05 -04:00
pohlig d040b1b027 Update 08.usfm 2016-06-30 10:57:17 -04:00
pohlig c8b07a1ec0 Update 08.usfm 2016-06-30 10:54:03 -04:00
pohlig 5119947dbb Update 06.usfm 2016-06-30 10:51:31 -04:00
pohlig 68a7b98dd1 Update 06.usfm 2016-06-30 10:45:31 -04:00
pohlig 7fc144ad14 Update 06.usfm 2016-06-30 10:43:59 -04:00
Hanker10 6fb4bd7b4a Matt 22:25 cut extra wording
Matt 22:25 cut extra intro word, "Well,"  and "near us" which is not in the text nor needed for the narrative flow.
2016-06-28 21:55:14 -04:00
Hanker10 4a03495ae1 Matt 22:23-24 cut extra wording
Matt 22:23-24 cut extra wording, "They wanted to ask Jesus a question.
\v 24 They said to him," to what you see.
2016-06-28 21:51:08 -04:00
Hanker10 dbd72b88ad Matthew 22:16 cut out a lot
Matthew 22:16 cut out a lot of the material already in the notes that serves here as background information and is not in the narrative text. ", who thought that the Israelites should pay only the tax that the Jewish authorities required them to pay. They also sent some members of the party that supported King Herod. The members of that party thought that the Israelites should pay only the tax that the Roman government required them to pay."
Also, "even if it is an important person who does not like what you teach" to what you see.
2016-06-28 21:46:47 -04:00
Hanker10 549fe2bfd4 Matt 22:3 change wording
Matt 22:3 change wording "The servants went and told the people that." to what you see.
2016-06-28 21:36:49 -04:00
Hanker10 c200286147 Matt 21:43 cut extra clause
Matt 21:43 cut extra clause, "So, because you reject me, I am going to tell you this:" to make it as you see. Also changed the tense of the main verb to the present continuative.
2016-06-28 21:12:58 -04:00
Hanker10 5b103ec639 Matt 21:42 cut extra clause
Matt 21:42 cut extra clause, "That is right, so" This is not in the text, not needed for the narrative flow and gives the impression that Jesus commended the rulers.
2016-06-28 21:08:21 -04:00
Hanker10 56a1be1690 Matt 21:31 change wording about the kingdom
Matt 21:31 change wording about the kingdom
2016-06-28 21:02:18 -04:00
Hanker10 6d8de1ef67 Matt 21:28 cut intro clause
Matt 21:28 cut intro clause "Then Jesus said to the chief priests and elders," This is extra, not in the text and not needed for the narrative.
2016-06-28 20:51:49 -04:00
Hanker10 73b0c22f48 Matt 21:27 change wording
Matt 21:27 change wording. The word "permission" is not proper to render εχουσια. It means "authority" or "right."
2016-06-28 20:44:11 -04:00
Hanker10 1853491673 Matt 21:20 change wording
Matt 21:20 change wording, "We are astonished that" since this just repeats the introductory clause "They were astonished and said..." Also, the quote becomes a question which it is in the Greek NA28.
2016-06-28 20:38:39 -04:00
Hanker10 503394889a Matt 21:19 change wording
Matt 21:19 change wording, "immediately started to dry up." changed to what you see. There is no textual indication of "started to" but only that the tree did dry up immediately.
2016-06-28 20:33:41 -04:00
Hanker10 51eb7b7344 Matt 21:16 cut excess wording
Matt 21:16 cut excess wording, "They thought that Jesus should not be allowing the children to say that, so " not in the text and covered in the notes. Also changed "children" to "people" because all the people are included in the Greek "these" used as a pronominal adjective.
2016-06-28 16:24:05 -04:00
Hanker10 30d736f845 Matt 21:15 cut excess wording
Matt 21:15 cut excess wording, "because they did not believe that Jesus was the Christ." This is not in the text and is interpretive. This is already in the notes.
2016-06-28 16:19:17 -04:00
Hanker10 411df26003 Update 21.usfm 2016-06-28 16:10:04 -04:00
Hanker10 dd6f969221 Matt 21:9 cut extra words
Matt 21:9 cut extra words "things like," and formatted the praise lines as a list.
2016-06-28 16:09:20 -04:00
Hanker10 1f6ce89eda Mat 21:8 cut last sentence
Mat 21:8 cut last sentence, " They did those things to honor Jesus." This is extra from the text and is included in the notes.
2016-06-28 16:05:36 -04:00
Hanker10 c1bdf3a5b8 Matthew 20:16 cut first clause
Matthew 20:16 cut the first clause: Then Jesus said to us, since this is not in the original and is explained in the notes.
2016-06-28 14:47:49 -04:00
Hanker10 44aba740e0 Matthew 19:1 change wording
Matthew 19:1 change wording from ""In order to illustrate how God rewards people, I will compare the way God begins to rule his people with what the owner of an estate did." to what you see. The wording did not reflect the original at all and tended to confuse the MTTs. And the concept of the kingdom is changed.
2016-06-28 14:41:00 -04:00
Hanker10 3c16189f5a Matthew 19:28 change wording
Matthew 19:28 change wording "my magnificent throne" to what you see. The idea is that the throne is not glorious, but Jesus' status and exaltation is glorious.
2016-06-28 11:52:53 -04:00
Hanker10 033c16402b Matthew 19:15 cut "and asked God"
Matthew 19:15 cut "and asked God" - not in the text at all and is an assumption that this included a prayer. Jesus had the authority to bless.
2016-06-28 11:23:15 -04:00
Hanker10 61e68f0f84 Matthew 19:14 change wording
Matthew 19:14 change wording of "When Jesus saw us scolding them, he said to us" to what you see.
2016-06-28 11:21:42 -04:00
Hanker10 0b4605f8ce Matthew 18:24 change wording
Matthew 18:24 change wording "who were brought " to what you see.
2016-06-28 11:10:13 -04:00
Hanker10 d716539553 Matthew 18:23 cut & rephrase
Matthew 18:23 cut & rephrase the opening sentence, "In order to illustrate why you should do this, I will tell you a parable." since this far too dynamic and would tend to confuse the MTTs rather than help.
Also, the next sentence, "That king told some of his servants that" changed to cut the wording that is too far from the original.
2016-06-28 11:06:05 -04:00
Hanker10 93d63863ca Matthew 18:22 cut extra clause
Matthew 18:22 cut extra clause "--there is no end to the number of times" since this is not at all in the original, is interpretive and is explained in the notes.
2016-06-28 10:04:14 -04:00
Hanker10 2f9950c819 Matthew 18:19 cut extra word
Matthew 18:19 cut extra two words "God" after "whatever you ask ... " since these are assumed and not necessary here. The next phrase, "my Father" says this adequately.
2016-06-28 10:00:54 -04:00
Hanker10 ab7fb63b79 Matthew 18:3 change wording
Matthew 18:3 change wording. Eliminate "the way you think" after "change" because this is not in the original and limits the concept from "turn" to a mental process. What Jesus means is a lot more than that and is stated implicitly and should not be limited.
2016-06-28 08:12:14 -04:00
Tom Warren 1318383041 eleven to Eleven 2016-06-28 00:15:43 -04:00
Tom Warren 7ea87fce88 Passover Celebration 2016-06-27 10:35:06 -04:00
Hanker10 dcec6b4760 Matthew 18:6 change pronouns
Matthew 18:6 change pronouns from "you" to "a person" to duplicate more closely the "whoever" of the original.
2016-06-26 21:51:17 -04:00
Tom Warren 04166d842b Mat 5:19 Tweaks 2016-06-26 07:27:04 -04:00
Tom Warren 20ff5f9c81 Mat 5:20
following the Greek text and keeping passive voices at bay
2016-06-26 07:23:11 -04:00
Tom Warren e3b3f7bfa6 Unclear made to be clear
Mat 5:18
2016-06-26 07:09:50 -04:00
Hanker10 c64a374fcb Matthew 16:26 cut "to God"
Matthew 16:26 cut "to God" because this is interpretation. The statement is meant to include anything a person will give to anyone for his life.
2016-06-25 16:12:10 -04:00